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  1. Brayon

    Beyond the Walls

    Brayon commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Beyond the Walls

    You're welcome. 🙂 I'll ask her the next time I see her.
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    Beyond the Walls

    Brayon commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Beyond the Walls

    Fantastic chapter, tim. I love the visuals in this one, and the tender moment between Stravor and Keter. The description of Hemothrance was perfect. I like how you incorporated the Fathril into this chapter as well, and it makes wanting to learn more about the living rock, a quest unto itself. Dayson and his revelations about himself being a witch and his lineage to Keter was a surprise. Loved it!
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    From Within

    Brayon commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in From Within

    When tim sent me the chapter to Beta Read, you had to pick my jaw off the floor for the plot-twist at the end. I had to re-read the entire last section a second time to see if I read it correctly. LOL. Another fantastic chapter. The description of the storm and trying to get to the temple painted very vivid pictures in my mind. The 'battle' at the end was vivid as well.
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    I need to thank @Mikiesboy for suggesting Google's "Keep Notes" app for the smartphone. It's been a lifesaver this week!
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    I personally liked 2010 better for the two movies. Never read any of the books. Sounds like you and Mike had a great time.
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    Into The Storm

    Brayon commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Into The Storm

    I'll say it again... Oh My F'ing God!!! That plot twist when Keter kills himself, to save Stravor from having to do it. I love it and this story is fantastic. This chapter like others have said, is a real rollercoaster of emotions. I love how Stravor fully acknowledges he loves Keter, tells him, and is willing to betray his god for the one that he loves.
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    New class started last Tuesday. Environmental Science. No public comments. Wish me luck. Sleep well, DIC'ers.
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    They do appeal to me, @comicfan. It's more of a time issue for me. But, these are added to the list.
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    My hands are recovering slowly, this go around. Just wanted to say hi, while I can still type, somewhat. Peace.
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    @Defiance19
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    In Winter

    Brayon commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in In Winter

    Another great poem, you've written, my brother. I can see the images these words paint, and it does make me ponder our natural world v. our technological one. Also, makes one think about what is really important.
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    You both will be in my prayers tonight too.
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    Sorry for the silence. My hands are killing me. 30,000 words in the last 2.5 weeks on 2 different papers for this class.
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    Thanks for letting us know, Mike. Give him a hug for me please.
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    Into The Valley

    Brayon commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Into The Valley

    This chapter stands out for me. It reminds me so much of the fantasy stories I grew up reading in Jr. High and High School. The scene with the stone giants is a classic, and resonated well. Fantastic all around.
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    Slipping into lurker mode for the foreseeable future.
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    Yeah, it has been a day from hell.
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    You made someone's day turn a 180. That is something to celebrate.
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    Tonight's Funny Meme, and somewhat how I'm feeling. EDIT: Wrong meme. Removed.
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    Right, room. I just didn't want to clog up tim's thread about his story with my planing Dungeons and Dragons.
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    I'm so tempted to grab my Neverwinter Nights cds, fire-up my laptop, log into the Avlis servers, and break out AJ, my Confounder of Forian. It's been a few years, since I played him.
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    Not headed to bed yet, still got many miles to go, before I can see my bed tonight. So I will bid everyone a Sweet Dreams, and Sleep Well when you head that way. Let me leave you with a quote I heard, that sums up my mood tonight.
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    A few weeks back, @MacGreg posted he left GA. I forget the reason why, if there was one given, but his profile now is FormerMember4. Haven't heard anything since then.
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    I've missed tim's word of the day, so here's one. Organon (or-ɡə-nän) Part of speech: noun Origin: Greek, late 16th century 1. A tool or instrument used to gain knowledge 2. A set of guiding principles for a particular science, philosophy, or discipline Examples of Organon in a sentence "The internet was my organon of choice when doing research for school." "The scientist abided by an organon of peer-reviewed documents, books, and studies to inform her work."
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    The heart is because I felt your poem is well written, and invoked a strong emotion in me. So it's showing how I feel about the poem itself. As for content, I would be a tear drop like the others, because it is sad. Getting ones emotions out is a good thing. You're right that lately there has been a lot of sadness and heartache. Hugs my brother.
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