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Chapter 9 - Sacrifice of Angels
weinerdog commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 9 - Sacrifice of Angels
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Good Chapter. I forgot something important before reading this chapter never be even a little bit hungry before reading one of @CLJobe chapters. Now I know what I'm going to make for dinner...gotta buy some okra.
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Chapter 9 - Sacrifice of Angels
weinerdog commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 9 - Sacrifice of Angels
He hasn't done so yet but I know what you mean.For what it's worth I'm optimistic Man with @Jeff Burton when it rains it pours. The only thing you left out is James and Garrett were in the car that hit them( Oh crap I hope I didn't give him an idea) -
Why did the name Louella pop up in my head when I read this🤔(Not really I wouldn't even wish this on her)
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Well this brings up a question .Devin with his ability to transform into an animal and other humans is there anything different in his anatomy because of that and could the Doctors detect anything? So this apparently takes place in January 2024. Because that was the score of the Wisconsin-LSU game was 35-31. I wasn't a nerd and looked it up I just happened to remember watching it.Why? I have no idea.That's almost as nerdy as looking it up
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I normally would be worried but I think it is too soon in the story. I get a feeling Matt and Luke will end up working together. Spending his days watching Days Of Our Lives? That soap is from the U.S. which I apologize to all the Aussie's on behalf of The U.S.
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Hello HOT workout partner (Offer to spot) But seriously swimming is great
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so if it’s good enough for them, why isn’t it good enough for me and Sam? Fair point Ben but just make sure you don't get a unwanted pregnancy. If Ben acts that way toward Matt interactions with Sam what is he going to be like if a straight guy does it
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Chapter 8 - Blue on Black
weinerdog commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Blue on Black
What a complicated person Nathan is.While most of this is on Nathan,Max and Corey had their moments also.I don.t Care how mad you are at Nathan you don't hang with homophobes considering you have two moms .And Nathan no reason is good enough to out someone even if you did make valid points. @Jeff Burton I'm tempted to say you took impulsive teenage stupidity to an extreme but I'm guessing you dealth with people just like that. BTW if I lived with Nathan I would find ways to stress him out s I I wouldn't have to do chores ( I'm kidding about that part 😆) -
I'm missing something I think .The people with Red auras couldn't you prevent that from happening if you knew that the person was going to be murdered? There is no hard and fast rule to that is there? Also the blue auras if the auras are light blue maybe the illness haven't been discovered yet and something can de done. But hey your story so your rules about auras😄 I'm surprised Mr Littleton and Mrs.Rose didn't say anything about this to anyone after they found out
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I had neighbors who lives across the street from I grew up with all the kids. One daughter passed away far too too young about 15 years her daughter came to visit her grandmother first time I seen her since her mom dies . I could have sword I was looking and speaking with her Mom even the voice the same. So I get why Uncle Frank and others react the way they do to Beth Ann especially being family
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For some reason I didn't get a notification for this.But the previous readers said things better then I could have said it.I'm curious how much research Charlie did about New York.He's fortunate he met a good man in Tom in New York the wrong kind of person can smell a fish out of water. Maybe he doesn't meet Eddie if he hadn't met Tom first
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Joseph Petri, the younger, and Joseph Brown grew up with four great father figures, who were all gay, but to prove that homosexuality is not a choice, both boys were straight as an arrow.Well that was as STRAIGHT and to the point as you can get
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Judging by the comment made I'm guessing we will see Tony in this story at some point. although maybe if he’d been about one hundred years younger, things might have been a bit different! Only a 100🤔
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I might have missed it but was anything put in writing before Angelo and gene worked on the bridge? That was brazen by the council.In your story the council men are disciplined but I bet in today's climate while the injured party MIGHT be taken care of the councilmen will continue on business as usual
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And so will all the Readers. I understand this is the real world but geez did you have to put a next to it?
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Just thought I would post this separately I laughed when he turned around and nearly tripped over Visa, who, as usual, lived up to her name. Like the old commercial, he was everywhere you wanted to be. That's the only reason why you gave the dog that name so you could use that line huh?
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Very, very touching couldn't be done any better. Next month will be tenth anniversary of my Mothers passing and it still seems like yesterday my Mom's condition never got as bad as Peggy's but there were moments but then the next day back to normal. I was worried about it getting worse but the Nurses told me even if it seems like she's not there she knows you are there. I hope you were told that. BTW the name of the narrator was that a coincidence? You know what I'm asking
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Oh boy the way Nathan ended the chapter just gave Corey the longest weekend of his life.At the very least he could have just texted "Hey"🤞
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Now I was confused. I didn’t know why Miss Elly had a reaction to Beth Ann and why Dad said my youngest instead of our youngest. Well that was a twist I didn't expect
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Very good beginning. and a straight couple living with two gay couples? Man, this could get interesting!’ sounds like a premise for a lame ass U.S. television sitcom'..... Six's Company?🤔 Gotta work on that. (Not sure you Aussies will get that)
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That is literally a once in a lifetime vacation. I would have gone bankrupt just eating at all the snack bars in the parks. Only one thing can ruin this story. Abel getting parole 33 years from now. Think of this as a preemptive strike. Although a talented writer such as yourself could probably make that interesting
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If I read a news item stating Mrs Smith assaulted Marie Calendar ...It's your fault
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A redneck friend told you this?🤔...........So this is based on a ....TRUE STORY!!!!! Funny stuff😄
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Maybe that's where the expression" piss off "cams from
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