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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 35 S2

    Well Louella has a friend the person who's dog she was sitting fo.......Oh I just saw the second part of your statement....You're right what the hell was I thinking
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    Chapter 35 S2

    That's because at the time she was being visited by the ghost of Christmas past
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    Chapter 35 S2

    You know me always trying to find a dark lining on a silver cloud. But for a while I worried about Devin spending too much time with Jeff while Mac was studying. I think Devin is of high character but there was a lot of alcohol that one night. Which got me thinking if Devin tried to transition while under the influence could something serious happen? Could you imagine Prestons reaction if it looks like Bear is drunk
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    Chapter 35 S2

    You think they can find a way to continue after they graduate
  5. Very interesting to hear all this from Nick's perspective. One thing we didn't get in the other story was any conversations between the siblings and I bet they said thing among themselves that they didn't even tell Brendan.IT would be interesting to see if Jill and Steve remember Brendan from before As I said in the comments in the previous story Nick's actions might have saved their lives but there is one other possibility perhaps Jill might have been pushed enough to perhaps kill The POS'es .If I was on Jill's jury my vote would always be not guilty I don't care what the evidence would have said. I mixed up the numbers in my head. That might imply Nick was dyslexic and it was never diagnosed.I don't recall Nick struggling in school but it might explain why he had the most difficulty as an adult out of the three siblings
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    en pointe

    More people have felt like what this poem expresses then would admit it
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    Chapter 13

    I'm glad Frank's car got f--ed up but spraying homo and rapist might have been a mistake. From the Sergeant perspective the only people who know the details about what happened to Jake besides Jake himself is Danny and Nate and the Sergeant finding out what was sprayed on Frank's car will put attention on Danny and Nate. What if Lachlan left some evidence at the house and the Sergeant visits the house and finds it. Guess who would get arrested? Nate. Hope I'm wrong🤞
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    Jamie Whatever

    I'm new to this author I gathered you wrote about these characters in other stories. Before I continue is it necessary to read the other stories first?
  9. weinerdog

    Chapter 12

    Now, you better go and see your friend, and make sure your alibi is airtight!’ Man that choice of words makes it sound as if they are running from the law or something. I do get Jake and Danny's apprehension in my late teens to my early 20's I worked in a Park and Recreation center during non school hours a lot of middle school and high school kid went there mostly to shoot hoops. When I was 22 I became friends with someone who was 16 and before your minds get in the gutter we were just friends and we still are to this day. But I do remember stuff like waiting in the line for the movies and wondering if people are staring at us so it has to be THAT much more so for Jake and Danny. ‘Well, no, I can honestly say that I haven’t laid a finger on him Sounds like Lachlan has a career in politics in the future (Or a con man) Everyone is assuming Danny's Mom is going to talk about Danny seeing Jake and that is the most likely scenario. But another possibility is perhaps Brad told Mrs. A about his mistake and perhaps she's worried about that being the reason for Danny speaking with the Sergeant Bailey
  10. Very interesting but I would still get an F- if we were tested on this stuff. Funny, sports bars didn't often have the news up on any of their televisions.How close would the missiles have to be before the sports bar would change the channel? zero hour would be eight PM that day, Beijing time. Just wonderful, five AM in New York, two AM in Los Angeles. Two AM in Los Angeles? I live in San Diego thanks to you two AM will never be the same for me I soon learned what merging was. Human sex was nothing compared to the feelings, sensations, and pleasure of merging. My new life's mission ...find a way to Megrez
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    Chapter 11

    Is this going to start to lead to something more and I mean as in NOW? Will Danny get home smelling of that stuff? Thomas left them after that, quickly returning to the seats where his family were sitting, but not before he cast one long curious look back at his friends If Jake gets outed judging by Thomas reaction in the theater will there be fallout for Danny and Nate from Thomas A couple of more inane observations from me ‘It’s school holidays, the Brad is still away, Was that a typo? Or does Danny really refer to him as "The Brad?" curious They bumped fists in farewell and once Nate had disappeared into the night this is 1975 in the U.S. they didn't bump fists yet at least not in Cali.Was it a Australian thing then? I'm old enough to remember double features and what you said about them was right.But there was one situation where I remember double features being great on really hot summer days I don't care how crappy the second movie was as long as the AC worked LOL
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    Chapter 28

    Heaven forbid someone see the real him.,“I’m not sorry. I’ll never be sorry for who I am. Nor will I hide it.” Those comment make me wonder does Kenji have to hide this part of him? What would the consequences be? Safe to say I'm guessing his father doesn't know.And would Ai be in trouble for not saying anything? Kenji realizes River would never accept the old fashion "womens" role in this relationship. Is any of the family wealth his? Or if he took off with River would he be cut off from everything including money? It would such a difficult thing even in the best of circumstances but River just might be a good enough reason for Kenji to consider this.
  13. Have you thought of pitching this to a movie studio? “They knew the helicopter was going to crash?” “Yes. I cannot say more, the elders do not share everything they know.” So where were these guys during the Kennedy assassination?🤔 "You gamble to get most of your money?" "It's not gambling if you know what the other players are holding 🎶 You got to know when to hold them.....🎶 Once again Ned paid and left an astronomical tip. He left a fifty and our meals couldn't have been much more than twenty. I have a good friend who works in a nice Mexican restaurant you think Ned would like it? "What did I ask?" "I understood you to request a fuck." "No, I didn't ask you to fuck. I meant fuck, as in that's bad." "Ah. I understand. Yes, a request to fuck would have been said with a different intonation. I apologize, but perhaps if we succeed in our task, we can fuck to celebrate." You have to be careful with expressions around Ned. Just don't say "Well I'll be damned"
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    Chapter 34 S2

    Very good chapter.....So why am I so suspicious? ..I'll tell you why things seem to be too normal that's dangerous😄
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    Chapter 10

    I knew this was possible of course but I was hoping the two POS were too drunk too be able to do much damage and Jake could handle them apparently not Nate sounds like to a "You don't fuck with my friends" type and I bet Lachlan is cut from the same cloth. Nate sounded very confident his older brother could do something about this so watch out Frank. It was implied Frank is from a wealthy family that gets him out of trouble.So what I can see happening is Frank's family investigating Jake and then everything going to hit the fan.Danny was going to call his mom at the end of the chapter she may have already heard what happened
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    Entry 55

    First really significant contact between Adam and Ross and classic reactions in the aftermath.When you are not sure where things stand silence can be the worse.I bet Ross has the same thoughts. All this drama playing out in Adam's head and he hasn't even gone to the movies with Thomas yet
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    Chapter 1

    Some of this story is going to be very difficult .Stay with it. There is a revelation at the end that makes this story have even more impact
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    Late August

    Whatever place you were writing about made me jealous where I was late August and early September who suffocatingly Hot and humid. It's better now. Thank you for the beautiful words
  19. Count me among the others if there was a test on this stuff I would get a F- But one thing was explained "Would it surprise you if I said I made you seem funny to all those people?" "You... Wait, crowd-based mind-control now? Ned, you need help." Anybody remember the show America's Funniest Videos hosted by Bob Saget? The above comment would explain why the audience laughed at anything he ever said
  20. Apparently that was enough time to warp you (BTW I was born in Columbus Georgia I guess that explains me also)
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    Chapter 8

    BTW In 1975 The Bay City Rollers were near the peak of their popularity in The U.S. In less then two years they were gone.Were they popular In Australia first?
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    Chapter 8

    Unless somebody posts while I'm typing this I guess I'll be the first one to (probably wrongly) speculate. Who are these two guys? Are they local idiots who believed the initial gossip going around? I suppose they could be well off HS seniors one of whom can afford a nice car.Did they observe Jake taking pictures of Danny and Nate the other day and that is their motivation? What were they looking for and what'd they find? The other less likely possibility is these are older guys who know of Jake from the past,That would bring up another set of questions. Either scenario is not good if it's the former and not the ladder it could cause problems for Danny and Nate which could lead to Danny being outed. The only fortunate thing in a otherwise unfortunate situation is if there is a confrontation the two guys are drunk and Jake should be able to handle himself🤞
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    Chapter 27

    I get bodyguards following Ai everywhere because she's family and it's most likely a family "Business,business" rule but they also follow River when he goes on his own to the tattoo shop.I guess Kenji other then being obsessive may have a valid reason for this if he does then River deserves an explanation “Let it go. Kenji will give you more information when he thinks you're ready for it.” Ai strikes me as a " I don't give a fuck what my brother thinks" type so If she won't say anything it MUST be serious. Speaking of Ai I like her more and more she would be a good catch for somebody........Assuming that person can stay sane hanging around with her.
  24. They shouldn't be called SmartPhones they should be called Smart ass phones
  25. My guess is what happened to Mark in the prologue and Prentiss (Laughs?) performance where the audience reaction positively increased are related. We need to know more about Ned's agenda.He could have done this with any decent comedian so why Prentiss?(or Laughs) I picked on everyone that night, English, Italians, Germans... You name it, I hit them hard. And everybody laughed. So in other words he's Don Rickles reincarnated.( I wonder how many younger readers have no idea who I'm talking about?) With all the Mob attending the shows in Vegas sort of changes the meaning of the expression "Break a leg"
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