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Thank you for sharing. Please don't get angry with me for saying what @JACC just commented on. If Carlos wanted your talents to co-write this (Smart man) then I think he would be more than OK with you continuing it.But I also understand why you would not want to do that

I guess this is a author's equivalent of an unreleased track of a musician who passed away.This is a classic definition of bittersweet.Thank you for sharing this

She gets you? I wasn't even sure she got herself

Well I see a few possible openings in Diego's description of events that Mr. Clark could shoot holes in. I hope Billy anticipates them and advises Diego on how to respond. In a way braking for lunch when they did could turn out to be a big advantage

Oh man that means Matt has been in this terrible situation for two years and most likely sold to somebody who's complete slime😢

Oh I didn't realize you had a medical condition with your kidneys. I'm sorry.Ok no more whiskey talk.......What am I going to talk about now?🤔

I don't mean this as a criticism but to me it seemed Jack did a little too much of a 180 from total moron in the first chapter to somewhat reasonable in this chapter.You can argue he was being pragmatic I guess. And he did know his son well enough to get the truth. What isn't explain how can Bruce have any interest at all in a two year old. That still leaves the possibility open that something happened to Bruce when he was younger possibly not that much older then 2

I have a question just to make sure my thick skull understand things right. Following his meetings with Kyle and Samantha, he'd slowly gained the trust of a man who knew someone believed to be involved in buying and selling men, women, and children. Getting close was painstaking. These people did not trust easily. After a couple of years of patiently talking, reaching out, being rejected, and again waiting patiently, he was contacted by an employee of the man he knew only as Mr. Black. So if I interpreted this right has 2 years passed since Andrew's meeting with Kyle and Samantha? Did you get some ideas from him? Like say......Borscht flavored whiskey

You're slipping it took you 17 minutes to comment after the story posted.Far cry from the speed of light posting you did with @Mrsgnomie

"I'm not the one who started things between us a couple years ago." "What? What the fuck are you talking about? I never did anything before school started." "No? Summer, two years ago, Grove River. In a tent? Sound familiar now, shithead?" "Grove… Cub Scouts?" "Yeah." "Oh. Shit! That was you?" And later when Mark, Bobby,Steve and Paul talked about it. Mark was confused, "They said ‘Cub Scouts’, and ‘Grove River’—shit, I was there too! I don't remember anything happening. Hell, I didn't even remember Rocky. It will be very Important that Mark testifies to that conversation as he's a witness who remember accurately the exchange between Bruce and Rocky not all witnesses do.

I hope I'm wrong but I think it will take a lot more then Rocky trying to "reign it in" on his own. The incident I suspect did deeper and if he doesn't get help lasting damage to Rocky's mental health.

I agree with with what you said about Dolly's version of Stairway to Heaven.That's why I was excited to find out she did a version of Let It Be with both Paul and Ringo performing on it but that one disappointed me

I wasn't aware of that thanks for the link I'll donate after I get paid

It was all I can do not to go to the other site and look at the stories but it's much better this way. Certain things that I thought might get covered didn't but when read @Summerabbacat comment about The Rip being part of the Thompsonville chronicles I perked up.Looking forward to it❤️

I loved my Mom but she would have read my diary which is why I never kept one. I think a significant percentage or parents would read their kids diary maybe not a majority but quite a few. They just can't help it

Hey you taught this dumb guy something I wasn’t aware of the color indigo I would have said blue. It's a beautiful color. I've heard of The Indigo Girls now I'm going to have too look up why they named themselves that.

You know itOpps gotta go

Wednesday and Saturday eh? Just like @kbois coincidence🤔? Approximately what time will you post .I'm in PDT like @Mrsgnomie will it be zero dark thirty like @kbois? And since she will be editing this there will be absolutely NO mistakes whatsoever.....Why do I think spellcheck is going to malfunction a lot suddenly?

I have been meaning to start reading @Mikiesboy stories and now is the perfect opportunity to do so and this looks really good.And edited by @kbois no less who will say otherwise but will be thrilled to see that I'm reading this because she have a lot of snarky comments saved up to use on me.

The main reason I am writing this is because this author had been on a little bit of a hiatus and is therefore unfamiliar to many GA readers . I hope these five stars draws some attention. As far as the story goes I'll refrain from giving too many details you probably wouldn't believe me anyway. There will be things here that are impossible but because there are some not of this Earth aliens in this its somewhat plausible. What makes this author unique is every character is a varying shade of grey (even the villains are not totally evil) since these characters have some flaws it makes for a lot of sarcastic dialog which I love when it's done right and this authors does it right. This story deserves to read and has my recommendation

Very well done Thank you❤️ Now a few observations which will have no rhyme or reason. "What's it going to be? Another girl?" Nathan asked with an eye roll. "I'm sick to death of all the girly shit. Pink everywhere…" I'm glad Nathan and Jamie are doing well but in some ways Nathan is still........Nathan. One small detail you didn't mention now M has gone to school and is working what name does he go by. I'm sure on the school apps he didn't put his name down as M. I'm disappointed they didn't name one of the girls Hannah. The way Bradley was speaking of Beth it sounds like Mother-in-laws in same sex marriages are the same as Mother-in-laws is straight marriages. Speaking of Bradley how's this for a story idea.She is now a P.I. have them move to Florida (Although they'll be closer to Beth) And have Bradley work on a odd case where all the characters are in someway involved ala Magnum P.I. Great story

I'm not finished reading the chapter yet so perhaps this will be answered but my first reaction is why Disneyland instead of Disney World which is right in their back yard? From what I understand I've been to Disneyland but not Disney World I have heard Disney World is cooler.

I can relate EVERYTHING is faster than my brain

Well this time @Summerabbacat beast me to the punch on something I was going to say. Of course where I'm located it was zero dark thirty when it was posted by @Lee Wilson......wonder if he did that on purpose🤔.....anyway I digress . I was thinking the same thing when @Summerabbacat mentioned Bruce himself might have been abused.At first I was in favor of as a ruse put Bruce in a cell with a huge teenager and have the teenager imply he was about to have fun with Bruce but if he was also a previous victim that would have been way too much even for Bruce. So Manny and Bass now realized Rocky knows about his stepmother. Apparently they also don't realize Rocky knows more about what business his dad was in also. This might blow up in their face. Next up - "Return to School, and a Confrontation or Two" What I worry about is now that Rocky remember's Bruce the next confrontation might result in Rocky's builted up rage pouring out and he might go overboard in beating up Bruce🤞