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I’m so sorry, Laura, my original comment meant to refer to Carter, not Aron. Please see the corrected statement below: “That moment between Carter and Mark should not have been lost!! Then again, we tend to ignore the things we don’t want to see and while I would think Carter would welcome a fellow pod person, it might freak him out to think of this being anything greater than what he already thinks it is“ That may change your commentary but the error was mine. Sorry!! 😳

That moment between Carter and Mark should not have been lost!! Then again, we tend to ignore the things we don’t want to see and while I would think Carter would welcome a fellow pod person, it might freak him out to think of this being anything greater than what he already thinks it is. I don’t know who Mark is but I feel like I’m gonna kick myself for not knowing if he’s revealed before I find out. I don’t know what to think of his encounter with Simon, except to say he’s a persistent fucker. What is it with all these people wanting to be dominated, by Alex no less?!?! He’s an established bottom (?) You are good, Rumpelstiltskin; Now you’ve brought in Carter’s Mom and her reaction was not what he expected. There’s a warren in some unknown underground somewhere because there are a lot of rabbit holes opening up here, 😄

So Aron knew about Simon. 😳 And Aron seems to be have sub/masochistic tendencies. 🤨 I admire Carter’s perseverance in this switcheroo world, he truly feels lost in this situation. I don’t think he realizes how lost he was in his own skin and it seems like this is the way the universe is going to help him find himself. As interesting as Carter and Aron’s developing sex life is, (and it’s damned interesting!! ) I remain curious about Alex’s new assistant and the accident that Alex and Carter were in. Are they in future danger? Will there be anymore pod people coming into this? We really don’t know if there will be fatalities from this switch and as loathsome as Alex can be, I don’t want to think he might die. I’m reading this as an overlooked chapter, so I will see what answers (or more questions) come out of the next one.

It is why I said it “appears” instead of it being a definite. Whether Diamond was close to Mike as a lover or uncle, it was still hypocritical for him to come after Adam and Troy (or anyone) based on homophobia. As an uncle, a nephew he’s so upset about losing was the very thing he was calling the boys. As a lover (potential and speculated as you’ve stated it hasn’t been confirmed), It would be like he’s attacking himself.

This chapter brought tears to my eyes and hope to my heart. I got teary at the thought of Troy (and indirectly Adam because what hurts one hurts the other) being hurt again. That it was Mike’s uncle gunning for Adam and Troy, calling them the F word when it appears he was in a homosexual relationship with his nephew is beyond hypocritical; It also speaks to a self delusion and self hatred that others shouldn’t have had to pay for. Adam and Troy both need professional counseling, this has all been too much. No one in the class gave Troy up. I have hope for the town because of it’s next generation.

“Jesus...you're so awesome. Omigod...I'm so in love right now!" He giggled.” l’m so in love with these boys and this story. 😍 Dont worry Tristan, Jesse’s just having a fan moment, he’s all yours, Honey. Right?

Well, you sure know how to make up for a delay. This was a very full and emotional chapter. I didn’t think Katie’s issue was going to be good but I didn’t anticipate this. It’s unfortunately all too common nowadays and Katie will definitely need therapy to make sure she properly processes all that she’ll feeling. Kudos to Brady for being a stand up parent. I wish Cam had burned Sean’s clothes at least; he deserved so much more. I’m also hoping there are criminal charges filed against Sean. It was also unfortunate that some of the issues that exist between Brady and Ember came out during such a stressful time. They are things that need to be dealt with but it’s tough for Brady to let anything but Katie be first priority right now. There’s clearly still a chance for Brady and Ember as he showed up to help and he clearly didn’t have to do that. *Exhale* There’s a lot of recovery to be addressed in the next chapter.

Just re-read this story and realized it wasn’t finished. This has a great start, would love to see more.

.......👀 That was fucking hot. Congratulations on your first blow job, Carter, sucking dick is awesome!! 👏 You are pacing Carter’s introduction to gay sex very nicely, Rumpelstiltskin. There are so many other things to direct one’s attention to, it really does feel like a Wonderland. Looking forward to more and to your return.

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Josh and Kells were on my mind this morning, then I realized it’s been a while since I read anything about them. Hoping RL is okay with you and that we get to see more of this journey of love and healing soon. 💝

I thought about the moving aspect, too. It sheds some more understanding on why people who want to come out do move away from their hometowns sometimes.

Can these two ever catch a break?!?! It’s fucked up to hope this is random but as the vice principal knew who Adam and Troy’s Mom were and didn’t treat them the way he treated the other two mothers looking for children, I doubt it is. 😔 There was no talk of Mike escaping and I don’t think Kyle’s brother would do this but this town sounds full of really repressed people prone to violence so who knows at this point; I wouldn’t even rule out Adam’s incubator right now. Please let Troy be okay and while HEA would be nice, giving them some peace being unmolested by other people and their issues for a good bit is okay, too.

This was one of the most sadly beautiful chapters I’ve ever read. 😢 ❤️💔💕

There’s something about Mark.... Carter handled himself well in the interview but he still has to deal with Simon-how dare Alex think that Aron was cheating when he’s the cheater; It’s clearly the case of the pot calling the kettle black. Alex is no bueno, I think he’s a selfish narcissist and really don’t know how Aron was so fooled; Even if he had blinders on in the beginning, the scales had to fall off eventually; I don’t even know what Simon sees in him. Enjoy your time off the grid.

I just spent yesterday and today reading “Wolf Like Me” and “Wild Card” straight through and it was SO GOOD!!!! O. M. G.!!!! 😍 😍 “W.L.M.” is a favorite story of mine and this continuation is a delicious addition. You’ve created characters it is easy to be heavily invested in Dayne and I’m not ready to part with these characters or their adventures yet. I eagerly await future updates, there are so many more people to meet and so many situations still to be resolved.

Your comment to my call comment on the last prompt brought this one to my attention, Thank You!! Now: How can this be It?!?? Lol!! Maybe I missed anything decisive but it looks like Ryan was changing his mind about running away with Darren at the end. I didn’t like: “A man who had seduced his partner, trying to splinter his family. Their family. This was emergency mode.” Was Ryan really that gullible? I respect your right to call an end when you see fit but I missed seeing Darren face justice, whether through the loss of his relationship or his freedom. The trio of stories were intriguing, regardless of this end. Thank you for taking us along on this ride.

I love how naturally sensual Indie is; It defies his cold demeanor. He is an ice capped volcano.

This is my fourth (or maybe fifth or sixth time) reading this and this is still the best first time sex scene I have ever read. This is also one of my favorite stories.

That bitch!! If I was Mrs. C, I would not have called Adam’s incubator to let her know anything, she lost the right to know anything about him long ago. Everybody showed great restraint in not belting that wench back when she smacked Adam. I really hope he won’t be hearing any more from that corner, if I were him I would want her parental rights legally terminated. I’m glad Adam’s on the road to recovery and will soon resume life with the rest of his real family.

And add two more members to the Waters family. The Waters family has expanded from a lake to an ocean, joined by love instead of only blood.

Hear Hear

My deepest condolences on the loss in your family. Your grief kind of goes along with the sad tone to this chapter, painful as it is, I appreciate how you don’t shy away from the shit life dishes out; You can’t appreciate the peaks without the valleys and life has both. Please know we aren’t going anywhere, take all the time you need to do and deal with everything you need to, I think I can safely speak for my fellow readers in saying there’s no rush. Blessings to you and may you find the little joys that can exist during times of great pain.

Thanks for reaching out, see you at normal programming.