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  1. While I loved the chapter I couldn't help but leave a sad reaction after what Dennis has been through. I sort of figured that this is where this was going. Adam and Dennis have something in common so it sounds like a good match.I guess Dennis is too young to get a prosthesis
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    Chapter 5

    I always considered Pacha the most awesome of the group but the pathways Nicholaas made which impressed Pacha makes me think perhaps Nicholaas is the most awesome. I assume we are going to follow them to the party Horace is going to be there right? You omitted one huge thing you didn't leave a takeout number for Otherworld Pizza surely they have to have some deal with DoorDash right? If not I'm sure they can hire Kippy to teleport the pizzas.Although I will need to be tutored on all the toppings they offer
  3. Just a guess too soon to tell I have it in the back of my head that they will have to go to Saturina
  4. weinerdog

    Chapter 4

    Of course you meant you were playing cards right?
  5. Stay safe
  6. weinerdog

    Chapter 4

    More surprises in store for the next chapter can't wait. Pretty clever Having an elf named Maxine.......🤔 What's the female version of the name Geron?
  7. Toto I don't think we're in Florida anymore but we are in Kansas
  8. weinerdog

    Entry 33

    One possibility maybe Ross was hard that could have stopped me
  9. weinerdog

    Chapter 3

    365 steps? Is that one for every day of the year? If I had to climb those every time I want to visit I would say "You're a great buddy and I love you but 365 steps?......uh Rick looked briefly embarrassed. "Well, Charlie and Kip can't have all the good lines!" Rick you're going to have to talk to @Geron Kees about that.
  10. weinerdog

    Chapter 3

    Maybe they arrived just in the nick of time
  11. Didn't even get his side of the story
  12. It's a good thing Roy had Cody record everything those airheads (That's being kind) weren't even smart enough to notice Cody recording. Too soon to tell but I suspect the police may be biased against Roy.At least the head coach seems to have the right attitude. Cody may be officially the team manager but the coach might unofficially use him as an offensive coordinator
  13. weinerdog

    Chapter 2

    Perhaps it was because Mary Lou was leaving the nest but other then that factor it looks like the Mom and Dad are on shaky ground with each other. Also the girls and the guys doing everything separate seemed odd. A Merry Christmas to you and yours @CLJobe and to all the readers
  14. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    Pleasant surprise on Christmas day. Excellent story. You would think being a HS principal and somewhat familiar with teenagers that Greg would have realized he was monopolizing Chip's time but thankfully it all worked out
  15. weinerdog

    Chapter 2

    So Mildred is not from this Earth? I'm beginning to get it now @Geron Kees is not from this Earth either. Where he's from he's a best selling author.Every idea for a new story he gets he tries it out on us GA readers first and if it's a positive response he goes back and publishes it. I bet Browbeat is his pet.
  16. Great update. Just think how different things would be for them good and bad if the pandemic hadn't happened
  17. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    The guys forgot one thing to consider perhaps. They should have a generator outside the house because in a blackout Lugh will have the house with power but not the garage.Also they may have to explain why their house is lit during a blackout unless I'm missing something obvious
  18. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    I'm about to start reading the story but I see the title and I think if someone gave me a partridge in a pear tree what the hell would I do with? Not to mention the French hens ugh having to clean up after them okay on to the story
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    Chapter 4

    Do they have movie theaters there Alden and Brad could produce a science fiction movie there using where they came from as a reference Yes it a Utopia.....well not for women for obvious reasons Good story.
  20. So you need to be by yourself when you sing🤔......Maybe Sebastian could have used your singing as a weapon in the war with Huntington
  21. I would say you can cut a rug but I don't see a rug there
  22. You must really love being a beta reader
  23. "It's nice. So you decided you're not a fag after all?" Geez how much of a moron can a man be? Next Up - "Playdate, and One More Crisis" Another crisis??? How twisted can you be? I'm guess you won't post before Christmas so Merry Christmas Oh one more thing olives on Pizza? Pizza is the perfect food except for ones with olives , anchovies or pineapple on it
  24. All the previous reviews by this story very insightful readers covered everything and I can't really add anything without being redundant. But one thing I can and will do is add another 5 stars to it .It deserves so many more
  25. weinerdog

    Yonder

    One of the best things about joining GA is there is an incredible back catalogue of stories to find and this one is a perfect example Out of all the things I pictured Avery doing trucker is one of the last one I would have thought of(although it is the perfect occupation for Avery to come to Lee) I bet Harlan had something to do with Avery getting that job. Out of all the incredible characters in all your stories Mama G is by far the most delightfully tripiest (is that a word?) I consider finding this story a Christmas gift although you didn't have Christmas in mind this story had the the qualities a good Christmas story has .Thank You SIR
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