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I mentioned Columbo is a previous chapter comment was this chapter already written when I did😄 As soon as I heard Hospital mentioned I wondered does the the killer have any medical knowledge. That could explain how he could kill the others under everybody's noses. Perhaps the Diabetic coma was suppose to kill Ian (check the insulin bottle) When they managed to save him the killer had to resort to a more crude method smothering him
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Interesting time to say you're gay after you kiss but I'm happy for them. Shit, I hope my Mam never hears any of that, now that I think of it. Well maybe Adam shouldn't write it down on paper perhaps Mam will wonder why Adam is acting strange and is worried he's and drugs she'll use that as justification to look in his journal and.......
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Fact checker? You heard the saying "Don't let the facts ruin a good story "? Well @kboisstories are good so what does that tell you?
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I get the feeling Fred would rather stay on the inside. Unless the guard is so much of an a-hole that even his fellow guards don't like him I see a number of guards ganging up on Mo.Hope I'm wrong
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Isn't that smell with you all the time?
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Saw your chance to be first on page 3 and you jumped on it
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@drown I didn't comment much on this story because I didn't who @kbois was. But when you read the comments in the next two stories you'll understand this comment better. BTW we in the Korner Krew are taking bets on when @kbois will send you to the korner. Not if but WHEN!!!!
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You don't realize what you "stumbled onto" not only a great story but two follow up stories that are equally as great.Happy reading
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I totally get why Kenny was uncomfortable with the money being spent on him but one thing he said " It feels like I'm being erased and replaced by someone else, like I'm not good enough as I am.” That is an interesting perspective I never thought of. In keeping with that kind of thinking Kenny will now be wearing nicer clothes I wonder if certain people at school will now try to befriend him and maybe even girls who don't know he's gay will start talking to him. It was surprising to hear the twins refuse to sleep in separate rooms I guess that's because of Quinton. BTW Bryan was being a good BF in this chapter
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The Verdict, Sentence, and Off to Rosharon
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Verdict, Sentence, and Off to Rosharon
This is the ONLY reason why I'm against the dead penalty if you convict the wrong guy and find out later there is no redress you killed an innocent person pure and simple why is it so hard for some people to understand that? Mo has a lot of influence in prison but does he know someone on the outside that can find out what happened? When they find out about Bully DON"T impose the death penalty let him meet Mo instead- 17 comments
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Where's Colombo? He would have had this solved by now
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I guess that proves 13 is unlucky
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I had the same thoughts although the leaving Mike and Liam together would be pointless they are in the same bedroom after all. Olivia is sure direct isn't she? If it's a girl she brings for Mike how does Mike explain he's not interested and what would he say to Liam? If it's a boy she brings for Mike then you have to wonder what has Liam been saying to Olivia? If Liam is interested in Mike and Olivia brings a boy then that is certainly going to cause some tension. Learn how to wrap a towel in school?....Where would the class be held? I can just hear the conversations. "Why did you flunk this class? "Towels kept falling I got distracted"
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Out of so many things that at the moment don't add up with the last one happening in a jail cell it the only possible explanation is this is being done from someone in the police dept. someone who knew about Ken and Jason and also knew their weekend plans
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I'm glad they found Bailey but Preston has to be wondering how Bear seems to understand English. So Devin makes himself taller now when making love to Mac. I know some friends if they were able to do what Devin could do they would make something else bigger.
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Duh!!!! I meant Devin
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I haven't read the chapter yet but the first line tells me Colin as a dog ended up in the Dog pound .I'll see if I'm right now
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Yes this sure is a departure .You could have done a new story more your usual style and I would have been happy but it will be interesting to see how you're writing talents will tackle this topic. I'm confident this is going to be good. A few reactions my Step Dad needed care in much the same way Phil did .I moved back home to help there was NO WAY!!! If I could help it let him go into a nursing home or let my Mom try to do it alone. Unless there is something we don't know yet I have to agree with Phil his Son IS selfish especially since Phil can afford to hire a caretaker. I'm guessing there are going to be a lot of interesting flashback stories Phil is going to tell Colin. Sounds like Colin is a virgin
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I like a good murder mystery but it sounds like Fred is going to pay a price for them arresting the wrong guy. Two things from what I understand all murders have a motive what would it be here? Also Bullard (I refuse to call him by his nickname although it sounds accurate) left some semen behind . I guess if you do your job throughly enough you can detect the mixed samples of semen but I'm guessing here that The M.E. will half ass it and not find it.
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In case you didn't know Calvin is a sperm donor character from @John Henry story Thicker Than Water
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Bryan was briefly worried about Jamie..er James after his comment about Kenny but perhaps Bryan should be worried about Kenny and Quinton. I think Kenny is too good of a guy to do something like that but stranger things have happened
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I had the same thought .I have about 4 or 5 scenarios going on in my head some of them really out there. But at the moment Olivia asked Mike to hang with them the next day a GF is unlikely to do that so I think she's playing matchmaker BUT if Liam and Olivia really are BF/GF then this looks like she wants Mike for herself
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Hey @drsawzall Mike must of read your chapter comment about the super glue.
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So many things to learn.The second murder happened when everyone was awake so this is happening in some unconventional way. And what is the motive? And why was the first victims penis severed but not the second victim?
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Ross smiled after the kiss that's what made the night perfect. I never seen sourdough pancakes offered anywhere I'm curious what they taste like
