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  1. Let’s hope she doesn't get more patients than she can handle.
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    Sweat

    Joshua should have asked what the job was in advance. At least Lorna isn't pimping him out yet, she's just getting him work with single women. Who are after a hot sweaty young man, as eye candy.
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    Chapter 5

    I'm curious about Stingray Head and what's about to be revealed there.
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    Peter’s Dance

    Awesome start to the story, look forward to reading more.
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    Chapter 17

    It could be Bridge over Troubled Water
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    Chapter 6

    I think it would be more fun with @Geron Kees having to remember everyone that they have met.
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    Chapter 17

    I'm worried about Ollie slipping up in front of Dad and hell breaking loose. Rafa taking him to clinic is good news. It seems Gray has far more support at work, than he realises. It's sound like a few people are glad to see the back of Tom.
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    Chapter 1

    Awesome story. Martin and Paul make a cute couple.
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    Chapter 1

    Awesome start. Look forward to more blood and death.
  10. Blood and Death, the perfect read.
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    Chapter 50 S2

    Awesome chapter. A lot of wonderful information about the Ute Indian. I presume Devin and Mac saw a skin walker and presumably the evil one. As @Bill W will say, tune in next week to find out.
  12. Exactly, the site subscription each month is the price of a good book and we have access to hundreds of stories and a well run site, with plenty of features 😀
  13. Awesome Deep Dive. Some fantastic stories on this list.
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    Chapter 15

    Sounds like a wonderful hotel. Albin has done well for himself.
  15. I'm sure @drsawzall is correct, insurance companies are not gonna be happy. Then there are the medical ethics, that the hospital are worried about. Way to go Dr N.M
  16. Awesome battle. Great to see Arlo and Coradiel both level up.
  17. In the time I've been with GA there's been a few stories that I've not been able to finish because of bad editing, but I have reviewed stories that are not 100% perfect. Some stories you have to take account of the type of person as @Kitt said. With my own writing I try to get them as near as perfect as possible, but im quite sure that mistakes have slipped through.
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    Bob's Dilemma

  19. I thought Midday on the 30th September was perfect.
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    Bob's Dilemma

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    Introductions

    Yeah, they take money and don't give it back easily. Next Chapter on Saturday.
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    Bob's Dilemma

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    Chapter 16

    Gray and Raffa are gonna be good for each other. I'm pleased Raffa is gonna help him with the testing. I'm glad Tom was sacked, they are enforcing there policies at work. Let’s hope there is know repercussions inside or outside of work.
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