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Er....Uh..... Kane is a character from another story which I though you knew about I was just trying to get your opinion

Great writing you managed to make the family scenes heartwarming while also keeping up the suspense. We've gotten attached to that family so don't pull a Kage on us with Andrew (eh @kbois?) These guys are not jokes or from a writer's imagination. Really?....Then how is this story being written🤔

While needing a kidney transplant isn't a good thing but with only one kidney Lars is a lot less likely to drink and he's a better person when he doesn't. Good story

I love Scott and what he's trying to do but throwing away a foil packet in the John doesn't mean Justin is on the way back from wherever it was that he’s been for these past couple of years. I hope I'm wrong but an incident Justin had with his parents could be the kind of thing that will make him want another taste. Sad that Justin would rather have Sally think he was passed out on the Pub toliets rather the sleeping wit Scott. And now for the most important question that beach where Scott met up with that surfer where is it now?.........Never mind

Doing a police officers job is challenging enough throw in what looks like a crazy ex and some tension from co-workers sounds pretty explosive

I closed my phone and looked out the window. Dwight smiled and nodded his head. If that's not foreshadowing of something I don't know what is❤️ I told him about having to give up my home and move into a nursing facility. I shared with him my hopes of someday leaving and moving into an independent living apartment “You had a beautiful home,” he said. “I can imagine how you feel to have to give it up They are speaking in the past tense like Phil longer owns the home it is still in his name right? That's important to know in regards to our theory about Susan and Stanley moving into it. The HIV relevation was a bit of a surprise.The time Phil said it happen was around the same time the NBA star Magic Johnson announced he was HIV positive. Well Magic is still with us so the timing of Phil being diagnosed was fortuitous perhaps it may have been the difference between not suffering Dwight's fate

I almost left a laugh reaction after what Sally said😄 I shudder to think what was in the foil packet. Those chills Justin was having I'm guessing since they don't seem to talk much his parents are unaware of that Scott should at least speak to his doctor about that. You know something Scott you're way too good. I would have taken a closer peek at the open buttons on Justin's boxers after being awoken at 1:27 AM you deserve at least that much😄

Interesting same thing happened to me

Gee you write that like you think it's unrealistic or something

And you're a brilliant judge of talent

Where did you get that picture of @kbois on the way to the korner? (Oh and I guess while I'm at it) FIRST!!!!!!!!

Nice start but a lot of sadness there.

Andrew enjoyed watching his parents interact. I agree they were a little mushy but the way they did it was cool" "That sounds rather selfish, not altruistic, I'm afraid. You're not going to help them; in the long run you're only helping yourself." Andrew opened his mouth and closed it. Shit. He's right, and this is for my book. How will it help anyone but me? If Andrew ends up buying Matt or arranges for Matt to be bought (Robert?) I think this conversation would be the catalyst for that to happen

I may roll over and go back to sleep for an hour. I don't need to leave until much later,' Not a good idea Andrew this morning I awoke at 4:30 AM and said to myself "Oh good it will be another hour or so before @Mikiesboy posts the new chapter" SO I rolled back over.....Look how long it took me to get here

If that includes money on lost sports bets or bad investments then I'm bulletproof

I'm not certain he forgave his father I think he was doing it more for Ellen

Devin and Mac were speaking about Gramps and Pops when they bring their wives future wives to future cookouts.Have you ever given any thought on how they tell these women about themselves and how do they get them to marry them? Please forgive these weird scenarios I come up with involving Skinwalkers. They talked about Mac turning into Bigfoot.How about all 4 of them turning into Bigfoot? We could see a future episode of The Unexplained with William Shatner "This one couple claimed to have seen FOUR Bigfoots walking together" And Devin speaking of adding a couple of inches to his height. What if their future son turns out to be a NBA fan and he asks to be taller so he can get a college scholarship? Sorry if I'm annoying you all.

If Pops and Gramps used cards then they would have to use different identities every 50 years or so to get new cards perhaps not leaving a trail of themselves is advantageous in some way

One thing that wasn't mentioned (yet?) is how did Justin do in school during this this time did he graduate? Was his grades bad? I stared back at the photograph, at the three smiling faces from so long ago, and wondered if Justin or I would ever be that happy again. I was alone. And for the first time that I could remember, I felt alone. I guess Scott running the family business keeps him occupied but by these comments Scott is very unfulfilled.Maybe Scott and Justin could help each other

@Summerabbacat would be OK with that

Now that one makes me want to find a hot guy named Ethan so I could use that line

TUESDAY???????

What are you going to do? Get in your UFO and go home?

I see you caught up .Welcome to GA. I was sort of expecting to see you comment on Ronyxs story

I had a similar thought but it hasn't been established yet Justin is gay. It would make sense but the one thing that stops me for saying that is definitely it is I would think Justin would want to speak with Scott after what he witnessed.It would be interesting if that was part of Justin's parents thinking. Justin did ask "Did they send you after me?"