Badforlad

Great beginning and really love Brian and Toby. Looking forward to future chapters.

Entertaining and well written. Thanks

I’m having trouble understanding why everyone thinks Jacob is creepy. He’s gay and obviously out and proud. He has a crush on Kayden has actually asked him out on a date, possibly double date. Who hasn’t been turned down and still want to try again? At least he didn’t come to Kayden’s home in the middle of the night, entice him to climb out his window and then bang his throat in the cab of his truck. If you’re trying to attract the BDSM crowd then this certainly seems the way to go.

Wowzer. Really enjoyed this story so far.

Wonderful story and cannot wait for the next chapter..

Really enjoyed the story but needs some serious editing.

Enjoying the story but a little confused. His Dad’s a cop and they live in a gaited affluent neighborhood and he drives a Ferrari???

Sad but excellent beginning. Well written I thoroughly enjoyed it.

I grew up in a small conservative town and have experienced the pressure of conforming to rules. I can easily understand Ezra knuckling under to his parents. Sounds to me like Arti’s mom made the decision on her own to not adopt them held it against Ezra for “agreeing” to the adoption. Hmm. Good cop bad cop, I wonder if Adam had a crush on Ezra and is part of the problem.

As usual, well written from a very creative literary mind.

I am not sure why anyone would want Jordan to get back together with Noah. Noah told Jordan that the love of his family was more important than Jordan’s love. That kind of pain may be forgiven with time but it won’t be forgotten. Not really sure that they have a lot in common. I think Brody is a nice guy and should be given a chance.

I personally feel any degree of BDSM is wrong and think both parties need psychological help. Violence in the form of spanking is wrong and we need to get it out of our heads that it is acceptable. Enjoyed the story up to this point but this is where I leave.

I’m not really liking this relationship. Are all bottoms so insecure that they want to be told what to do and called names? I guess i’m Just not into dominant/submissive relationships.

Not sure why all the inappropriate cursing is part of the story. Devin is not illiterate and attends a private school. Doubt his mother nor his teachers would have let him get away with spouting profanities.