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It looks like Dad is getting the short end of the stick not getting to be with his children. Why won't the adults tell David the real reason why things are the way they are?

"Elves look out for that stuff," Max reminded. "No big rock is gonna sneak up on us again like in the past. The small ones are allowed to get by, but they just put on a good show in the sky. But no dinosaur-killers for us!" Whew I'm relieved we have Max watching over us now I won't have to worry about an asteroid hitting us......What?....This story is fiction and Max isn't real?.... OH CRAP😱.....But hey at least I won't have to keep my promise of treating everyone at Casper and Ragal's pizza place

I'm not sure @Geron Kees isn't @quttzik profile pics one of your previous characters?

When Luke and Matt got frisky in the previous chapter I thought about that other story little did I know (But probably should have). Justin could possibly be a good ally for Aaron (unless Justin has a relapse)

The defense budget had been going down annually because the world was peaceful. You forgot to put a fantasy tag for this story If Avery can tell if someone is lying by the shimmering then one particular candidate(who I won't mention) Avery wouldn't be able to make out any facial features of.

Well I read it and of course Maggie and Zefira will find something that will make it necessary for the gang to return otherwise the story ends here right?🤔 ... And I STILL have no idea what they are talking about😄 BTW is Browbeat going to be in this story?

Note: This tale presupposes you have read the other stories in the series, and have some idea of who everyone is and what they are talking about! I haven't started reading it yet but while I know who everyone is with words like Skwish!" and íxt etc. I never know what they are talking about

OMG I hope my first thought about what happened to that kid isn't true😲 A thought I expressed in another can't be actually happening can it?🤔 Ben and Matt working together? ‘My ambition in life is to be shot by a jealous husband when I’m ninety! You know while I don't condone cheating with someone who's married if you're able to two-time at age 90...That's pretty impressive😄

You're just now figuring that out?🤔

I hope this isn't a spoiler

You mentioned Avery had two more kids any chance they might inherit his ability? behind and to the right of the Trooper's vehicle. Did you borrow that line from the movie JFK ?😄

Well it looks like Bear won't be going to the dog park for a while. I forget the person who Mac talks to at the park and his dogs's name my bad. He may wonder what's up and the dog will sure miss not seeing Bear. If Devin hurt himself while in the form of Bear he would have had to go to a Vet and possibly not be able to transition back to human. Have Devin and Mac made their school Schedule yet? Maybe they can set it up to where Mac can accompany Devin to his classes to help Devin do certain things but boy that would mean Mac would be burning the candle at both ends. This chapter would be a good lecture on why YOU HAVE TO GET a medical proxy. I'm sure there's a procedure for in an emergency and no family members can de reached that the doctors have discretion to do what has to be done. Couldn't the same discretion be used for him to be able to tell Mac more about Devin's condition?

Tim said the same thing I and others implied in the chapter comments. He's not as twisted as us is he🤔

Teddy had a magazine to show me.” Shouldn't the obvious question have been"What kind of magazine"?

Well there is divorce was it more taboo then?

Linda ,Carla and Corey are the best also a special mention for the kids and the Coach at school. It was literally a replica of his just in my size, and it's something I still have even to this day. There's a clue for you @Al Norris you wondered if @Jeff Burton was going to kill off main characters at least he hasn't with Nathan If you're responsible with it and respect what I'm giving you I won't question anything that shows up on the bill. Deal?" Well so much for online porn(KIDDING,KIDDING)

National pumpkin day and so close to Halloween interesting. If were a pumpkin I wouldn't feel honored on either day you'll get carved up

Have you come across in your research a court case that actually happened that way somewhat ? If people start getting suspicious about Avery ( I'm still amazed the school official haven't said anything it would be a good 60 minutes story)But I digress if someone asks Avery how he could knows these thing he could always say "I saw it on Matlock"

You read the Do Over series in 48 hours????😲 Impressive. The thing about do overs and changing things is you can some how make it worse

OK since you asked for it One morning I walked into the kitchen and I saw my blonde roommate really upset. I asked "What wrong?" He/ She said "I have been trying to do this jigsaw puzzle of a rooster and I can't make head or tails out it I'm so confused " And I said "OK put the Kellogg corn flakes back in the box and I'll explain it to you"

If it is really people just thinking Ben might be gay F them .I guess we will find out if it's more later. Of course there is nothing with Tim but perhaps later with Matt when Matt and Ben get to know each other better? Stay tuned. Well? It may sound like the paranoid rantings of your typical blonde from that I take it you Aussies tell dumb blonde jokes also

The synonym is "I have no idea"

I'm guessing it's more then what people think of him.So a bunch of drunk idiot homophobes thought Ben might be gay big f...in deal. I'm thinking it goes deeper. Perhaps Ben has some gay feelings and maybe he thinks he may give off that vibe

What are the chances somebody reading this would pitch this to a network as an idea for a TV show cop drama?( not that we don'r have enough of those)If that did happen could you try to sue? Using this story as evidence?.....Not that I'm thinking of...uh....gotta go

I'm still working on walking and chewing gum