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Chapter 17: Destined Detectives
Baikalisan commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 17: Destined Detectives
Your killin me smalls I need more!!!!! -
The end. Makes me sad. Write more for us!!! -greedy reader. 💚💚
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He’s perfect. Leave him alone.
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Your killin ne smalls.
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Omg I need more!!!!!! I’ve been reading my butt off, and it all stopped?!! Loving this story. Can’t wait to see what happens next!!!!
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Little Mall of Horrors
Baikalisan commented on Grumpy Bear's story chapter in Little Mall of Horrors
Here I spent the last couple weeks, while the power has been off because of Ida, reading this series. La la la enjoying the hell out of it and BAM I ran out of chapters!!! I’m eagerly waiting for more!! Thanks!! -
Any chance of a continuation? Plz let us know so we aren’t waiting for.nothing. I hope all is well with you.
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I cried. So much. Damn you
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I sure wish you would expand these stories into much longer books. I’d love to read more about them all.
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I’m confused about the fathers sections. I’m not sure what happened to make him do all these things to his son. I went back and read the first chapter and it’s still got me confuddled. Imma keep reading tho! Other than this I’m enjoying
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Epilogue - Chapter 10-Final Chapter
Baikalisan commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Epilogue - Chapter 10-Final Chapter
Loved the entire thing. Ty for writing and submitting -
H’rek is still very young. He will make childish decisions based on what the ppl around him say. I understand having a tiff with your partner, but his reaction to it seems extreme. I’d say L’cal is feeding him information to turn him against D’gar and all he symbolizes.
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Omg you stopped there!?!? Your killing me smalls. I really enjoyed this story. I wish you had an epilogue or a part 2!!!!!!! keep writing your doing great!
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poor Jared. Nobody deserves to be in that situation. Adrian. Ugh. So many ways that can go. Looking forward to him giving in. And mike. Gsus that’s one hell of a situation with Ryan’s back history but I feel if he can stand up and be brave he can win his man.
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That’s the end? Wow not a good way to end 🙁
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This was a really great story. I loved reading it. I wish the ending wasn’t so abrupt tho.
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I’m still reading but I’m pissed that the flash forward let me know they aren’t together
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That’s it!?!? Unbelievable. .
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Your killing. Me with these abrupt endings!!!! An epilogue would be GREATLY appreciated. It was a great read. And I thank you for writing and submitting 😎
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Wish it was longer. Good writing!!
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Very good story with a VERY BAD ending
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This one still updated regularly? I’m enjoying it
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That CANNOT be the end. I’d love to see a new story in this series. Maybe play devils advocate and write it from one of the clan leaders point of view. Gay unable to find his mate forced to use the breeding program to keep his clan alive. Finds his mate when Benny merges the clans together?????
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POV changes are killing these stories for me. But ty for writing and submitting.
