Graeme

As a general rule, I find flashbacks intrusive and disruptive, but this is a great example of how to use them properly. Corey is experiencing a breakup with his best friend and lover, and flashbacks are being used to contrast the old and the new. With only a few short scenes, we get a real feel for Corey and Brett's relationship and why Corey is feeling like he is. I, too, have read this story before, but I'm looking forward to reading it again.

We have quite a variety here. Romance is popular, as is basic teenage dramas, but there are also a number of dark tales, lots of science fiction and fantasy (werewolves are popular for some reason), some historical fiction, comedy, suspense, mysteries, creative non-fiction and pretty much everything in between. We're currently going through a software upgrade, but feel free to browse through the different genres and tags available. Personally, I tend to write romance/drama stories set in Australia, but I've been known to make exceptions...

How do you know it's more prevalent today, and not simply being better diagnosed and reported? It's possible that it may be overdiagnosed, but that's a different question. ADHD is a relatively new diagnosis, not making it into the DSM until 1968 under the name of Hyperkinetic Impulse Disorder. Once it was an 'officially recognised' diagnosis, it then took time before doctors accepted it. It didn't get the name ADHD until the 1980s. So, naturally you won't find any diagnoses of ADHD before then.

I believe the change to the story text/background is the intent. Some people find white on black easier to read.

The two things that impressed me the most were Ben unselfconsciously trying (and succeeding) to relax Travis, and Travis making a public declaration that Ben is special and means too much to him to let him go. Their relationship has taken another step forward, so something good has come from Ben being outed. As others have said, the ball is back in Ben's court as to how he'll deal with it. He's going to have some troubles with his mother, but overall I think that voicemail was positive. The bigger issue is whether, like he did with his sister, he stands up for himself or lets himself be swept away by either his media team (trying to tone things down) or by the sensationalist elements of the media (trying to intrude too much into his private life).

Another fantastic chapter. Thank you! The interaction between the brothers, Uncle Johnny, Efrain, and everyone else was just perfect. The only thing missing was when Preston said something to Conner, I expected Conner to go all alpha, and then Indie would say something like "Preston, you're cleaning up the blood stains. I'm not doing it." Preston would then respond with something like "This is Cory's brother. I'm not going to hurt him any more than necessary." The reaction of the Card brother's to that exchange would've been fun to see. Sadly, Indie's not as sarcastic as he used to be...and I blame Preston for that

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Most people won't know who I'm talking about, but I think most of our New Zealand and Australian members will. Murray Ball, the creator of the iconic Footrot Flats comic strip, has passed away. A few tributes from his fans I still own copies of the first thirteen volumes of Footrot Flats. I think it might be time to look at them again...

Story Dogs helping children learn to read BBC live TV interview gatecrashed by guest's children

He ain't heavy, he's my brother 95-year-old comes out

I don't normally like dream sequences, because I find them cliched and either heavy-handed or obstuse to the point of being meaningless, but this one grabbed me. The dead look in Travis's eyes was what got me. Ben's unconscious knows that there is a large dead part inside Travis, and until it's brought back to life, there's not going to be a future for them. That's the message I got from the dream. As for Katy, it was time for her to learn the truth. I appreciate and applaud Travis for wanting to hide it from her, but with Eric back she needed to know. What I'm afraid of is how she's going to deal with that truth over the next few days. Finding out that her brother had been abused, and in such vicious detail, isn't something most teeenagers know how to handle. I hope all three of them survive the next few days and come out stronger, not more damaged...

Thank you! I think it's well known by now that I love a happy ending Peter came around, even if it was a struggle initially. His love for Alan was too strong, and eventually he was able to extend that love to the two boys.

It's good that Ryder has finally opened up regarding his insecurities to his dad and told him how much pressure he feels he's under. I think taking the job at UT will be good for everyone, but only if Ryder can continue to stay at the same school. That was implied, but the reference to moving to a new house raised alarm bells with me. This is not the time for more change in Ryder's life. I wonder how long it will be before Ryder asks if Tyler can go with them on spring break...

That's ( a + b )^2 but that's not the case here because n^2+2n+2 isn't a perfect square.

What you have is two equation: n x (n+1) + (n+2) (n+2) x (n+1) - n Both of these simplify to: n x n + 2 x n + 2 So, yes, they'll always be equal. Basic mathematics

I have scanned the report and there's one thing that's missing with the data -- whether the participant in the studies was out. I can see that a gay teenager in 1998 may tell a researcher that they're gay, but not be out, while today a teenager in the same situation is more likely to be out. Could it be that the difference is due to more teenagers coming out, and since they're out, they find participating in sport less attractive (eg. due to homophobia from teammates)?

Travis doesn't have an easy life. Out of all the people he normally interacts with, it appears the vast majority don't like him or use him. He's really isolated socially, which may be why Ben has such an influence on him. I fear that the return of Eric will mean some secrets being revealed. That's not going to make Travis's life any easier, but he'll do it if that's the only way to protect his sister...

Since this is from Ben's point of view, and now that he knows what Travis has been doing to earn extra 'stud' fees, will Ben wonder if those final comments from Travis were real, or part of the 'job'? The clues are there that the comments are real, but Ben has shown that deep down, he's quite insecure. In the lust of the moment, he didn't care, but when he has a chance to reflect, it's going to worry him.

Rather than contemplating the ending, I am more interested in the start and middle. The relationship between Ben and Travis includes a lot of lust -- the scene in the truck shows that -- but there's definitely more to it than that. Ben's dismissal of the girls in the lift indicates he's not just after a lay, something his sister also recognises. If it was a passing thing, she wouldn't have warned Travis the way she did. I hope Bryan comes around, because it would be painful for Ben if he lost that friendship, especially with his brother-in-law to be.

To be honest, I can't think of many things worse than false accusations of something as emotional and insidious as child abuse. It must be soul-destroying to be accused of something like that

Thank you! The people responsible for chasing up on child abuse allegations are often in a no-win situation. If they're doing their job properly, they have to chase it up because otherwise a child could be left in an abusive situation. Unfortunately, those sort of allegations are extremely easy to make and when there's a bitter custody case, that can leave the social workers unnecessary work to do.

Thank you! Cutting onions while reading seem to be widespread problem. The same thing has happened to me many times

Thank you!

Thank you! That scene is special for me, too, because it's one that I envisioned when I first started writing the story. I was happy to finally get to write it. The innocence and bluntness of young kids can be very disarming. As for Peter, his doubts and worries are very real. I've heard too many stories of relationship breakups after the birth of the first child because adding children changes the dynamics of a relationship, and not everyone can accept change easily. He got there in the end, as do many other first-time parents, but it's not always smooth sailing....

Now, what scoundrel would want to disagree with a judge when it comes to ice cream? I can also see Alan and Peter getting married. That's still not legal in Australia, but they could go overseas to do so once they've saved up enough money.