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I had a feeling that Vern may have forgotten his English language skills when he hit his head in the train accident, I am glad that he is ok.

What a charming little story.

Teddies give you the warm fuzzies. 😀

Oh wow Jeff is so like me, but I didn’t fancy my best friend. thanks for sharing their story.

I think Valentines is overrated the only ones that benefit are the florists who charge extortioniate amounts of money for flowers, restaurants, greeting card companies and hotels. Hopefully Mike can move on with his life now

Train journeys through Western Australia, I am looking forward to reading more of this story and the adventures of the Ashburton clan

Just a few typos, 4 last paragraph you say the Mr Holland? You also mention crossing Newcastle Street, their it should be there. 😁

He likes to keep us waiting in suspense. 😁

This seems like it’s going to be a very interesting story, will young Vern find a partner?

A great chapter, I can understand Jordan’s reluctance to spend time with his father, particularly if the man has shown little to no interest in his son since the divorce the man seems to have shirked his responsibilities to his family, which happens to often when couples divorce as there tends to be animosity towards the ex partner although some exes can get along with each other after divorce a lot can’t and that is where it is sad, I hope that the boys can actually live together in harmony. What was the opening paragraph about? They didn’t exchange Xmas presents?

I love my IPad as I can press on a word and it will look it up. 😀

I really enjoyed this chapter, poor little stevie weavie his mommy left his daddy for a woman, his dad must’ve been a lousy lay, he is so full of hate and anger that it’s not good for him.

If you click on someone’s name it goes to their profile page and it will give you the details that that person has added to it. 💋

Yay Noah and Jordan. Sebastard needs to mind his own business

Wow that airport scene was ☹️, long distance relationships can be difficult, but if they really want to be together they both need to make it happen, To live in Oz or USA is the difficult choice, they both need to figure this out and the sooner the better for both of them.

Thanks for writing this story. Paul has failed Craig by not getting him to see a counsellor after his mother was killed. Paul should have also seen a counsellor himself to not only help him deal with the loss of his wife, but to be a support for Craig and dealing with the loss of his second parent. I don’t think that putting Craig in jail is the right answer either because he seriously needs help to understand his actions as to why he did what he did to both Tania and Nick, he needs counselling and I doubt very much that he will get that in jail and after he is realised it maybe to late as he will have dwelled on what he has done for years. The world we live in still has a strong culture of toxic masculinity and that is destroying our men as a lot of men don’t talk about their issues as it is often seen as your being either weak or a wimp, instead of telling guys to toughen up, we need to be able to talk openly about things, instead of just filing it away and not be dealt with. I think that if more guys talk about themselves and seek help when they need it there maybe less rape, aggression and alcoholism. A lot of our issues come from ignorance and religious propaganda, religion and the guilt that is associated with it has a lot to answer for as it has created of lot of this mess that we are in and the sooner that people wake up to that fact the better off we will be.

Good to see an insight into both Alan and Matt. Thanks Thorn

I was going to read this but it looks like it was 6 years ago since the last chapter was posted, so I guess it won’t be finished?

Great chapter, can Mason and Ben become a couple? Both Rick and Jose are problems.

When do we get more chapters of this story Wes? Pretty please with sugar on top. 😁

Another great chapter, I think that the sex was hot. I think seb is going to cause problems as he has figured out that Noah and Jordan are a couple, some of Jordan’s teammates will start to suspect that too and Jordan may have issues with some of them because he is gay. Some of them will think that Jordan may want to get into their pants and will be checking out their junk when they are in the showers.

Look out for Sargent Major Jenn.

Jenn is carrying on like her and Jordan were dating for months, not just one date

A very thought provoking story, hats 🎩 off to you my friend

Thinking politicians, and I believe in the Easter bunny and the tooth fairy