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I have to agree with America in the Top one. "Hu" - America. Though the comics are funny. I read a few others.

Another excellent chapter. I totally love Russ' inexperience in all things relationship, and his need to explore.

Excellent start to the story. I love Russell and Jacob. Looking forward to more chapters.

I treasure what I get as well. I know, I need to, work on leaving more comments, as I tend to hit the Like button more often than leave a comment. I do like the new Story Review system, which I used on @Graeme's "Temporary Dads" story. So which is better, getting a review for the story as a whole, or a comment on each chapter?

Excellent story! Reminds me of a Den/Arlo situation I was in. Really hit me in the feels.

Granted. You were fired from work, and now have all the time you want. I wish, these people would leave me alone.

I know this thread was mainly for the OP, but this is some great advice. I've been wondering on how to get more feedback from postings as well, and the suggestions and advice here seems to be what I need too. Question: Do you respond to comments left on your stories? I know I've tried to answer each one, and not sure if that is a Help or a Hurt.

Started reading this story around 11:00 pm at night, and instead of just one chapter, spent the whole night reading the story. The story is well written, flows well, and tells the journey of a Gay Couple, as they take care of the Nephews of one of them, after a horrible accident. The characters did come to life and became "real" as I read the story. Five stars, but would have done six if I could.

I have a few ideas, but tenterhooks weren't one of them. For now... However, thank you for reading, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

Thanks! Seems 2 of us missed that. Glad you liked the story.

So disappointed with the Capitals.

Thanks! I'm doing Character Profiles in my Blog, and the first one on Aeris is posted. Planning on doing one for Jules as well.

There is a thread of Hope, that I can confirm. Just remember the old saying, "It's always darkest, before the dawn."

Wait... what? Granted - the two of you have an Epic battle, with no clear winner. I wish I had the naked guy!

Not Granted - We want you here too much! I wish I wasn't distracted, and can finish watching this Game, and then do some writing.

Granted - but it only lasts for an hour, before the sunsets. I Wish for the Team that I want to win in Caps vrs Pens to cripple someone on the other team.

Granted - You now have Netflix, but you have no one to chill with. I wish I had someone to Chill with

My bad. I wrote a response yesterday, but must not have clicked the button to add the response. Well, I am happy you are enjoying the story, and the world that Aeris is based in. As I mentioned a couple of times now, this story is loosely based on my RPG adventures. In this installment, the last section, where Aeris gets kidnapped, actually happened to one of my Pen and Paper (PnP) characters. He would always get mixed up in something, and end up separated from the rest of the group. I hope you enjoy the next part, cause it's gonna be a doozy!

“How much longer do I have, doctor?” Marcus asked as he looked over to Doctor Morgan as he walked in. “Not much longer, just got a prostate exam to do for your physical, and then you can go back to your day,” the Doctor replied with a soothing tone. “Do we have to? You know I don’t like getting those.” “Unfortunately, yes; with both your Brother and Father developing Prostate Cancer, you’re at a much higher risk than normal. Your blood work, came back fine, and the MRI shows you’re c

This is a Cuban Style Black Bean, and White Rice recipe that I've made/had a few times. I got this from another forum, I used to frequent, and I hope you enjoy it as well. Ingredients: 2/3 cup chopped onion 2/3 cup chopped green bell pepper 1-1/4 tsp. chopped garlic 1 tsp. ground cumin 3/4 tsp. dried thyme leaves 1/4 tsp. crushed red pepper 3/4 bay leaf 2 tsp. olive oil 2/3 cup rice 10 ounces canned diced tomatoes 10 ounces canned black beans, rinsed and drained 1-1/3 cups water 2 tsp. apple cider vinegar 3/4 tsp. salt (optional) 1/4 tsp. black pepper Procedure: 1. Sauté onion, bell pepper, garlic, cumin, thyme, crushed red pepper, and bay leaf in olive oil until onion is tender, about 5 minutes. 2. Stir in remaining ingredients. Heat to boiling. Reduce heat and simmer, covered, until rice is tender, about 20 minutes. 3. Let stand 5 minutes before serving.

Granted - You're now an animated skeleton. I wish I had the motivation to work on my To Do List today.

Missed it as well for the Brackets, but I have high hopes that the Washington Capitals will beat the Pens in seven. As a Lightning Fan, I'm happy Boston and Toronto went out in the first round. Couldn't have happened to two better teams.

I might Co-op @Mikiesboy's Food Bytes thread, for some Coffee/Hot Chocolate goodness. LOL Granted - You grow 2 more arms, and 4 more lobes in your brain in order to process the commands to Type faster. However, Tech can't keep up with you, and you're just as slow. I wish Amazon had a Build-a-Boyfriend department.

I LOVE doing this! I have both powder, and syurpI use. Granted - It's been rescheduled for in twenty minutes. I wish I didn't have to get out of bed right now.

Quick Question. After we have the stories finished, edited, etc. do you want us sent to you, or post them in stories?