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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 14

    Well then you'll have more time to write more chapters
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    Chapter 14

    If Andy looked like that Matt won't leave to go home despite what he's been through
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    Chapter 2

    Ben with his big mouth, accidentally outed Tim to Guy, causing Tim to panic and run away. Was it really an accident? I don't Ben is that stupid. Perhaps Ben saw similarities on Tim acts being in the closet and all and how Guy acts sort of like a gaydar. Although if that is the case I agree it is pretty reckless
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    Chapter 2

    You know if the world didn't have songs titles you would not be able communicate anything.
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    Chapter 14

    As far you know are you aware of something like this actually happening IRL?(I'm sure it has but it most likely wouldn't be publicized) I have to think if somebody knew of something like this they would make a movie or something of this (Duh I just realized what I typed) So now that I just thought of this,Is this story fictional or based on something real? I only bring that up because although I have no point of reference to know one way or another but the way Matt reacted to things makes perfect sense. As far any possible legal ramifications, Did Andrew explain in his book what he had to do to get this information? Here's an Author knowing about this horrible situation and not saying anything to the authorities about it so by the letter of the law Andrew could have gotten charged with something but obviously didn't. While this is a risk I really can't see anything happening to Andrew over this It's the sound I long for from my partner if I ever have one. Until I read that thought of Andrew's I wasn't really thinking of any Andrew/Matt thing happening but now I'm thinking maybe.
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    Chapter 13

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    Chapter 13

    In your case that would be IRREGULAR regular snarkiness
  8. Dakota I think is actually a cool name.It can be both a girl and guy name.If I'm not mistaken I think Dakota means "Friend" In a Native American language. OMG you have had some of your character's go through some shit. before but as best I can remember not as bad as Dak and Jamie has gone through.These are flat out hate crimes especially the house burning down. What kind of back asswards people does then town have? Until the house burning incident as bad as some of the student are I thought the Vice Principle was the worst person in the chapter what a head up her ass moron. Not directly, of course. i heard it through the grapevine. Just like you to put a name of a popular song in your chapter
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    Prologue

    Hi, my name is Spencer Ross. I’m not much of a writer, but that’s okay. Oh a story based on yourself eh? I'm joking.I'm joking.This sounds pretty good
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    Chapter 13

    A few parts in the chapter had me worried .At first When Davis offered to stay in the cabin with Matt I thought there was going to be some forced hanky panky thankfully no Davis was just being pragmatic as was explained later. The second part was when Matt discovered his bedroom had no lock on the door .I thought for sure he would then make a run for it but I think a combination of Maeve being disarming and the storm probably made Matt think twice. Is there cell phone service there? I ask because Andy was already supposed to be there but the storm delayed him.Will Andy think of the possibility that Matt might make a run for it? Can he contact Maeve if he does think of that? Is he able to send a e-mail?
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    Chapter 13

    I'm actually glad to hear that I made a smart a** comment about her in another story yesterday (So what else is new) and she didn't respond so I really was a little bit worried .I hope she's not too bored
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    Chapter 13

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    Chapter 13

    Hey something not right here…….OMG @kbois hasn’t posted yet excuse me I gotta call 911
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    Chapter 18

    When anticipating this point in the story coming up I assumed River and Kenji relationship progressed to the point that they got closer but we now know that isn't the case. I'm now guessing Kenji showed up in Iowa unannounced .It will be interesting to find out if River did indeed tell Kenji about leaving with Alec and to what destination. If he didn't then that means Kenji would have had to investigate River's past to be able to find him. But I suppose with Kenji's wealth that would be easy enough. I'm looking forward to the scene when Kenji surprises River if that is indeed what is going to happen
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    Chapter 26 S2

    Wh...Wha....(Hic) whatever do you mean? (BTW it was because of the smartphone I always screw up on that)
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    Chapter 26 S2

    Epcot is in Florida did you see @kbois there? If you did she was probably doing the same thing you were doing
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    Chapter 1

    A Rock Opera, whatever that is? He's never heard of Jesus Christ Superstar or Hair? ‘It’ll probably be something like The Sound of Music,’ he said. Rock arrangements of Sound Of Music songs....Maybe you're on to something @Mark Ponyboy Peters ‘Now that was cute,’ I said to Ben. ‘Have you ever seen him around before?’ As soon as I read that line I knew they would see him at the audition That could be interesting. So, doesn’t anyone, besides our young AC/DC fan Graham, listen to Australian artists?’ Australia has a lot of great bands I'm surprised more wasn't mentioned by the students. I love INXS. Somehow I don't think Tie Me Kangaroo Down will make the cut. It must be a boy/girl thing, Would Snowey be brave enough to make this a boy/boy thing with Tim and Guy? (If that is the case I assure you I haven't read the story)
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    Chapter 4

    Now there's something you don't see everyday somebody who's a fan of both Pearl Jam and Ricky Albert
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    Chapter 4

    Red DID say to Ricky to have sex with others didn't he? As far as Larry goes who's to say now that he's attractive he won't have a casting couch
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    Chapter 26 S2

    Ben is my favorite cousin.......Yeah I know we're not related but I don't care HE"S my favorite cousin
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    Chapter 26 S2

    Don't think I didn't ....CATCH that
  22. Do you happen to know why Roy Orbison wore shades? Just curious.I found out recently Ringo Starr wears shades all the time because of an eye condition. One thing you could have mentioned is say 10 or so years down the road Deja Vu could have been in demand as an oldies act more and more old time bands make OK money touring these days. "Heh. Yeah. The asshole should have left out the arrest. That sucked." "Hey. Watch it. If your life really is a story, you don't want to piss off the author. "Ooof. Sorry, whoever you are." So the landlord evicted Kevin because Kevin did something to piss you off eh? Excellent story
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    Chapter 19

    Another outstanding story from one of GA finest authors. I don't know if we had any contact with ET's yet but if we haven't this story should be a guide of how we should proceed if we do
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    Chapter 19

    Good somebody was starting to pass gas (I won't say who)
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    Chapter 19

    "The adventure isn't over by any means." Jem said softly. "In fact...it's just beginning!" I think those words should answer that
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