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Meet the Clients, aka, A Trip to Rosharon
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Meet the Clients, aka, A Trip to Rosharon
Couple of thoughts I could see Fred actually getting to like Burton a little bit .If Fred manages to get both Mo and Burton out and they all cross paths ....OH BOY. All these cases of people being convicted wrongly in the state of Texas some readers might just brush this off as fiction but I heard of a real life case in TEXAS that was worst than what is portrayed here. The person Lanell Jeter got convicted of murder when there was plenty when there were plenty of eyewitness accounts that at the time of the murder in Texas he was at his job at Fuddruckers in SAN DIEGO where I live. It took a story by the TV show 60 Minutes to get him out.WTF. It does definitely happen -
Try 1,000 good comments and then.....maybe
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I'm curious how the chapter ended about seeing a smiling Bobby. Was he speaking of in his mind? Or did Bobby die and Phil is seeing an afterlife version of Bobby? Looks like Paul McCartney eh? A couple of more thoughts I'm picturing Colin being a go between trying to get Phil and his son to talk to about Why Phil married and the social pressures of being gay back then. I still think Phil's son is a jackass but perhaps he deserves to know why Phil did what he did. I'm also thinking we are going to meet Stanley in a future chapter
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What a doofus I though I commented earlier in the day but I didn't click send Duh. Such a drastic change in Kenny's life. I can't see a situation where is mom gets better and then Kenny's to live in that situation again.I'm thinking if she gets better she'l move into Billy and Trevor's place. James rolled his eyes and laughed. “Har, har, har. What do you call a guy who has a kitchen fetish?” Bryan looked confused and said, “I don't know.” “Pan-sexual. That one is so obvious I'm surprised I never heard it before. There was a strain in Ry's voice that Bryan picked up on but didn't know what it was. I take that to mean something tragic happened in Ry's life and something James and Quinton did triggered a memory
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That’s What I Call Entertainment
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in That’s What I Call Entertainment
If you had ended it with “My dream was coming true,” A bunch of us would have came at you torches and pitchforks. Many times I have seen random people that made me think "Is that a guy or a girl?Well either way that person is hot." If I ended up in Cary's situation any of those times and it turned out to be girl I would have been OK with it -
I like the prologue. Three Dog Night is still performing? I know a key member died if I'm not mistaken. One time in the 70's they and The Guess Who toured together in New Zealand and Australia in New Zealand they were more popular and they headlined but in Australia it was the other way around so they were the warm up act. Go figure. My bus is here so I'll have to read chap 1 later see you in a few hours
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Classic case of opposites attracting. “One thing you can count on, Ken, I’ll never lie to you.” Well he already has he had Sal take care of those guys because the brother were horning in on his gambling empire not because of a hit out on Ken
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Oh really? How often have you experienced that?
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Some Surprising Turns of Events
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Some Surprising Turns of Events
The prediction I referred to last chapter was partly right I was thinking Fred's backgound as an attorney might come into play in helping Mo. but of course I couldn't guess any of the details. What @drsawzall about Silas possibly being related to Bully is interesting but even if Silas was doing his job in good faith there is this "Well, Silas and I worked together pretty closely, shared a lot of information, helped each other out. I'd like to continue that practice with you, after you get settled in. Maybe make that after you get buried in the BMW paperwork." If Dante helped Silas an attorney who was terminated for incompetence if I'm Fred I would take anything Dante says with a grain of salt -
What's the difference between 2 Lawyers in a BMW and a porcupine? On a porcupine the pricks are on the outside.
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Mo's response showed that He really loves Fred. I have an idea what's going to happen but with my track record of predictions I won't express it here. There was a cheap motel, one with a number in its name,.Gee I wonder what motel you could possibly be referring to🤔
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The dumbest?????? Wow that is saying something.
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@kbois after reading that
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The only thing that would have made that better is if the shot included their bare feet
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I'm sure you noticed the banter in the chapter comments in this story has ratcheted up. It is almost as entertaining as story itself
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I guess that's why you had Larry leave him.5 more stories?Well I hope by the end of the fifth story Ken find Mr Right
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Formal Meetings With the Warden
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Formal Meetings With the Warden
If Mo and Fred find a way to have sessions more regularly Fred may not want to leave. @akascrubber alluded to this how in the world could they NOT know Williamson lived next door to Fred? You'd think that would be basic -
All of the comments here are spot on. While I understand why the Father of the 12 YO was upset about Liam pushing the kid he totally ignored what his kid did that to me makes him an A-hole Okay @Arch Hunter will probably ban me for this but here goes. I want to be a barber one day. What do you call a barber for dick hair?” I know a barber that only offers that one service.I went one day and there was a long ling .Once some found out that was the only service he offered some of them left.It became a......Receeding hairline.....Okay sorry about that
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I'm not even close to being done reading this chapter but I wanted to say this while it is still fresh in my mind. Maggie's scars and comments about never being able repay Mike's Mom tells me she was in a abusive relationship or maybe was cutting herself as a result of the abusive relationship my heart breaks when I hear about things like that
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More Time or More Waiting?
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in More Time or More Waiting?
So what story is Mo going to tell Winters? It should be a doozy.- 16 comments
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A thought occurred to me. I know it is way, way too soon to speculate especially this story being different and all but what I would like to see later in the story is Phil finding a way to make Colin his power of attorney.I have a feeling Phil's jackass son will want to sell the house
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Well I was wrong...I know AGAIN!!!!😄 Are you planning on having CSU being good enough to make a bowl game? You can write an interesting road trip if you do
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I haven't finished the chapter yet I'm at the part where Mac said they saw the same two coyotes and I thought is that Gramps and Pop? Probably not since none of the other comments said anything about that but it would be cool. Okay now to finish the chapter
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I missed your question.I was 13 he was 12 we had the same birthday I don't know if that's why we discovered each other. He went on to live a straight left got married has kids. We are still friends today
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After hearing Phil's dad talk about black people safe to say the gay topic would be off the table.Did Phil's story take place in the 70’s? A lot of people would be very messed up if they experienced what Colin did. Perhaps he still is I agree with @chris191070that both of them might help each other
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