FanLit

Why did Beth break up with Carter anyway? I didn’t get it when I read this on Nifty and I’m not getting it rereading it here. She’s always been painted as miserable and they have an awful sex life; It didn’t make sense to me that she would walk away from him-maybe you’ll explain in the sequel? (*asking ever so hopefully*)

Sometimes your family is who you’re related to by heart, not by blood. Adam will be better off without his mom but there will always be a wound knowing you are rejected by the people who gave you life. I hope he doesn’t go to the funeral.

Did Darren eventually get help or will he be looking over his shoulder jumping at everything now? In trying to stop Christian from ruining his life, Darren ruined his own. I think it was naive of Christian to think that because Darren was gay he wouldn’t cheat-cheating is cheating and it crosses all orientations. I get if Christian was trying to piss Darren off but telling the spouse should never be an empty threat; If he meant it, then he should’ve done it without warning. Threat or not, Christian didn’t deserve Darren’s attack, Darren isn’t innocent in this and it was wrong to take out his anger at Christian (and himself) this way; Crime of passion, indeed. Cheating usually has nothing to do with the person you’re cheating on and based on the description of Christian vs. Darren’s husband, Darren has some issues; I doubt this was his first indiscretion.

Ember is pissed he wants Brady and he wants everyone to know. (even tho he doesn’t know it). Did nothing reeeeaaaaallllyyyy happen last night? 🤨

“They fit so well, so, so well, and their bodies knew each other and he could feel, with each inhale and exhale, why it was so. They belonged together, who knew for what reason, and how the stars aligned on their days of birth or something, but they just did.” When you find the one that makes you feel like that, you will do anything for them. Momo is in, while keeping an eye on the exit sign so he can prepare himself for the end; It doesn’t occur to him it might not. He still doesn’t get that if He Tian knows Mo Guan Shan feels the same way he does, he will move heaven and earth to keep them together. It feels like a big change is coming.... Just wondering, would He Tian ever bottom for Momo?

What a wonderful story. You have a gift for the believable, carnally satisfying, whirlwind romance. (I’m also a fan of “The Cardmaker and the Caretaker”) Will there be another chapter for this anytime soon? I don’t see the “complete” designation on this one.

Ya think?

Fooorrrreeeeplayyyyyy. 🔥🔥 All that repressed passion is gonna lead to an incendiary main event. 🛏 I loved that Ember cold cocked Paul. For someone who isn’t “gay”, Paul needs to take the stick he has out of his ass. Loads of insecurity and rage there; While that makes him dangerous, he’s going to realize Ember isn’t a kid anymore if he persists. Keep the faith, Brady, actions speak louder than words. Ember is fighting a losing battle in his desire for you.

Damn. 😞 It was nice to catch up with thsee characters but this development is distressing. I won’t say ending because I know there has to be another time we glimpse into their world again, hopefully with a happier result. It is one of the most painful things to realize you can’t help someone you love unless they want to help themselves.

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This was such a sweet yet intense first time. 😍 He Tian is definitely in love with Mo Guan Shan: “Look, I’m new to this too, okay?” He Tian whispered.... “To caring,” He Tian replied. “I was too busy not letting you get your dick wet,” He Tian joked. “Mine,” He Tian whispered and sank his teeth at the tender flesh of the thigh he was currently lavishing with attention. Momo is so overwhelmed by his own feelings, so used to thinking nothing affects He Tian and so low in his own self esteem that he can’t see it or that He Tian is actually protecting him when he tells him he has to go. It’s easier for Momo to believe he’s being rejected. The most popular boy in school wouldn’t cock block you Mo Guan Shan, or save his virginity for you (SO sweet❣️❣️) unless he loved you. He Tian feels things so deeply and he is so very dedicated to Momo, it’s what Momo will need to believe He Tian is genuine. I loved this Laura. These two have amazing chemistry.

This was SO SWEET❣️❣️ I love when old crushes or loves are recognized and/or recaptured. Thank you. 💝

This story reminds me of the “No Rain” video by Blind Mellon. 🐝 No matter how individualistic we are, we instinctively crave the belonging to something bigger than ourselves, to know we are not the “only” there is. I’m glad Jason found out there are others like him and that there is nothing wrong with how he feels.

I think unless one is very, very lucky, we all have baggage of some sort to deal with as adults. Hugs and the best of wishes to you as you deal with yours. I read your comments on other stories and they are witty and insightful.

Unless we’re true to ourselves, there will be no resolution to any other problem we encounter in life. This story was like droughtquake said, very intense. I think anyone who commutes can relate to the “regulars” you see coming and going. I’m worried about the cute Polish guy and hope he found a way out of his abusive situation. I see another story where Liam and he meet up and explore what they can have together. Whatever else, Liam is free; It will be better for he, Kath and Ryan in the long run. This was very good and thank you for sharing.

What the holy fuck?!?! We know Daniel’s crazy, what’s up with Kaiden?!?! Who threatens a dog’s life as a means of getting revenge on someone?!?! Another psychopath, that’s who. Morrison and now Kaiden get whatever they deserve from Daniel, those useless lemming followers should get a little medicine, too. My God, wait he ain’t nowhere in this, smh.

I second that vote. 😁

Any teenager can remember what it was like to be so into someone, especially when they weren’t into you. I suspect this happens more than any of us realize; Teens in this social media age never have to approach the object of their affection if they don’t want to, especially if they fear rejection. Yes, he is obsessed, teenagers obsess as a whole and obsession is a facet of love. The barrier of the internet from the real world can turn his fantasy world into something we see on the news all too often if he doesn’t get a handle on it. My theory is that Jason found a girl/boyfriend and those pics might be directed to them. Lord knows what’ll happen if that’s the case....

“If you don’t know yourself, the thing that no-one ever really says about having a kid is that is incredibly repetitive and boring. I love him more than I ever thought was possible, but that doesn’t make life permanently enjoyable. Answering the endless questions, and talking about banal shit is absolutely part of the job, and I know it’s important, but sometimes I need to talk with adults too.” Amen and stitch that on a sampler and a pillow!! You’re doing fine, Connor.

Daniel is going to fix Morrison, his f^<kedupness will be good for something. Daniel sees Artie’s anguish over the locket and is still keeping it, even going so far as to take it out the house with him. Jack is taking a lot for granted & he will feel deep regret when the poop hits the fan. If Daniel used his bad for good, it’d be okay but the only good for him is him, no matter how much he may feel affection for someone else. It’s understandable (to a degree) given he’s had to fend for himself for a long time and has little to no trust.

That damned waiting. Oy vay 😳 The waiting is a lesson in and of itself, in addition to the answer you’re waiting for, sometimes it’s harder.

I like them both too, it’s been my observation that the quiet voice is heard over the louder one, if that makes any sense. Day 2 is the answer to Day 1.

Yay!! 🎼 Duncan and Adaaammm sittin’ in a tree. K-I-S-S-I-N-G. 🎼 (It’s just a matter of time, anyway.) It is the least Tibot can do, getting his hands dirty to clear Adam; This development led to the best paragraph in the chapter: “Well, I want them crippled financially, and out of office. Some time behind bars, too.” He ended the call and poured himself a glass of sweet tea before he went to the evening Bible study.“ 😂❤️😂❤️ Very much looking forward to the next chapter.

My Gawd. 🔥🔥 If they ever get to penetration they’re going to kill each other!! 😄 But what a way to go.... He Tian is definitely into Mo Guan Shan and probably always has been (“Tell me you haven’t sucked off anyone else, ever,” the brunet whispered.”) but he seems to lack the emotional maturity to just say so (like any teenager). That coupled with his background you mentioned means he can’t afford to show vulnerability so he takes what he wants, with brute force if necessary. I don’t know about Momo’s history but he seems to like being dominated by He Tian, whether he realizes it or not. Very interesting and hot. Looking forward to the next chapter.