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I take honor in being obedient! Rebels can be broken...
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Yes Sir... I'm a boy who listens... Thank you Sir!
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When do classes begin... I'm not exactly a beginner! 😉
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Definitely an enjoyable chapter. Alec was honest with his teammates. He introduced Liam as his ex and didn't try to show him off with some macho BS. He also should be commended for his very apparent concern and protectiveness.
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The Man in the Chair
FormerMember4 commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in The Man in the Chair
I'm happy to see that things didn't really change with the brothers. This was one of my favorite chapters. I was very close to my grandfather. Riley's grandfather and his stories could be a positive influence for Riley. Especially since they had an instant connection. -
Wow Mac, I'm a little speechless. This poem is so stripped down, emotional and raw. While this reflects hurt and pain... Its beautiful in its power... Brought on by your choice of words.
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Featured Story: Unforgivable
FormerMember4 commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors News
For anyone who hasn't read this story... Do So! This story has love, heartache, happiness. The absolute best thing about this story. It revolves around family and friends. How those change over time. In the end... Hopefully you have a core group of friends who will be their for you.- 39 comments
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I absolutely loved this chapter. Coming clean to his family was the right thing to do. I wonder if they will keep the papers. Just in case something happens with the social worker situation. I didn't think that Aaron would have a problem with Riley being gay. However; that scenario was hilarious. Great chapter Ace...
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Prompt 579 How can you be so sure?
FormerMember4 commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 579 How can you be so sure?
Another great installment Tim... I just love the banter between these brothers. Rob is just a little to interested in a guys ass... Mange tak! -
I also wonder if Kyle is attracted to Chris. I was also thinking he might have pulled some strings to get Chris freed from jail for the weekend. The question is... Will Chris be ready to accept that Kyle might be interested... Will he be receptive?
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It was nice to see Riley vulnerable in front of friends. Makes him more relatable. Not a monster. He has a family and boyfriend who will love and protect him. Watch out Owen.... The devil is coming, and he's gonna drag you to HELL!
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Just Over a Week Later...
FormerMember4 commented on JayT's blog entry in Randomnicity (aka Jay's thoughts)
We feel different things, for different people. All this at different times! You hurt, but might just be overly numb right now. Where your not able to process yet. I'll give two examples. With very different reactions. My mothers death I was absolutely crushed. You couldn't get me to stop crying. I just wanted to die with everyone watching. My grandmother died at 93. Living a long and happy life. When we were burying her... I thought of a very funny moment with her. I broke out into laughter. Worst time, but I think it was my grandmother looking out for her little bambino. -
Beautiful Tim! Your not only loved by M, but your GA family... JP ❤️
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This just reminds me how different peoples experience can be. I remember being 12 and realizing something was different about me. When I was 15 it was confirmed I was different when I fell for my best friends brother... Hard! What Andy is experiencing, I've never felt. Once I accepted who I was, I never found myself fighting it. My first experience just felt so right. Never felt the need to deny it!
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I also feel that Chris is now going in circles. While I think the journal has purpose, and is cathartic. He should be working with victims of the crimes he committed, or tried to commit. He learns what he did. While it allows him to give back.
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Happy Birthday Myr! Hope it was a beautiful day for you!🎈🎊
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Sweet Tim, I'm so happy you use your words to free your voice. Just like you, your words have purpose. I totally understand that feeling of ALONE. You my sweet man are never alone!
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Very good chapter Carlos! I don't know if it was the wedding, or just the mood of the chapter. I did reflect on what I most love about the CJ saga. Family and positivity! While they all go through perils, it always circles to family, friends, love and respect.
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All I can say... Cy can be a bad Mamma Jamma!
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Thank You, Thank You, Thank You! The moments with them were adorable. Declan being bashful is just the thing to show he isn't a caveman. A way to show his sincerity. It was sad to see Bailey jump the way he did when Declan tried to carry bag. However; I'm excited to see him let the armor down a little. The ultimate satisfaction of this chapter... Not one, but two smiles from Bailey!
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The romantic in me likes the chapter. Although; I'm not onboard with Alec. I am happy with how honest Liam was. He laid everything on the table. With no vague ultimatum or promises. Which will protect his heart. I do give credit to Alec. He didn't try to walk back from his mistakes. I also am pleased that he explained his actions in certain moments. With this being said. I'm still Team Marty... Dammit!
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Very well written. Emotion captured loud and clear. With so many of us restless... I suggest a group vacation!
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Sad, yet beautiful... Its amazing when you bare your soul in your poems. Whether angry, sad, happy. Your words are clear and concise.
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I have absolutely no problem with what Riley did. I'm sorry he was put in that situation. The social worker made it very clear that Riley wasn't going to get a fair shake from her. He should also be commended for telling her how the state failed him. What he did is sometimes the price of business. Growing up in a very rich area of NJ, I've seen wealthy businessmen become sharks like that. It doesn't matter where you come from. Since Riley never got a fair life. Its about time things work for him. So he can become a positive man who can offer some good to the world.
