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Great choice!
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I have no doubt your mother brings you strength and inspiration lil brother! XOXO
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We're off to a bumpy start... Something tells me it's only gonna go down from here.
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Beautiful tim... I get being taught, fear, doubt the disappointment. Never doubt the love Mike has for you. Great Job lil brother! XOXO
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The story was a pleasure to read. I really ended up liking the journal format. You took a a character who looked despicable, and turned him into someone you cared about. Wanting to know what brought him to this point. This story signified that their is room for redemption, personal growth, forgiveness, and second chances. All effective without being preachy. Now; as for you Wolf... The candles, handcuffs... Hey there... I'm JP *batting eyelashes *
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Theirs some strong stuff here. However; I don't know if it's just too early... Theirs just too much together that it loses its effectiveness. I do enjoy your POV though.
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Flammable cravings... Oh, so combustible. Simple words with purposeful impact.
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I only have sex with same sex.
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The options aren't captioned. So I don't know. I'll bet I'm pretty gay!
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Happy New Year (Part II)
FormerMember4 commented on Rip Skor's story chapter in Happy New Year (Part II)
Great Chapter! The gaping hole was hilarious, and yes this has been a discussion between couples. -
I'm blind Sir. Can't help what my hand grabs onto... You won't mind... Will you Sir?
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Sunday! Coffee, chocolate croissant and CJ!
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*looking down* No need to borrow. I'll bring with me! 😉
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I'm happy I didn't disappoint Sir! As for making noise, I've been trained well. However; not opposed to your ball gag Sir!
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I commented on 1st page. You responded to all but me. I thought I was being disciplined Sir!
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I must have been a bad boy and disappointed @Carlos Hazday! I was dismissed... Ouch!
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This chapter tied up some loose ends. For them to really move forward. Alec showing he won't apologize or hide for his family is the first step. Dating seems the logical step. However; Liam has a very bad habit... One I have. Don't ANALYZE everything.
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Thank You Papi Carlos! This was a chapter closing up loose ends. I hope you decide to keep CJ and Aussie together. Nice to see that sort of love and respect. I'm on pins and needles over Rod's news. Last... Certainly not least. You know how to turn a guy on with motorcycle talk. Harley explaining the bike reved this motor... Look forward to the last chapter.
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Very Good Moggy! I agree with #4. The contrast between new and old. The imagery easily pictured! 🤗
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Happy Birthday Puppi! I'm offering a bag of Swedish Fish... Since they won't stop showing commercial. Yes, I'm sure they aren't really Swedish! 🤗
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What's worse about the story. He first didn't want to leave his church... They initially used him as a Token Gay to get his fans to convert to Mormonism.
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This was a great chapter. Each one finds more change. I made one observation with Rory that is quite interesting. While Chris had always been a follower. He did show dominance when he was connected to Michael. Their were two very clear instances that Chris was being submissive to Rory in this chapter. I don't know if I see it because that's my natural role. Interesting anyways. This chapter also showed the romantic in @WolfM
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Let the desires be free! Enjoy a SPICY life!
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Remember... if I don't give up. You Don't! I won't give up! Love Ya, XOXO
