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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 7

    I'm not done reading the chapter yet but as I read that Cole was the last name of George I went Oooooh Boy
  2. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    It would help if you read I Hate This Town first if you haven't That's an awesome story and would help you understand this story better
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    Chapter 43

    Just remembered something I forgot to put in my previous comment well two things.One is whoa so much adversity has happened in Ry's life. The other is I don't know what you have planned but I'm confident it will be good. But my thinking is only way to get Judge Crustypants to be fair is for Billy to hire somebody to investigate the Judge past (I'm sure he Billy knows people who can ) And then if they find something to then hang it over the Judge head. I normally wouldn't like doing something like that but me thinks its the only thing people like Judge Crustypants understand
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    Chapter 43

    Didn't get a notification again it wasn't until the comments came until I found out about the new chapter.Whats up with GA sometimes? I have to say that is one of the better if not the best interactions I have read between a straight boy and gay boy. “And I'm the token straight boy in this situation, which makes me a big spoon by default. I don't need to wake up to your pirate invading my port looking for buried treasure. There is zero booty in this booty.” That was a very interesting way to put that😄.For the record speaking for myself if the straight guy is hot enough he can be the big spoon
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    Chapter 4

    I don't understand what did Marco do wrong? Unless you meant Come on, Cosmo
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    Chapter 4

    Other then Elisabetta being p---ed off what would be the repercussions of Giorgio outing Cosmo? This is Ravello after all . There must be more to it. Sadly I can see this contributing to Cosmo's downward spiral to where we are told this story is going. I see absolutely nothing redeeming about Elisabetta and Giorgio I know Cosmo finds Ravello boring but what kind of option is this?
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    Chapter 4

    You just stole my line😤...kidding😄.Seriously the very idea that you and I were thinking the same thing should scare you to death ( you weren't spying on me were you?)
  8. You're take on things is almost as entertaining as the story itself
  9. I had thought Jerry hit the jackpot with Burton but like as IRL it was not to to be. Good story .I would have added only one thing after Bullard got convicted I would have put him in Rosharon in the cell next to Mo
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    Chapter 4

    @drsawzall - we must have attended school at the same time! I remember that Thanksgiving vividly! What does Columbus have to do with Thanksgiving?🤔 He was at Plymouth Rock also?
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    Chapter 4

    A very good get to know about each other more chapter especially on Colin's part. It is too early to know if Stanley is gay or just a small kid who gets bullied. In either case Colin looks like a better option to speak with Stanley with Colin being younger and not too far removed from being in HS.If Colin succeeds in gaining Stanley trust he could then bring Phil in to add his experience as a counselor. Not only is Phil's story interesting so are Colin's and Stanley's sort of like getting three stories in one
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    Chapter 8

    RivKen would be the best one. That would guarantee longevity.Why? The longest streak in playing consecutive baseball game was set by Cal Ripken so Ripken,RivKen?....Okay I know that's a stretch
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    Entry 40-41

    OK this it pretty much the first time we hear about some slightly annoying trait Ross might have (talking too much) and being lousy at helping Adam exasperated things little plus the tiny blow up between Carl and Ross.Rough patch ahead perhaps? I never noticed the book cover before (Took me long enough) I'm guess Ross house is on the left side and Adam is on the right? One tiny insignificant error. I broke it up without any bloody noses or broken furniture like a WWE match and came home. The time frame this story takes place WWE was called WWF then. The fact that I know that says more about me then anything else
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    Chapter 8

    Later as we know River and Kenji will have a front row seat to what was happening with Alec and Finn I wonder if observing those two help them navigate their own relationship. I had no idea how much paint was smeared over my person and I quickly lost track of time. If River went out in public with all that paint on him would Anyone really notice?🤔 So Kenji overheard a member of his staff speak of Rivers page. I hope you write a scene where River shows up with Kenji at his place of work I would love to see the staff member reaction
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    Chapter 3

    It wasn't that bad of a pun. Don't go Russian to any conclusion
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    Chapter 5

    I have to agree .If Maggie says Mike should go to the guest room If I'm Liam I would go NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!
  17. Senile? Let me tell you I'm going to call President Reagan and.....never mind
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    Chapter 5

    Really? Well I see Mike as this bodybuilder and.....kidding😄
  19. I think all Fred has to do with these cases is say "Silas Thompson was his attorney" And they say "Appeal granted"
  20. What a doofus I could have sworn I left a comment when I first read this hours ago.The mind is the first thing to go. Let's see its March 27 2024 right?(checking) Okay got that right not hopeless yet
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    Chapter 3

    Please forgive me with this question but I wonder if I am that far out of the loop? I'll tell you what I mean “Say, did you see the girl who was hanging around here earlier?” Vincenzo whispered. “She was totally giving me the eye.” now growing up the conventional wisdom for a gay boy is to not approach a straight guy the way Cosmo did. Did that change somewhere along the way? The way I see it unless there was a possible clue that Vincenzo might be receptive you don't do that.There were other ways to find out if thing could be possible with Vincenzo.Now having said that I acknowledge I'm one of the least qualified person on this topic to speak on this topic. Marta Rossi and her kitchen crew had done their usual annoyingly excellent job. The pancetta was crisped to perfection, and the pasta glistened with just the right amount of perfectly set egg and parmigiano cheese. There was no alien cream, and no drab, dried out omelette at the bottom of the box. I forgot something never read a @James Carnarvon chapter on an empty stomach.
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    Chapter 5

    Don't ask me I forgot
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    Chapter 5

    “Cool down, Buster,” Ken said. “It ain’t gonna happen.” “Well, be warned,” Tom threatened, “I intend to wear you down.” Good thing I'm not Tomas guardian if he's cute I would be tempted but no I wouldn't do anything..........Probably ...no, no really I wouldn't
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    Chapter 5

    Oh jeez didn't think of that but that would be the way to really hurt Joe let's hope that's wrong.🤞
  25. weinerdog

    Chapter 5

    Everyone pretty much covered what there was to talk about this chapter pretty well. BTW @Arch Hunter some authors like to have pictures of what their characters look like you think you have one of what Mike and Liam look like? "How did you manage to forget about your mom’s birthday party?" I thought Olivia was smart but even my lame ass could have came up with a better one then that
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