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I'll probably be way off but my first reaction is Ned has some for lack of a better word paranormal or alien ability.Perhaps he even is an alien.You calling this story different might be an understatment

along with his new Polaroid Instamatic camera – which spat out self-developing instant photos – which he had only purchased that very morning. Just a coincidence right🤔 Nate and Danny being around a lot didn't enter into Jake's thinking at all when he decided to purchase this ‘What? Fuck no! I only do arty-farty modelling, not none of that porn crap . . .’ Nate squealed, Yeah, yeah Nate keep telling yourself that. I wonder in future job applications under employment history if Nate will write down "Arty,farty model"

It was still risky to transition into a bear what if the deputy was a Barney Fife type who would over react? Thinking about that I'm guessing a deputy could get in trouble for wrongly killing a bear. They’ll be coming here to film the episode about us on the weekend of the San Diego State game.” Was that for my benefit? I have San Diego listed in my profile. Another author who comments here @Lee Wilson mentioned The San Diego Padres in one of his stories.This is a good year to play San Diego State they have an Freshman quarterback this year

I just read a statistic. There have been over 529,000 comments on stories In GA..........I could have sworn @kbois had that many by herself

It's obvious Thomas is smitten with Adam . I'm not that optimistic the movie day will turn out well🤞 And how will Ross react if he observes Thomas being into Adam?

Jake is wise about about him being 20 and Danny being 16. In some parts of the U.S. if your age was is enough to possibly be in HS together it is legal. On the other hand in some places Jake just kissing Danny could be trouble. Brad knows he was wrong and is acting accordingly but the true test will be how Brad will act when he's under the influence

In the U.S. here's how I sort of remember things.This kind of thing wasn't spoken of in the mainstream media and in California we were not given any warning or instructions in elementary and middle school on this topic.In 1976 the show 60 Minutes did a story on underage prostitution and it opened a lot of people eyes.Believe or not in a lot of places in the U.S. it technically wasn't illegal to sell magazines containing naked underage boys in porn places.Laws were being passed based this 60 Minutes story. My point is while it is a very difficult thing to report even now today back in 75 it was THAT much more difficult. Danny will probably think no one will believe him about Brad. I wonder what Jake does that he's able to offer $50 to Danny and Nate. does he get that from selling paintings or is his family wealthy Just remember you’re welcome out here anytime you feel like coming out.’ Hmm I wonder if Jake had a double meaning for Danny "Coming out"? but he hoped that Danny’s artistic nature would see the offer for what it was; a desire to fill the world with beauty, rather than a lurid attempt to see the two of them naked. If I were the artist I would definitely state the the first part of that statement but If someone mentioned the second part I would say "Oh yeah there's that too"😆

What I'm about to write I really don't think is the case but we can't rule out yet that Jake may not have all good intentions. All the @Mark Ponyboy Peters I've read up until now tells me he is not an evil author but just the same where the chapter ended is this when Nate just happens to return from swimming ( I just edited this looks like @centexhairysub beat me to that thought) I do hope that if Jake tries to sell some paintings he'll leave the nude one in the van(BTW think he'lll ask Danny to pose)

I'm afraid to ask what those balls and chains are about

My concern now is how will Kenji's family will react and will it affect the "business business" and Kenji's part in it. since we're mostly done with the bits that overlap form IHTT, I remember at the end of IHTT there was an occasion where Alec and Finn had all of Finn's family and Henry present and River then made an appearance you probably can't tell us but will that overlap? And are we going to get conversations between Alec and River speaking of River's relationship?

I hope Devin and Mac see the co-worker when she picks up her dog perhaps they could watch the dog next time (I'll admit the yappy part of the dog is discouraging) Is there a way to get Barry's neighbor and Louella to meet? That could help things. Here's something that I can see happening. Devin and Mac offer to host Barry and Jer at their place for an away game . Then Louella calls the police about the "wild" party next door

I'll admit Danny and Nate came up with a pretty good cover story for Jake but more often than not that will come back to bite you in the ass even if it's for a good reason,Besides what good is a GA story if a secret doesn't get revealed😄 Now that the old fogies "KNOW" about Jake I wonder if owners of eating establishments will comp Jake lunch. Just to show that the town is friendly to tourists of course

You will sign those forms and leave the premises immediately. You and your perverted lifestyle disgust me!" he said, his voice rising and his beady rat face breaking out into a sweat. Jeez being a bigoted homophobe is one thing but this guy was also head up his ass felony stupid no wonder the business was in shit condition. You managed to make a character worse than Tommy Johnson. Speaking of which I hope we find out more about the boys Peter and Tim in future stories.Thanks for the update on these guys

That's the closest he'll ever come to a compliment

I can't add anything substantial to what the previous three reviewers wrote so I add this so future readers will see the number of deserved positive reviews of this story. I will say not for the faint of heart otherwise enjoy

Out of the kids Nick was the only one who suffered any kind of lasting damage and in the big scheme of things it while it was bad Nick did OK.One thing that could have been added to the excellent epilog is Nick could have have received an award for having the guts (especially for an eight year old) to find Brendan. He ended up saving a lot of lives. Many thanks for this excellent story and I'm looking very forward to Heckle Me Not. I hope your trip is one of pleasure

Rich retired after sixteen seasons, and three World Series rings, all with the Braves. After retiring, he went into coaching and won two more world series rings, each of those with the cross-country rivals, the San Diego Padres. Now I know the story is fiction The Padres have never won the WS.But thanks for that❤️

“In all my years on the bench, these two cases have done more to make a mockery of the judicial process than anything I have ever seen." The Judge obviously never read @John Henry Thicker Than Water

This is what all the readers would do IF you made that happen

Great line to end the chapter with. So this is set in 1975.Stonewall just happened in the U.S .I don't know if Australia had a similar incident in its history but by judging by your other stories befriending Jake will have it's problems

OMG so that's what happened to the money I lo.....never mind

You have to do it @Lee Wilson as you know @chris191070 is never wrong

Okay who is paying for Kathy's hospital care? I guess the State taking the house would pay for some of that.But Able's other assets which is intended for the kids could be seized.Brendan should look at how he could protect that. Also I see the question of whether Kathy should be taken off life support falling to Brendan.Can a person in Kathy's condition ever been tried in court my guess would be it has happened.

I'm not quite done reading the chapter but "The state asks you to find the defendant, Abel Cain Taft, guilty of malice murder, Abel Cain Taft????? As in Cain and Abel in the Bible??Did you really just do that??

I think I seen him Hollywood.........Wait all the young guys in Hollywood look like that