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We readers must have the same patience Devin and Mac needed to have to find out what's going to happen.You must have worked in TV @Bill W because if this was on the air this is where you would go to commercial or "Stay tuned for scenes from our next episode"
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Chapter 17 A Slight Complication
weinerdog commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 17 A Slight Complication
I thought Deck would be a tougher nut to crack. That little snippet of Shamus story also sounds interesting,Is it posted anywhere🤔 -
🤔You speak like thats a common occurrence
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I could ask "What about those Falcons" But I won't because I know how their year went
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I can't add to any comments about the incident and hospital scenes that the other commenters haven't already said except that I agree with them. Now when the police come back to question Gray about the the previous incident with Scumbag Shane (I think stinky is too nice @Summerabbacat) how does he tell the story without implicating Mike? I'm also assuming they'll ask Raffa also when he wakes (Assuming there is no memory loss) If they can't get the story from Raffa Mike may be in a position to have to collabarate Gray's account. Will he?
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It's good to see a new chapter it's been awhile as far as the writers block goes it was worth the wait
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Sometimes it's a many splintered thing
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Come to think of it if Kieran delivered that line I think he would say something stronger then damn
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Something tells me The Viscount Edric is going to tell Lachlan what is going on between Kieran and Rory. You have a chance to use a famous line from a movie that was said to a another character named Scarlet in that movie. "Frankly my dear I don't give a damn"
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Are they sexual? Or not? I guess you have to keep reading. Now why did you put that line in there? Did you find out people stopped reading if you didn't get to the sex stuff quick enough?🤔
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We can change the lyrics and the title of the song to Devil Author 🎶He's just a Devil Author with evil on his mind🎶
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How many chapters of sexual tension are you gong to put Rory and Kieran through? The conversation of Kieran thinking would he be happier NOT being a prince got me thinking.It is way too early to speculate but would Kieran give all this up to be with Rory? I'm guessing something dramatic will happen at the engagement party.
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Oh ONLY 6k piece of cake😄 You're getting lazy (kidding😀)
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Chapter 16 Morning Came Early
weinerdog commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 16 Morning Came Early
For what it was worth, he made a mental note, for the second time, no less—good-looking young fella. Thats the second time The Ghost made that observation so I'm thinking that is going to be relevant at some point. With all the gay characters in this story maybe The Ghost will use Thayer as some kind of bait -
Yeah he needs to grow a pair ....Wait I guess he's not ab...never mind
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I'm curious how Mike just happened to be there when all this went down perhaps the phone call form Gray saying Animal is in town tipped him off. Or was Mike in contact with Animal all this time to find out what Animal was planning?
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Rory hated him. Hated him, hated him, hated him. Well they are going to be a couple and most of the long time couples I've witnessed say the same type of things
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Yep. Check my chapter reaction
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Good to see this story again and another chapter coming. With the extra time in between chapters of the other story I shudder to think what creative stuff you'll come up with when you get back to that
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I'm guessing Lucas is spending the night in jail because his Grandma sure won't come down and his Uncle is probably getting drunk and frankly I don't see either of them coming up with any bail . Hey Dwight I like KFC He dropped the book bag on the floor and asked, “I thought I couldn’t do work while I was suspended.” Sammy grinned and replied, “That’s what they want you to believe. However, school policy says you can. I looked it up on the internet.” Do schools really act that way these days? I remember it was common to get assignments when I got su....MY FRIEND, my friend got suspended
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Needless to say sounds like something you experienced the way you wrote this makes the reader understand that. But hey its a good thing you dropped the blueberries eh?
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Chapter 15 See Ya Around Cliffie
weinerdog commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 15 See Ya Around Cliffie
Ozzie said the same words as the chapter title so that tells me they will. Now how will Thayer react to that? @drsawzall is right it is starting to get to where can't tell the players without a scorecard. Shamus squinted his eyes, looking at Vern. Something about that guy didn’t ring right, he thought. He filed that feeling away for further consideration. OK another lead but right now there are to many possibilities to guess where everything is going When will Deck,Dickie Lee etc. find out about Louie Lee? Of course with this author don't be surprised if Louie Lee turns up alive -
To Share or Not to Share?
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in To Share or Not to Share?
Another chapter that's a little heavier than the 50% sex, but I believe overall, I'm still safe from the moderators lynching me. After the moderators read a chapter with more than 50% sex they would have probably forgotten about the policy. It certainly sound like Rod has an appropriate name -
Somewhere behind me I heard someone snigger,That moron is extra ignorant after what almost happened two straight friends would have reacted the same way. Animal back in town while Mike is off work🤔 I hope there is no connection
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So I have a theory on why the evil skinwalker was near the elementary school and middle school maybe he want to kidnap some boys and convert them into evil skinwalkers. BTW do they know about how many skinwalker there are walking around?(You might have already mentioned this) Tokata and Hania have a very sound plans but I'm sure most of us believe that it will not go off without a hitch.There is going to be some improvising (I'm not sure thats the right word but I hope you know what I mean)
