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Three Months in the Summer
FormerMember4 commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in Three Months in the Summer
OMFG! How did those parents regress so much? Teddy has a chance to mend relationship with brother. New beginnings all around. I have to declare my fiction crush for Blake. Good friends hard to come by. He’s always been loyal and insightful. -
Sounds good! Hmm, palm ready! 😉
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This is a great article. There’s so much in the first kiss. For the story, and reader. You nailed the innocent first kiss. Kiss of an Angel... You were there to experience the anticipation, nervousness with Ariel and Tyler. Same with Tristan and Jessie in Jessie-101. The first kiss becomes a character. If not done right and true, total letdown.
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Great start! I’m definitely wanting to know more. It’s always nice to see another one of your stories.
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There is one, just not a reaction.
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You get more than just a thanks from me. You know I enjoy your stories. You have given me two very special stories. One with an HIV+ character. You also gave me a blind character. Both are me, it’s nice to have stories that really represent you.
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Interested to see where this goes. While there are bad fairies, not the norm. Curious to know why she killed her stepfather.
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LOL tim! You show your team the love.
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When you show appreciation for an author, it’s not just them you’re showing appreciation. Silent in background are the editors and beta readers. They devote their times to authors so the reader has a more enjoyable read.
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Authors and poets should be given appreciation. Readers sometimes don’t understand blood, sweat, and tears. Along with writers block. Writing is something we enjoy. Readers should appreciate those stories and chapters take time away from writers family. I try to comment on every chapter. Unless the comment is repeated for 8th time. I’m catching up from holidays. I review as soon as story ends now.
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Great chapter. Happy to see them heading to their new home and pack.
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Another great chapter Ace. Long road ahead. While they no doubt love each other, trust is a helluva thing to regain. Your instincts are to naturally protect yourself.
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This was the first chapter I could comment on. This section of book has had me HOT!! So much so I had to take a break. Well written J. I think the good pastor messed with wrong person. Billy is going to tumble school board and church like a house of cards. Ms. Winston has his personality pegged. He has the right intelligence and fire. He could use Brett’s father information to ally the Dr, Joey and his father. A chance for Paula to see her righteous, hypocrite of a pastor for what he really is.
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Chapter 22 Matters of the heart
FormerMember4 commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 22 Matters of the heart
As long as this chapter took, Michael is now an adult with family of his own. No seriously, a very good chapter with a wonderful guardian angel. I sense that Michael will be just fine. -
Absolutely depressing chapter first thing this morning. I need a therapy session now. My heart breaks for poor TJ. Very limited options when you have a worthless family. I hope he breaks the cycle and finds success and happiness.
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I don’t blame Teddy for his reactions. He is the one who has to be mature now, for both of them. That awful mistake by Ryder has frozen them both in that moment. No matter what happens. They need closure.
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So much time wasted and destroyed lives. Depression brings out the irrational. How much damage has he done to his body. Can Teddy begin to trust?
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I’m really enjoying the direction this is going. I wonder if Mateo flashes red for passion. Those Latin lovers... My deepest sympathies @Thirdly.
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Chapter 90 Caught With My Pants Down
FormerMember4 commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 90 Caught With My Pants Down
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I’m hurt! The feisty firecracker got married and didn’t invite me. You can see my mascara running down @Wesley8890 face. I’m happy that the Mason issue was pointed out to Jared. It’s clear that Mason has found his DADDY. They’re already playing house. Go get you some Jared!!
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Chapter 90 Caught With My Pants Down
FormerMember4 commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 90 Caught With My Pants Down
Robbie and Nathan do have to be more careful. It is annoying how everyone is only in Robbie’s business. I know Don and Sue are up to something. Those two twats are going to rank and file the children against them. -
Ok Ron, Bring it my man! I’m ready to be run through the emotional wash cycle...
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Off to an interesting start. Nothing is free in life. Will losing intelligence be worth it?
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Good chapter. Something tells me we have some depressing backstories for kids coming. Hopefully new additions with Levi and Lincoln.
