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Concur. I had some questions but I have a feeling you are going to deal with them in Jacob's story

This is a result of me watching to many damn police detective shows.Avery makes bets that Mrs. Miller will die by Christmas and she does. As far as I can tell he doesn't know the manner of how it will happen .What if it's by foul play? Wouldn't Avery winning money on Mrs Millers death be viewed suspicious? You think Columbo or Monk would be able to figure it out😄 That song you referred to When I Was Young is a forgotten classic .That's because those classic rock channels plays Satisfaction 50 times before you see something like this. I'm not sure if I ever heard The Ramones version after I comment I'm going to check it out. Although Eric Burton has been somewhat successful I think he's under appreciated.Ever hear his take on Sixteen Tons?

I know what you mean I've been there

Will this incident get mentioned in that chapter?......I know wait for the update

I was going to mention that Gus ,Josh and the group of friends are good people for Ben to have on his side. It had happened before in some of my previous placements when things weren't 'working out' and usually it cleared when I was moved. That explains why Ben's actual problems never was detected My first thought was Nathan was going to be a adversary for Ben but perhaps it might be Nathan and Ben may end up helping each other Seeing Gavin cannot come soon enough

Neither of those POS's had any idea how to make sure Joey was dead before POS #1 took Joey to the back yard? That is the definition of felony stupid .Were the authorities able to figure out Joey wasn't dead when he was buried? Or is that a detail only the readers and author know?. If I was on Mr Keys Jury and knew all those details ZI would have voted NOT!!!!gulity I don't care what the evidence said. So Brendan parents knew about him very interesting.Awesome how they handled Kathy's inheritance.BTW what state did this happen in and when .My guess is it had to the 90's when cell phones became common. In California splitting the proceeds of a house would almost make Rich and Brendan millionaires todays.Getting back to how Brendan's parents knew about him perhaps Rich told them that what he thought?

The E.T.'s that observed us have come to the same conclusion.Why do you think we haven't been visited by intelligent life yet?

Just curious are your dogs calming down yet?

When Angelo made the decision he didn't know "America" was an also a continent not just a country. This tells me he had no idea how awful Americans could be to immigrants. Italians weren't treated that much better than the Africans and Irish. I don't know if it was any different in Canada back then. BTW glad to hear from you @CLJobe

I'm so glad you mentioned writing a sequel you set it up perfectly. I'm anxious to find out what happens to Jude and the kids. I'm curious if you'll have a twist for us like Nate meeting a guy and having feeling he never had before that kind of thing. More likely Frank causing him to take Danny and Jake on their offer. Whatever you do I'm confident it's going to be great

So Kathy kicks Brendan out because he looked at gay porn but Abel asks for a BJ from a gay 15 yo and stays married to him.............🤔Am I missing something? When Brendan spoke about Kathy being being worried about Brendan touching the kids I bet part of her thinking was " Well If I want to molest the kids certainly that faggot will also"🙄 That line she will say in the future "Because I'm your sister" Yikes what planet does she live on? Are you going to write about how Brendan got to place where he was at the beginning of the first story? That should be interesting.

Maybe in Danny's and Jake's future there's I do,I do,I do,I do,I do (but not legally yet) on the other hand it it could be their.....WATERLOO!!!

“It appears to me that these two little ones love each other, and they look enough alike to be brothers. In fact, Frankie, you and John could pass for brothers also.” I think you missed the chance to title this story Frankie and Johnny after the song

Let me take a wild guess 🤔 I detect an ABBA theme Well for Danny Nate will be a great friend to have if he ever needs a SOS (Sorry best I could do ) I bet after reading that bad pun I bet all of you went Mamma Mia (I apologize again)

I hope it's not too late to post this. It is never too late for anything you post

That could apply to so many things IF not everything. I bet a certain event currently in the news influenced this

Good luck Danny and Jake. I have one bad thought since Nate and Jude don't know where they will be if something happens or Brad does who knows what they won't be able to contact Danny or Jake. One can hope that Jake told his folks and they can contact them

You can wear Skechers with a suit?🤔 ...Going to the store tomorrow for a pair of sketchers Too many chapters without an incident...I hope you don't have anything planned at theNew Years Eve party

So a huge part of what ended up happening was because of the tragic events that happened to Travis and Yvette and to a lesser degree Adam and Josephine. Ever thought of writing a one off alternate universe story of what would have happened if Travis had lived and then found out what was going on with Abel and Jill? What he would have done to Abel? Just one chapter.That's all you need just one.

Well it was all one could have hoped for but did I think it would go down this way? nuh-uh. Were the 60's in Australia like the 60's in the U.S.?That would explain a lot about Jude. My one worry is Brad a physical abuser? Thats the concern I have about Jude leaving him. I hope she chooses to do it when Brad is on a road trip.And I hope Danny tells Nate to keep an eye out on the situation

Well Done,Hard topic to deal with

Check the chapter comments in the very last chapter of your story @chris191070 said jokingly........(I think 🤔 )about Oct 1 being when your new story is out. Of course I would NEVER do something like that

With @kbois nest chapters you're down to the second but with yours it "Coming Soon"🙄 BTW @kbois missed your Oct 1 target date but with that hurricane totally understandable

This is more me then anything else but though I hope things go well It can't be as simple as they leave without a hitch.This is gay fiction after all What Brad did earlier in the story was written for a reason so I suspect that is going to rear its ugly head

At the moment all I see is two people most would call losers and they have a low self esteem. "I'd never say that, and you're not fat. Geez, I'm closer to being fat than you are. I think you have a nice body." That almost sounds like a nice person Kathy's finishing getting ready. Would you like a beer?" Abel paused, almost in shock, "No. I don't drink, and I'm only seventeen." "Good answer. You'd be out the door if you accepted. That shows he has a sense of right and wrong so I'm guessing there are things still to revealed in future chapters that might explain why they went in the direction these two went