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    Chapter 17

    Does that mean 400k words to go
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    Chapter 11

    Well Will has been lured into a trap. All alone in the White House, alone with the unpredictable President. About to show how good he is at political chess.
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    Game Over

    Great ending to a wonderful story.
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    Featherless

    Those are beautiful words. Thanks for this tim x
  5. Too much right handed movement, in an up and down action.
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    Chapter 17

    The upcoming camping trip should be interesting. What has Colt got planned for Joel.
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    Chapter 10

    Exactly Will is out of Canada for a few days, they can do an awful lot of damage whilst he's away. As the assassination attempt on Andrew shows.
  8. I like Dexter when he is sober. I think Reece will be a good help to him.
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    Chapter 33

    The threesome, has become a foursome with the return of Elias. They are good friends to each other.
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    Chapter 12

    Well Jason has decided that the gossip, needs to see the truth. Kenny is shocked that his Dad knew how to use Social Media. I think things will turn out alright for Blake and Jason, it seems alot of people know about there relationship and love for each other.
  11. A wonderful start to the pre wedding events.
  12. Great start and a great cast of characters.
  13. Have Rokus and Thomas, got what they wanted from Laren and Solan. Sex without the use of drugs, I'm not so sure that Laron and Solan, will try for more, with the aid of drugs.
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    Chapter 10

    An awesome car chase, Andrew proved what a great driver he is. Passenger dead, so hopefully some information can be gained. I hope Will has plenty of protection. This has made this personal against Andrew and Will, I dont envy the badies when Andrew gets hold of them.
  15. A great start. Finn has a big decision to make, will he make that leap of faith.
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    Chapter 9

    West found plenty of information very quickly. Unfortunately Will is right in the centre of the information he found. The info if leaked, will paint Will in a very bad light. Hopefully Jared, can provide West with more to go on. But at the moment we have disputed father and the child adopted.
  17. Secret Author and the Annual Anthology
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    Chapter 11

    We see the whole Jensen family suffering at the same time. Kenny, his mum and his dad will have many people to support them. It seems Jaso and Blake, wasn't that much of a secret from what Clovis, is about to tell Kenny and Steve.
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    Entry 69

    Adam is going all out for Ross's birthday
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    Chapter 5

    Nate is having the time of his life, new experiences will help prepare him for the future. His four years in the army, will be a culture shock. After a tranquil time, spent with Danny and Jake.
  21. Not much I can add to what's been said. Awesome chapter
  22. Ross and Adam are so cute together. Adam tried to apologise, that's the important thing.
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