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Everything posted by weinerdog
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Oh yeah football .That means @kbois will be watching FSU. Okay anybody who wants to make a snarky comment about her do it during the game
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More Tests, More Evidence, and the Trials Begin
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in More Tests, More Evidence, and the Trials Begin
That part of @BentedWreath comment had me thinking Jill said Aunt Eve was his dad's sister maybe I'm overthinking and misinterpreting this did Jill say in addition to her Dad Steven is also Eve sister? The way it was worded has me confused Another possible misinterpretation on my part is if Jill was saying Eve was Steven and hers Aunt then she omitted Nick maybe meaning Eve isn't his Aunt so does Nick have a different Daddy?- 73 comments
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I was ready to believe Jake's story until Dylan brought up Take alcohol, for example. For a recovering drug addict and alcoholic, Jake was very comfortable with whiskey and beer on more than a few occasions.I have to agree there is more to it. “What?..” I gasped. “So you actually did it?” Jake squeezed my hand tighter. He nodded. The bright flashes of an ambulance driving by on the street flared in the large window next to us. How's that for symbolism? “Like all normal Americans - I heated my water in a microwave.” “Oh God…” I spoke in repulsion. “Or in a coffee machine.” “That’s seriously disgusting.” I complained. I do those same things...... Dylan doesn't like me😭
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More Tests, More Evidence, and the Trials Begin
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in More Tests, More Evidence, and the Trials Begin
As far as I know this the truly horrific descriptions Jill provided are not a capital offense but in cases like these with children it should be.I'm only against the death penalty because our justice system does convict the wrong person sometimes and if that happens in a death penalty case that is tragic but life with no possible parole OH YEAH! So I would think this trial would have to be delayed at this point the body in the back yard can be very relevant to this case but then there's the argument that it shouldn't be admissible because it hasn't been legally proven yet who's responsible for that dead body. If it is a backyard abortion perhaps Jill would remember seeing the incubator pregnant. So did you have plans all along for Stephanie Lawson to come back or did the readers have you change that? If it's the ladder then we readers are responsible for Stephanie's parents being dead aren't we🤔- 73 comments
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Another thing Noah should have swatted
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Yeah she's such a slacker
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Unfortunately my spare tire is along with me everywhere I go
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It would certainly MOUNT a challenge
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Why the heck are David's mom and dad still together?🤔
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What Peter did at the meeting should be done at a meeting with all the worlds leaders and their top intelligence chiefs with them.
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Am I stupid or is Liam possibly starting to grow up and is being sincere................Yeah probably right but hope I'm wrong
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To say Guy overreacted is an understatement but it goes to show you no matter what the gender or sexual orientation jealousy is stupid
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Good chapter Calvin. I can't help but think when Mary Lou goes to Pennsylvania University she'll be in for a lot of culture shock
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Growing Relationships, Home Ownership, and Court Looms
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Growing Relationships, Home Ownership, and Court Looms
I suppose one thing to do is to use hypnosis on Jill to remember what she blocked out.But I would be worried about the emotional damage to Jill in doing that. The Braves made the playoff? Right now the Braves are the closest team to my San Diego Padres for the last wild card spot.You better be wrong @Lee Wilson- 55 comments
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Growing Relationships, Home Ownership, and Court Looms
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Growing Relationships, Home Ownership, and Court Looms
I'm not done reading the chapter yet but as I soon as I read this line Friday night's dinner saw Brendan smiling the whole time. Everything was coming together for him. He was the happiest he'd ever been.My first reaction to that since it is @Lee Wilson 'Oh oh the shit is going to hit the fan".Back to the chapter- 55 comments
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Oops the chapter repeated itself No biggie you can edit it. It's good that Carl will teach David how to swim. I get the impression Carl doesn't get to interact much with people his age which is why he's so happy to hang with David
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“Look, before you say… or do anything stupid" In other words before you start acting like yourself
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Is that what you wear to bed?I bet you're of fun
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I bet Cruella even dislikes the caretaker and has pissed him off also
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OH MY!!!! Can't wait to see what gramps does You know Mac has a 3.96 GPA so I'm surprised while speaking to Preston with all the talk of hiring a middle school kid to walk Bear that Mac apparently hasn't thought of Preston offering to walk Bear himself next time they go out of town.They have to have a story ready just in case
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As flawed of a person I am I would never do what Jonathan seems to be trying to do.BTW do they still have directory assistance down under?If not then how did Jonathan get Tim's number? I could do with a . . .’ ‘Yeah, I know what you mean,’ he said, laughing, cutting in before I could even finish. Hey Tim anytime you need "a...'" I can can supply you with a..." (I don't care what the a...' is)
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Pool Party and A Bit of Trouble
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Pool Party and A Bit of Trouble
In case you don't find it it's a lyric in the song Harper Valley P.T.A "Well Mr Harper couldn't be there he stayed too long at Kelly's bar again" -
Pool Party and A Bit of Trouble
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Pool Party and A Bit of Trouble
I think most of us could relate to staying too long at "Kelly's bar again" -
1990’s spawned another genre of movies that I fucking hated. Basic Instinct, Cruel Intentions, Wild Things, Hey I liked the movie Wild Things It felt nice. Watching him act like this, felt nice. I never fucking imagined, that there will come a day I would wield this much power over Liam fucking Henderson. “Suck it.” I mouthed, leaning over his face and sliding two of my fingers into his mouth. That was awesome there is only one detail you could have added "It was a good thing after last using the bathroom and wiping I forgot to wash my hands"
