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  1. Brayon
    Sleep well, miss molly.
  2. Brayon
    Sleep well, my Brother.
  3. Brayon
    Sleep well, rick.
  4. Brayon
    As long as it's not Bébé's Kids, all will be fine. LOL. We're hitting the grocery store tomorrow, so I'll be getting a few things.
  5. Brayon
    Sleep well, my Brother.
  6. Brayon
    Haven't been to the store yet to replace my stash. LOL. They've already drank the last of my chocolate milk mix. *sniffles* I need to get more Bunny Milk Powder.
  7. Brayon
    Yeah, things are quiet. Watching two little boys, while their parents are at work. Though I've threatened to give the 2y/o some coffee before they get picked up. I'm lurking GA, between reading about Psychoanalytical Theories.
  8. Brayon
    They're all unpublished right now, so they'll be some changes between now and publication. But, a few are staying like: Answers to Unasked Questions Smith/Turner v. The Commonwealth of Massachussetts Boston Days & Boston Nights You Can Never Go Back to Childhood
  9. Brayon
    Yeah, so far. Filling in plot holes, and tying up loose threads. So, I don't have glaring plot-holes like J.K. Rowling, that are so big you can drive a battleship through them.
  10. Brayon
    I think this is kind of interesting... Tampa Chronicles 1 - 3: Total Chapters: 14 Total Words: 68,932 Avg Words per Chapter: 4,923.71 Tampa Chronicles 4: Total Chapters (so far): 10 Total Words (so far): 43,986 Avg Words per Chapter (so far): 4,398.6
  11. Brayon
    Busy morning, so far. Fitness Center this morning. Finished Beta Reading a chapter for tim. Some research for a Psychology Paper. And now, reading over what I have written for Tampa Chronicles 4: True Family Always Has Your Back. I'm realizing just how much I suck at naming stories and chapters.
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    Discontent

    Brayon commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Discontent

    A very interesting poem, tim. It feels very timely for the current state of affairs with the younger generations. I think we protect them from the lions, because we don't want them to face the same hardships we go through. However, that is a detriment to them, as without adversity, one cannot grow, and we end up with those with an overinflated sense of entitlement.
  13. Brayon
    I will bid everyone a good eve, but I will be up late working on this assessment. Off the record, Freud was a sick bastard.
  14. Brayon
    Happy Birthday to the little one.
  15. Brayon
    The first time I read a chapter, it's for enjoyment, with the remaining read throughs, some up to 10 times, are the red pencil. I agree 100% with you, on someone trying to put their voice into your story, and hope I don't do that.
  16. Brayon
    @Geron Kees has some good SciFi stories. I'd recommend from his: And his series: https://gayauthors.org/stories/browse/series/doorways/ I would also recommend @Stellar and his SciFi stories as well. Such as: https://gayauthors.org/stories/browse/series/aspects-of-dawn/ @Mikiesboy started posting a Fantasy story today that is excellent. You already said you've read DKstories. GA owns the rights to his stories, so they are being reposted. @Cia and @Mann Ramblings each have a weekly serial on Wednesday which are good. There's a lot more authors with good SciFi/Fantasy stories, those are just a few of my favorites.
  17. Brayon
    You won't be disappointed.
  18. Brayon

    The Long Way Home

    Brayon commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in The Long Way Home

    Fantastic start to the story, my Brother. If I recall correctly, when I sent you the Beta Read chapter back, I mentioned I could run a D&D campaign based on what you have written so far. I still stand by that. There were several elements in this chapter that brought back memories in my gaming history.
  19. Brayon
    Sleep Well, Reader.
  20. Brayon
    Sleep well, my Brother.
  21. Brayon
    Sleep Well, my friend.
  22. Brayon
    I've had it. It's pretty good when done right.
  23. Brayon
    No, it is not. LOL. Maybe Disney after dark, in the hidden recesses where Cast Members go to fornicate, outside the prying eyes of the guests. Which, of course, innocent me would know nothing of. (Except for a four or five spots.)
  24. Brayon
    It's Disney music.
  25. Brayon
    It's not even 6:00 pm, and I'm already wanting to go to bed.
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