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In my last chapter comment I thought the guys might have been setting up a surprise meet at lunch but I was wrong (good because I like suspense) I suspect it would be asking too much for the plan to go smoothly what fun is that? One thing to be aware of the guys only see him when he mows their lawn. What if on the DL Aaron has met someone? Hope I'm wrong but I do suspect some hurdle.

At who?🤔WAIT!!! Don't ANSWER THAT

Yeah @drsawzall I was wondering the same thing. What curveball does @Lee Wilson have for us?.....come to think of it in his case it would be more like a screwball

I don't think anybody has ever pointed this out. But with so many children it seems like she didn't know what NOT!!! to do

Nice chapter. So Tony has changed the town through his writing. Is this based on @Mark Ponyboy Peters changing his town through his writing😄 One thing I could not help but notice both Tim and Matt had a errand in town to run could that be Aaron related?🤔

Glad it's working out between Bart and Noah. Carlo gave Bart some mental exercises to do, to try to undo everything his father did to him, telling him there's nothing wrong with being in love with and showing that love to another man is perfectly okay. My first reaction to that is if the patient problem is religious teachings on that particularly Catholic that would not work. After thinking about that for a minute I realized a person probably would not go to a psychologist if that was the case. But it does make me wonder would Carlo have a plan for that?

That would certainly be Something.If they can't Come Together then Marty should just Get Back to where he once belonged

Everybody was having a good time at the cook out so I expected something drastic to happen before the chapters end but it looks like thats happening later. I have a feeling Tony and Aaron will cross paths randomly before either of them are ready to have the talk

I've heard so many stories like that.Unfortunately some end up in death. Please get better

Noah is someone with uncommon patience so you know his feelings for Bart is genuine. I am so,so. sorry for your loss😭.For the majority of us a Mother is the number one loss. On a far less important note I would imagine you won't be keeping your posting schedule for awhile. Please take as much time as you need we will all be here when you come back

I was going to try to work in a later chapter something about Desmond getting a piece of Ash

There's a show I haven't watch but it has been promoted a lot .TBS has a show called The Joe Schmoe show.The premise is the main guy thinks he's doing a reality show but its all fake and everybody is in on it What LiveFeed did sounds a lot like this

I'm going to guess here Wen had sex with Jamie and had visions of a relationship.When that didn't happen...........

I would say an album seller @Summerabbacat They first came here in the late 70's being a opening act thats the first time I saw them and I remember my friends and I liking them better then the headliners (who I don't remember😄) in 79 the Black in back album went #17 whthe BnB single was #47 and that patteren continued. I remember their highest charting single Moneytalks reached #23 and that came from a #2 album. They have like 5 songs that are in heavy rotation o classic rock stations. Interesting story about one song in the late nineties Our local baseball team The San Diego Padres had a pitcher who became a hall of famer he was the closer and he would appear in the last inning to close the game and make sure the teams wins. He took a page from WWE and used Hells Bells as his entrance music as a result that started getting played on classic rock stations

To expand on what @pvtguy said I get Tim being upset but he isn't pure in all this he participated in the not telling Tony thing.And how the hell was Tony suppose to know what Aaron's parents was going to do? BTW no mention of Aaron younger brother if they haven't seen each other all this time maybe Tony can find him

"OK. I can live with that." Oh really Mr. Logerman? How good of you for something that was YOUR fault. But someone once said 'The customer is always right"🙄 You were right there is a lot of foreshadowing here. I won't take a guess so you won't to rewrite anything

It would be too tempting to come back in the dark and piss on your grave. Don’t rest in peace.” Correct me if I'm wrong but that's the part you said would be relieving right?

Based on my last chapter comment about Lucas possibly being a racist well we find out Lucas uses the N word freely. Doesn't necessarily mean he is a racist when I was in HS living 5 miles away from the Mexican border our school has a lot of hispanics and a lot of Filipinos because of the Navy presence in town but very few African Americans(I think only two).I bring this up because my peers in private conversations used the N-word freely I'm sad to say but interestingly they rarely used the slurs pertaining to the other groups I mentioned.I bet they didn't think of themselves as racist and it's possible Lucas doesn't think so but at best it does show he's ignorant. “I just know something bad is going to happened,” lamented Neil. “I can just feel it.” I agree with @Cane23 but not in the way Neil thinks. I think something is going to happen if Lucas goes back to Uncle Boozer the Loser(You like that one @Lee Wilson?) It doesn’t work like that,” laughed her mother as she placed a plate of eggs and sausage before her. “Yuck!” exclaimed Emily. “I don’t want this. Where is my cereal?” Brett looked at his older sister’s breakfast in the plate and asked, “You don’t want that?” “Yuck,” she replied again. “No!” “Good,” giggled her brother as he took the plate and scooped its contents onto his plate. He sat beside Brett. After looking at the food on his plate, he turned to him and asked, “You want this?” Brett didn’t say anything as he stuffed some eggs into his mouth, picked up his fork and scooped Neil’s food onto his plate. “Thanks,” he said with a mouthful of food. How can you not like eggs and sausage? I hope Emily isn't becoming another Stacy from the other story in the making.Meanwhile Brett having three breakfasts he's another King Kong Bundy in the making

Let me check your keyboard....OH!!!! The O on your keyboard is very inconsistent no wonder it kept saying 100 instead of 1000 ,See you didn't mess up and you're not stupid.

I have to agree with the 100 soliders comment by @drpaladin. Perhaps they are really exceptional with their discipline and special abilities. It will be very interesting to hear all this happening from Ash point of view. I'm picturing after Ash succeeds🤞🙏 The first thing Desmond does is gives a big time kiss to Ash

Haven't started the chapter yet. Did they give a reason why no pain meds? That doesn't seem to make sense. I appreciate your efforts in writing this chapter. I hope you seeing the doctor tomorrow will turn out well. I have to ask were you on meds in previous chapters and stories?....It would certainly explain a lot😄

For some reason I looked through and I did not get a notification for the chapter .Maybe you have to follow the Story and not just the author perhaps. I'm in agreement with the reader who put an equal amount of blame on Tony and Aaron. I've had my heart broken but maybe not to the degree of Aaron.Tell you what if Aaron had returned Tony's communications then when Tony hit it big he would have asked to Aaron come to him he would have footed the bill

You think?🤔 It didn't hurt AC/DC or Men AT Work

Okay @Summerabbacat tell us which song it is. I can't see it either. You mentioned Air Supply and 1980 I remember 2 songs from that year from them .Every Women In The World would not make sense in regards to this story so I'm guessing All Out Of Love

Tune in?🤔.......Uh what channel is it on?