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  1. While it was unfair of Don to say ALL of Robbies friends are freeloaders out to steal Robbie's money but it is valid to say there might be a few who would do that. One person who pops to mind instantly is the baseball player (I forget his name at the moment) and I say this sadly I don't rule out Nathan being like that. I would hope Rory would tell him that if he observes something like that happening. BTW Don says Robbie is not mature enough? I'm not sure DON!!! is mature enough
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    Chapter 18

    Then how come nobody ever helps me when I need to trim my rose bush?🤔
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    Chapter 3

    Like @akascrubber I don't know the business either but Ricky should realize that being in this business involves WILL involve some traveling what about movies would he turn down a great role because he doesn't want to go to Hollywood? You have to travel in this business the only people who I can think of who stopped traveling and got away with it were the Beatles and well they are exceptions to almost everything
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    Chapter 18

    Hey @ReaderPaul you said something about a 25,000 word chapter.Well this was 8,315 words BUT Geron cut the chapter in half so it was like a 16,000 + words so you really weren't that far off
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    Chapter 18

    I agree with @drpaladin this is Azim testing Jem to see if he really means what he says about "Jem protect Bzup" I may be on them like a pincerfly on a pup tiger turd." He sighed. sounds like something similar we say on present day Earth. This might be the one truly universal thing on all planets eh?
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    Chapter 64

    “I know. Billy built a very strong case, but there's still something fishy about the judge and Calvin's lawyer.” “Kidnapping it is, then.” Oh My could it actually come to that? You knew the real Calvin you didn't do that did you? “Ten years,” Dr. Jacobs said with a heavy sigh. “Ten years!” Bryan nearly shouted. Dr. Jacobs chuckled and said, “No. I'm just kidding. You've been here for about 20 minutes.” Oh good one Dr. Jacobs you are HIGH-larious
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    Chapter 12

    It is interesting both Andy's Mom and Dad arrived at the same thought they would have tried to stop Andy from doing this but now that he has they can't turn their back on Matt because what kind of people would they be? Quite a conflict The fact that Kanaan saw the logic that Ahmet would not tell anything as to what happened and decided to spare his life shows that he is only 75-80% evil as opposed to 100% percent evil.There are people all over the world you can't say that about. Ahmet has legitimate feelings toward Matt so the romantic optimist is all of us think or hope they might get back together but you can be sure Kanaan is going to keep an eye on Ahmet so perhaps Ahmet and Matt being seen together might not be safe for them. High school had showers like this. Hmm our school system has the same type of showers human traffickers have? I don't know what to think of that🤔
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    Chapter 17

    Yeah ... A 25,000 word epilog thanks to you...kidding😄 Those are good questions
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    Chapter 17

    Be careful what you wish for Geron has come close to that before
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    Chapter 17

    You sure know how to end a chapter. So this ship coming from Earth perhaps the aliens know about the history of humans on Earth and feel if they stay it will be a danger to them. If that would be Azim thinking and I can't blame him maybe Milkulsa will have an unlikely role as a mediator .....Hey one can hope
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    Chapter 11

    Oh I could tell some Korner Krew stories. She would be behind bars now
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    Chapter 16

    One of the reasons Mikulsa is acting somewhat different is this is unprecedented there is no book or basic training drills or anything else you can think to tells you how to deal with Aliens you never met before. Apparently Mikulsa is wise enough to know his usual M.O. might not be effective here
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    Chapter 15

    As long as it isn't in the one I'm in (Although I would have a sneak preview of Geron's next story🤔)
  14. These were pieced together from my notes made during an annual summer retreat, away from the grid, the net and the noise. I'm glad you have a place like that to go to.I would ask you where it was but I fear as soon as you said where it would not be that place anymore. Your verse about the Loons. A year ago, there were none to be seen. They’d disappeared, like so many things fondly remembered. Were they thought to be extintc or something?
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    Chapter 2

    Very good chapter things are progressing.One slightly inaccurate thing.In California at least High schools and middle schools are set up now that the only way you can get in is through the office. Now way Ricky would just enter the school unless it was close enough to the bell that the entrance was still open. Plus word would have spread like wildfire when it was revealed Ricky's at this school they may have had a rough time leaving the school
  16. I at first had it in the back of my mind that Chris was responsible for the police finding Kevin. I guess some press about Kevin playing with the band and how it happened got back to the landlord. If Kevin does any interviews about becoming a new member and the arrest gets brought Kevin should tell the WHOLE story about about what a dick the landlord was evicting Kevin after his parents died even though he had the money to pay rent. Hope the landlord gets treated like a pariah. Actually Kevin trashing the room is a good sign. Joe Walsh and Keith Moon were famous for trashing hotel rooms and they did OK as musicians. As a aside ZZtop without Dusty Hill just seems wrong I know Billy Gibbons is THE guy but still. Same with what The Eagles are doing but it's the public fault IMO because the bands will still make $$$ because the fans will still pay the high concert prices to not see the real thing
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    Chapter 15

    Another outstanding chapter I had accepted the fact that I would soon be dead, and I would no longer need them. That certainly explains why Phil wasn’t that interested in initially reading what he signed “According to Allen,” he replied, “His father doesn’t want anything from you. He calls it dirty money. That’s why he made Allen power of attorney.” “Dirty money?” I asked. “What does that mean.” “Allen said Roger is very homophobic,” he said. “He believes that your relationship with Dwight was sinful, and anything that came of it was dirty.” “It must have killed him to come back here and sign me into this place,” I remarked sadly. I can see why Allen thinks Roger is homophobic but it’s possible that is not the case.I said in previous comments Roger probably saw first hand how hurt his Mother was and it was pretty much Phil’s fault and Roger is furious at Phil . The “sinful behavior” Roger referred to might be what he perceives’s to be the cheating on his Mother Phil and Dwight did and not because it was same sex ( I don’t remember if Phil met with Dwight before or after Phil spilt with Roger’s Mother) . Roger’s anger is understandable but where he is dead wrong is telling Allan that Phil was dead .When Allan became an adult he had a right to know about his Grandfather at that point it wasn’t Roger’s call anymore I have to believe Eloise(That is her name right)didn’t know about Roger telling Allan this I think she would have told Allan herself. Gary got into the driver’s side and pulled off. “Where are we going?” I asked. “You’ll see,” he smiled as he pulled off. I see two possibilities.One they are going to Phil’s house where Colin and Jason are OR a meeting has been set up with Allan and Phil’s Great grandson
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    Chapter 17

    The problem was I was having a very “down” day. Which meant that while humans were capable of several kinds of love, I was convinced I’d never deserve any of them. For someone who has been Alec's rock all this time River certainly sounds a lot like him. Maybe Kenji is River's version of Finn I came from a man who made a commitment and made a kid and then fucked off to parts unknown. I wonder if that being mentioned means we will find out more about what happened
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    Chapter 15

    That the black disc left after conversing with Bzup would imply Bzup is one of high ranking among his kind
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    Chapter 11

    Incredible chapter❤️ Some random reactions hope I make sense When Dante was speaking with Mr. Black , Mr. Black actually sounded like he was interested in Dante's welfare he must appreciate a good employee .He almost sounds like a good boss to work for ...Well that is if his business wasn't...you know. "I should have enough saved to leave this job by the time I'm forty." He grinned and whispered, "Who'd a thought I'd get fucking old." That comment should hit hard it shows what happens to those boys and men who sell themselves When Dante called Andy he slipped up and said his real name instead of D. We know Andy will talk to Kyle will Kyle get Andy to reveal Dante? Perhaps Kyle will use Dante to get at Black like what a wire or something We heard from Dante's POV that it has been 2 years since he's seen Matt. So my guess would be It has been about 6 month to a year that Matt was taken off Kanaan boat (Is Ahmet still alive?) I can't stop this now. Fuck. I bought him. I didn't call Kyle to report Matt was on The Market. What could he do anyway? Oh, I don't know. Maybe trace The Market's IP address? Maybe, or not. These bastards are good at hiding themselves. But anyway, no, my solution was to buy him. I must be out of my fucking mind. Another reason to call Kyle if this had gotten investigated they would have found a record of Andy making this "purchase" So speaking with Kyle I assume will result in Kyle taking care of that.
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    Chapter 11

    WOW!!!! It took 5 or 6 minutes for you to comment after @Mikiesboy posted the chapter.WHAT was so darn important that you dilly-dallied for so long
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    Chapter 14

    They can't seem to communicate to Bzup the topic of sex. Perhaps Jem and Nico can demonstrate it to Bzup........For the greater good of course
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    Chapter 14

    The fact that Bzup is willing to help them find Chregar should go a long way for Mikulsa .Will they have a way to communicate with the aliens with Bzup being the go between? I think that would be critical in the way the aliens may react to the Vespris
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    Chapter 14

    Is that all @ReaderPaul? Geron he must think you live 72 hour days and never sleeps
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    Chapter 13

    I noticed @drsawzallgave a love reaction to that....So you LOVE the idea of me being in a locked doghouse eh? I'm calling SPCA on you and @kbois
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