Side note: this story is where my Korner Krew was born. If you have the time to read the comments you'll understand why they're such PITAs. Also, they're constantly recruiting.
This one is imaginative, sad, hopeful, and a little bit weird all at the same time. It must be terrifying to be trapped in a alternate reality in your mind. Nick knows something is off, but he can't put a finger on it.
Nice little cliffie at the end. I wonder who makes good use of those?
Nice job Secret Author!
What's with the damn cats!? Is there a hidden hidden theme?
That aside, this was a fun story with lots of laughs. There aren't too many people I'd ever want to take a road trip like this with without wanting to throw them out of the moving car at some point. Lol
Thanks secret author!
Maeve is what my brother calls a 'feeder'. His wife is one.. they will try to feed you no matter what the occasion or whether or not you're hungry.. food is the ultimate cure all in their world. Lol
I agree. I've read some stories that have had me tearing my hair out. But they've usually had a good outcome... unless the author kills the dog... then I won't read another word o matter how good it was. So far no chance of that in tim's story.