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After the way I saw Billy perform in this chapter I do
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I think we found out in this chapter if there is something to find out Billy will. Billy had no idea why Raul was the first witness called but he did his due diligence and found out all the background of Raul and his connection to Calvin and although he had no idea how relevant what he finds might be you never know and Billy certainly was prepared. “The Honorable Stephen J. Arthur presiding.” WHO?????.....I thought was Judge Crustypants....Now why did I think that🤔?
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First Judge Crustypants and then Elvis dying while trying to do a certain bodily function and now Schitt's Creek how exactly did we get here🤔?
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Lost A Day, What Else Aren't They Telling Me?
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Lost A Day, What Else Aren't They Telling Me?
Broken chicken leg? Shepards Pie,Chase Shepard? really interesting stuff. It sounds like Simon and Carlo may end up helping each other. Watching a Jaguars game? I think that was also in Start Of A Strange Friendship.Roy and Cory. Ever consider having characters from another story make a cameo .Just for fun? -
Bryan action were definitely reckless but he did make a valid point.Sure Judge Crustypants is a pompous ass who thinks he knows best and it wouldn't occur to him to ask Bryan and Caleb how they feel about these visits but as far as I know Billy didn't ask that question in court nor did Diego and Steve asked that it should be brought up . And I would like Calvin to be asked "Do you think you are blameless about the children not wanting to see you?"
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Bravo Isabella ❤️ she absolutely gets the gold star in this chapter. While Cosmo has been the biggest moron in this story Vincenzo isn't too far behind.he seemed to have no idea this homophobe talk isn't a good look. I wonder if Giorgio really needed to take off his shirt or if it was planned. Of course I hated how it ended but we were given a clue about that. Although she said otherwise to Cosmo it seemed like she actually wanted to kill Pietro. I'm thinking after Cosmo finds out about all this he'll do the right thing eventually but not after a lot of soul searching
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Don't you mean sneak in some work while writing?
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Jason giggled and said, “You wouldn’t be the first person I had to fight off me.” I stopped walking and turned my head toward him and said, “I bet.” Because of his dark skin tone, I couldn’t tell if he was blushing, but I was sure that he was. “I would assume you have all the girls hitting on you. I was going to ask about this when dark skin tone was mentioned does that mean Jason is Black? or Hispanic,Asian? It's not that important just curious
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You might want to change that to "Is Phil playing cupid, trying to get Jason and Colin together"LOL but we all know what you meant though. I think it's a good bet Jason and Colin will get together.And while it is way too soon to speculate how about this. Phil petitions to be released to his home and have Colin and Jason move in with him.Jason being a therapist living with Phil would be a big factor in that getting approved. And then Phil's jackass son (He's a jackass until proven otherwise it's possible he's not) will object to this because he wants to sell the house.
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More Difficult Patients
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in More Difficult Patients
Okay we as readers had the advantage of reading the story as events unfolded But Carlo pretty much knew the same thing thing we did.He had just seen Duncan and a day later he speaks to Simon's father now granted Carlo didn't know it was Simon's father but being so soon after speaking to Duncan it should have been in the back of his mind and maybe ask "Was there an incident that makes you think your son is gay?" And BTW would there be some kind of possible conflict of interest here? OK so not initially making any connection is one thing BUT when Carlo found out Duncan ,Simon and his Dad were at the same meeting he should have told Duncan to leave.Any moron who would take a baseball bat to someone's leg like that you have to be concerned what that person is capable of. I'm sorry but if I'm on the outside looking in I would say Carlo is incompetent.- 25 comments
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Unlike Alec's mom Mae River's mom is making some kind of effort that counts for something.I guess that trip to Iowa Alec and River took to Iowa served two purposes. That page River's Mom saw his tattoo art on? I hope River didn't put a link to his other page "cough, cough" Or did he?🤔
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Wow you covered the range of emotions really well here. I suspect the only thing that stops or stopped a lot of us from making a similar mistake Cosmo made is opportunity Cosmo thought there would be an opportunity with Giorgio.Will this make Marco finally give up on Cosmo for real? "There was about as much love and tolerance in that room as there was at the fucking Spanish Inquisition.” You have to be somewhat intelligent to make that reference so Cosmo isn't a total moron but he is sure acting like one
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You didn't say anything.What's the matter? CAT got your tongue
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HA!!!!!🙄 Oh wait if you mean as compared to @kbois well.............
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Well good news you going to see a lot of him in his latest story Trash Polka
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As soon as I saw the notification that I was mentioned I said to myself "So that explains my ears burning"
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We already knew this but Marco is a nice gentle soul and I loved the exchange he had with Angelo. I'm curious what the readers are rooting for? For Marco and Giorgio to be friends or a couple to do they want Marco/Cosmo. I like how you have characters from the other stories make an appearance like Viola. That got me thinking of another character and this character might be the one that could get through Cosmo's thick skull. I'm speaking of Enzo. Any thoughts?
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It was good to hear that no children at the hospital from the previous year was there or had to come back. I don't recall Devin and Mac telling Gramps about the connection a few people made about the two incident's This would be a good segment on the show The Unexplained I could see cell phone footage and William Shatner saying "Who is this person and where did he come from?And where did he go?" I'm just hoping there isn't some incident where they have to act fast in a dangerous situation and some people witness the transformation
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This guy John seem to be oblivious that he's ticking Bryan off. Is this your way of saying That Bryan,Diego etc. are people you actually know from the past. There has to be a way to take precautions with Calvin I would hope.As far as I know there is no restraining order is there? It's not like they can't get within a 100 feet of Calvin or anything like that right? I'm thinking Of Billy hiring someone too discretely tail them on the visit
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The One That Changed It All
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The One That Changed It All
Well two interesting plot points one with Carlo losing a patient in a horrific way and also helping Steve. WOW!! Does the plane really get that low in St Maartens? In San Diego there's a plane path you can see from interstate 5 where you swear the plane is going to hit one of the Tall buildings downtown.But that is nothing compared to this. You mentioned a couple of weeks ago with the other story about having psychologist jokes ready for this so let let me be the first A man walks into a psychologist's office and the Doctor asks "what do you do for a living? The man said "I'm a mechanic"and the Doctor said "Get under the couch"- 30 comments
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My first reaction to this is this one is going be darker then the others.Be interesting to see if Karl is still in Carlo's life or if not will he get back into his life
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When I saw in my notifications that @kbois and @Mrsgnomie commented around the same time I went oh-oh what happened now?😳 Thankfully nothing😄
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THE BEATLES!!!!!😲.....WHO ARE YOU!!!!!!....kidding😄
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In addition toeing a teenager with an additude there is low self esteem, drugs,irrational sibling rivalry and a friend who's a bad influence.So mucho overcome. In addition to everything @drsawzall said about Betta there was also the cigarette burn on above her breast so perhaps I have been Judging her too harshly. Cosmo glared at her. “I can hold my own.” Elisabetta let out another gale of laughter. “I’ll bet you can. Even though it came from Elisabetta have to admit good line.😄 “You could probably ask Giorgio. I’m pretty sure he’d be willing. The kid’s seriously fixated on you.” The blackmail Giorgio was hinting at last chapter could it have been that he wants to get it on with Cosmo?
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How did John Cole see Jim in the bar without being seen himself? Was he wearing a disguise? The two detectives combed the bar for three straight nights. Can you comb a gay bar for three STRAIGHT nights 🤔
