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Chapter 10 - Forgiveness
weinerdog commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 10 - Forgiveness
Linda ,Carla and Corey are the best also a special mention for the kids and the Coach at school. It was literally a replica of his just in my size, and it's something I still have even to this day. There's a clue for you @Al Norris you wondered if @Jeff Burton was going to kill off main characters at least he hasn't with Nathan If you're responsible with it and respect what I'm giving you I won't question anything that shows up on the bill. Deal?" Well so much for online porn(KIDDING,KIDDING) -
National pumpkin day and so close to Halloween interesting. If were a pumpkin I wouldn't feel honored on either day you'll get carved up
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Have you come across in your research a court case that actually happened that way somewhat ? If people start getting suspicious about Avery ( I'm still amazed the school official haven't said anything it would be a good 60 minutes story)But I digress if someone asks Avery how he could knows these thing he could always say "I saw it on Matlock"
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You read the Do Over series in 48 hours????😲 Impressive. The thing about do overs and changing things is you can some how make it worse
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OK since you asked for it One morning I walked into the kitchen and I saw my blonde roommate really upset. I asked "What wrong?" He/ She said "I have been trying to do this jigsaw puzzle of a rooster and I can't make head or tails out it I'm so confused " And I said "OK put the Kellogg corn flakes back in the box and I'll explain it to you"
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If it is really people just thinking Ben might be gay F them .I guess we will find out if it's more later. Of course there is nothing with Tim but perhaps later with Matt when Matt and Ben get to know each other better? Stay tuned. Well? It may sound like the paranoid rantings of your typical blonde from that I take it you Aussies tell dumb blonde jokes also
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The synonym is "I have no idea"
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I'm guessing it's more then what people think of him.So a bunch of drunk idiot homophobes thought Ben might be gay big f...in deal. I'm thinking it goes deeper. Perhaps Ben has some gay feelings and maybe he thinks he may give off that vibe
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What are the chances somebody reading this would pitch this to a network as an idea for a TV show cop drama?( not that we don'r have enough of those)If that did happen could you try to sue? Using this story as evidence?.....Not that I'm thinking of...uh....gotta go
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Chapter 9 - Sacrifice of Angels
weinerdog commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 9 - Sacrifice of Angels
I'm still working on walking and chewing gum -
Chapter 9 - Sacrifice of Angels
weinerdog commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 9 - Sacrifice of Angels
so in other words ....Never -
Good Chapter. I forgot something important before reading this chapter never be even a little bit hungry before reading one of @CLJobe chapters. Now I know what I'm going to make for dinner...gotta buy some okra.
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Chapter 9 - Sacrifice of Angels
weinerdog commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 9 - Sacrifice of Angels
He hasn't done so yet but I know what you mean.For what it's worth I'm optimistic Man with @Jeff Burton when it rains it pours. The only thing you left out is James and Garrett were in the car that hit them( Oh crap I hope I didn't give him an idea) -
Why did the name Louella pop up in my head when I read this🤔(Not really I wouldn't even wish this on her)
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Well this brings up a question .Devin with his ability to transform into an animal and other humans is there anything different in his anatomy because of that and could the Doctors detect anything? So this apparently takes place in January 2024. Because that was the score of the Wisconsin-LSU game was 35-31. I wasn't a nerd and looked it up I just happened to remember watching it.Why? I have no idea.That's almost as nerdy as looking it up
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I normally would be worried but I think it is too soon in the story. I get a feeling Matt and Luke will end up working together. Spending his days watching Days Of Our Lives? That soap is from the U.S. which I apologize to all the Aussie's on behalf of The U.S.
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Hello HOT workout partner (Offer to spot) But seriously swimming is great
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so if it’s good enough for them, why isn’t it good enough for me and Sam? Fair point Ben but just make sure you don't get a unwanted pregnancy. If Ben acts that way toward Matt interactions with Sam what is he going to be like if a straight guy does it
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Chapter 8 - Blue on Black
weinerdog commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Blue on Black
What a complicated person Nathan is.While most of this is on Nathan,Max and Corey had their moments also.I don.t Care how mad you are at Nathan you don't hang with homophobes considering you have two moms .And Nathan no reason is good enough to out someone even if you did make valid points. @Jeff Burton I'm tempted to say you took impulsive teenage stupidity to an extreme but I'm guessing you dealth with people just like that. BTW if I lived with Nathan I would find ways to stress him out s I I wouldn't have to do chores ( I'm kidding about that part 😆) -
I'm missing something I think .The people with Red auras couldn't you prevent that from happening if you knew that the person was going to be murdered? There is no hard and fast rule to that is there? Also the blue auras if the auras are light blue maybe the illness haven't been discovered yet and something can de done. But hey your story so your rules about auras😄 I'm surprised Mr Littleton and Mrs.Rose didn't say anything about this to anyone after they found out
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I had neighbors who lives across the street from I grew up with all the kids. One daughter passed away far too too young about 15 years her daughter came to visit her grandmother first time I seen her since her mom dies . I could have sword I was looking and speaking with her Mom even the voice the same. So I get why Uncle Frank and others react the way they do to Beth Ann especially being family
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For some reason I didn't get a notification for this.But the previous readers said things better then I could have said it.I'm curious how much research Charlie did about New York.He's fortunate he met a good man in Tom in New York the wrong kind of person can smell a fish out of water. Maybe he doesn't meet Eddie if he hadn't met Tom first
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Joseph Petri, the younger, and Joseph Brown grew up with four great father figures, who were all gay, but to prove that homosexuality is not a choice, both boys were straight as an arrow.Well that was as STRAIGHT and to the point as you can get
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Judging by the comment made I'm guessing we will see Tony in this story at some point. although maybe if he’d been about one hundred years younger, things might have been a bit different! Only a 100🤔
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I might have missed it but was anything put in writing before Angelo and gene worked on the bridge? That was brazen by the council.In your story the council men are disciplined but I bet in today's climate while the injured party MIGHT be taken care of the councilmen will continue on business as usual
