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I love the exchanging of presents with Danny's family. It wasn't the gifts exchanged, but the heartfelt words. A wonderful blessing to have a loving family. Danny seems to have had enough play time in his life. Accept everything Raymond is offering you and don't look back. Raymond is the perfect choice for a life partner. He has already achieved business success, played the field. Now all he wants is the Holy Grail.. A family and someone to grow old with.
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@Shadow086 covered it perfectly! Look forward to the next chapter.
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Wow... Tim! Your poems always provide such intense emotions. I respect how much you are willing to share. These words pack a punch!
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Its true... You sometimes have to hit rock bottom. In order for a true metamorphosis to begin. Chris made a very critical realisation in his journey. Michael was never his friend. This single piece of knowledge should help to move forward. I do believe that everyone makes mistakes. With mistakes comes wisdom. The things he is thinking and wanting are all positive. Chris could come out being a better man. With a lot to offer his pack. I wasn't sure how the journal aspect was going to work. However, Chris's character is a full dimensional character. Not one dimensional at all. Great Job!
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Chapter 21 A Day of Surprises
FormerMember4 commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 21 A Day of Surprises
You didn't disappoint Tim.. I feel spoiled, also getting Angel and Imp. I beg you, don't give that poor sweet boy a bad surgery. -
Good job.. I like the little playfulness at the end.
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Certainly wasn't expecting to see the mother die. It will be interesting to see how this molds him in future chapters.
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A great first chapter. I know that writing brings me peace. I hope this brings you therapy and some closure. I don't know how much fact you've used so far. However, I'm glad you made it to now.
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If Chris doesn't want to change. I've been fooled. He Made quite a huge admission. He wouldn't have done that if he wasn't remorseful. Their were things said in Part 1, about things they had done. However, I don't remember quite this much. Chris should thank his lucky stars. With Michael escaping, he won't be dragged into anymore of his sadistic crap. Michael wasn't a friend to anyone. He was too weak to show dominance. So, he used others to get a false sense of greatness.
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Its taken me all day to read this. I'm so proud of you. For me, I just want tomorrow to end. This poem shows your great strength. I've got a little secret. She's hella proud of you man. You've survived with a lion's heart. ❤️ JP
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I don't know how I missed the release of this chapter... However, now caught up. I continue to love this story. The idea of finding your soulmate at 4 is beautiful. I just love that you represent a teenage love story that isn't about selfish kids. That's usually what they are. Thank you for the positivity...
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Never disappointed Carlos... Great job my brother! CJ was lucky he wasn't hauled away in a body bag.. You never discuss a woman's weight or age! I like the mellow mood of this chapter. They really just chilled! I had fun learning more about Tank. Until you turned him into a bottomboy! Way to ruin a good body...
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Let's start with the positive. It was nice to see Bailey show his stuff... With Declan knowing. Daniel is no good. Handling a minors money while courting the mother. Probably only for monetary gain. Can we say disbarment. The mother should have her parental rights revoked for her atrocious acts. Abuse, too many to name. Then when Bailey is checked, and they see his cutting. Charge her ass with child neglect.
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These two have to have the absolute worst luck. Cindy at this point is just making me angry. Luke is far from being attached to her tit. Treat your son like the kind being he is. These guys could be out and be accepted, if it wasn't for Cindy. They are in a safe place with their friends. I can only hope that Luke has his fathers support when Broom Hilda finds out. I appreciate the role reversal. It was nice to see Luke with the strength and have Jackson vulnerable and unsure. Luke made the moves and assured Jackson.
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Another great journal entry. I appreciate that Chris accepts responsibility for his part. He really seems to analyze his part. It was clear in part 1, Michael was infatuated with Aidan. However, now I'm wondering about Chris... Could he possibly have screwed up so bad because he loved Michael. Keep up the great work. Really enjoying this new format.
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Very good... one editing error! Your blood work came back find. I think fine, not find.
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This I can so relate to. My mother lost her 2 year battle to lung cancer in 2014. I know this anger well!
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Hallelujah... Country Bumkiss sang like a canary. Shows what a p*ssy he actually was. Absolutely loved the interaction between Paul and Rosarita. Too funny... At least they know the other one is getting it good in the bedroom. Danny hearing that his dad sucks cock... OMG!
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Act 2 – Prelude to War Part 2
FormerMember4 commented on Brayon's story chapter in Act 2 – Prelude to War Part 2
Really good chapter B. Your chapters always flow well. I'd love to visit this world... With your descriptions. -
Thank You Sir... I greatly enjoy the idea of your poem! ?
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The FBI Arrives to the Rescue
FormerMember4 commented on R. Eric's story chapter in The FBI Arrives to the Rescue
I love my tech toys... Stan takes it to a whole new level. I don't orgasm over my equipment. -
Thank You Sir... May I please have another!!
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While I feel for Chris. It is important for him to learn self discovery. He is learning that actions sometimes have repercussions. His reflection can help him make better choices for his future.
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Destiny Begets Destiny
FormerMember4 commented on Headstall's story chapter in Destiny Begets Destiny
Destiny, Destiny, Destiny... Every important event in Kellar's life had been destined. You created this amazingly detailed world... A world your readers thoroughly enjoyed. The journey showed the ultimate in love, loyalty, and family. This couple represented the highest achievement of a relationship. They are respectful to each other. They have an immense connection, which is only amplified by their communication with each other. They make decisions as a pair. I am happy where this installment ended. Yes, their could be more. However, let it organically evolve for you. Enjoy a good rest. It goes back to destiny... You were destined to write this amazing tale. I was destined to enjoy it Much Love Gary! ❤️ JP- 266 comments
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That wasn't meant to be a slam. We're in same boat. I have NF instead of renting. I find a 4-6 charge for rental too rich for me.
