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Everything posted by weinerdog
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After the way Kenji found River I'm convinced he could have found Amelia Earhart and Jimmy Hoffa
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In a sense Kenji is as unlikely for River as Finn was unlikely for Alec but here we are
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Child Protective Services Helps, Sort Of
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Child Protective Services Helps, Sort Of
While Kathy is absolutely a bitch I get the sense after hearing Nick tell Brendan about Abel not wanting Kathy using the cell phone she might be getting abused also. I hope Brendan calls his older brother he might need reinforcements on this. When you replied to @mayday about coincidences being explained I'm thinking Nick overheard his POS parents talking about Brendan. I don't know if he's smart enough yet to know how to find an address but perhaps his older sister showed him how to do it (without saying it was Brendan he was looking for) I'm guessing Nick showing up on the porch wasn't random and if you notice how quick Nick said Uncle Brendan🤔- 41 comments
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Child Protective Services Helps, Sort Of
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Child Protective Services Helps, Sort Of
Geez I didn't get the notification for chapter one and didn't read it until today....Did you take attendance?......Am I going to get detention?- 41 comments
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It took my thick skull awhile for me to possibly consider the meaning of the title Song For Guy does Tim compose a song for use in the musical? Maybe I'm wrong. Tim is going to be acting on stage with Samantha will the script call for Tim and Samantha's characters to kiss? If so how will Ben take that. Guy also for that matter
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@Ronyx has done that in previous stories.Remember the last story Seth On The Road To Chaos? In the last chapter Seth left his father's house to go back to his mother' house and we don't know how Seth and his dad relationship was after that. Some things takes longer to resolve (Although Roger should realize it's at a point in Phil's life that it might be getting too late) or sadly in some cases it never gets resolved. Perhaps there will be a phone call where they agree to start to try? Maybe too optimistic on my part
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Everything is falling into place for everybody involved. I was glad to see Mr.Maxwell is a competent administrator I’m sure that Roger had probably ranted about it in front of him. I decided that I would wait until a later date to discuss it with him. He’s also extremely timid. He sat with his body pressed into Allen. He avoided making eye contact with me and Colin. What I take from that is Derek heard some of Roger's rantings and doesn't know what to make of his great grandfather. I also wonder if Derek is gay and got hurt by Roger's rantings “Besides,” he smiled, “I want to swim in that big pool.” I laughed and replied, “Only if you go skinny dipping and I can watch.” Sounds like Phil read my comment from the last chapter.🤔....I also think Stanley will like it there😄
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Sounds like your classic elderly relative with no filter
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More the ladder then the former I guess
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You left out one major one @kbois melting down after reading on her smartphone the latest post by @weinerdog= 4+hours
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Well in honor of National Avocado Day I'll have a Carne Asada burrito (Like I wasn't going to anyway)
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Out of all the things I could have guessed Julie and the gay bar was one of the last things I would have figured on ,Good for her. When you were writing IHTT when you got to this point in that story was that part of your thinking yet?
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Well obviously this was a long shot type trip with a LOT of risk but still even with the disappointing results at least he won't wonder "what if?" and thats something. I do wonder and worry if using his real name to make reservations at the hotel will somehow tipoff Ahmet old boss🤞
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If you're not saying anything then in addition to these plausible questions you could have asked stuff like "Is he joining The French foreign legion"
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That wasn't a typo was it?
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Not only finding the kissing hot but the exchange between Ben and Guy "Are you offering?" and "Already taken" Maybe that wasn't kidding around at least on Ben's part
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In addition to that.... "No. That isn't true, although it is a common misconception. Even identical twins have different fingerprints." "Oh. Um, Were the matches you found between the sisters and the evidence exact matches?" Pretty incompetent attorney if you ask me I love a good murder mystery and this checks all the boxes and more
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@Summerabbacat won't be happy to hear that
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The introduction of Joey in the story (I don't remember if he was mentioned before) was nice. He really should tell Ricky about Randy. The reason why I quoted this is because of the mention of going bareback .Ricky has been pretty active with guys and girls on tour I can't say I'm not worried
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I don't think he has any idea of anything
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After seeing that picture no wonder Ty went with his mom to welcome the new neighbors I sure would have. I was too busy taking in the boy who was wearing only a pair of denim cut-offs and sneakers...Ty wasn't wearing a shirt? Not that I would have complained of course after the way he was described but still for a first meeting you should wear a shirt. Turns out having Tris in the lead role became a real ASSet. Great story
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I haven't started the chapter yet but after seeing the title I remember that was the nickname of one of our football coaches in HS. I thought to myself "The story is about him?"
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Well everything turned out well but wow I don't care how much research Devin did that was still dangerous. With Devin it's a thin line from being brave to reckless. And as far as I know Devin couldn't have transitioned into anything that could help him unless I forgot something. I already purchased plenty of beer. Something tells me Grandpa was a frat boy in his day. Talking about buoys like they were it reminded me of a romantic setting last time I was at the seashore.... buoy meets gull.... My apologies.
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I'm about at the half way point in the chapter as I type this .I have visions of gator trouble hope I'm wrong🤞
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I didn't (And still don't)know what to think at first I thought maybe Nico didn't see people as they really were because of some brain damage but he saw his own reflection in the mirror so I eliminated that. Now I think the accident somehow landed him through a wormhole or some thing and it put Nico in a different universe maybe his vehicle collided with an alien craft disguised as a regular car and thats how he got to this place.....Enough nutty( and probably wrong) theories for you? Nico mentioned something about cold calling in regards to selling insurance. I bet his insurance won't cover a hospital stay at Alltopia
