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Hey I deleted that move to strike
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I had no idea what I was about to post
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Doesn't mean you won't stop trying
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One word for this installment of the epilogs....Perfect! I already said it once but since it on top of us now.
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The smallest horse was an all-white Arabian mare. No matter what products Duncan used, her forelock refused to be tamed. He threw in the towel, left the fuzzy hair alone, and named her Gnomie. How many times did @Mrsgnomie try to edit it out and you kept putting it back?
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I was just about to take a short nap when the notification came up. It's as if @kbois was saying "Oh no you don't"
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The way I interpreted it was Harlan got The Don to pay for it if it was Harlan himself even better.Before I was going to ask if Greg knew about Harlan's past now I guess he doesn't. I was ready to put a love reaction but after Lee asked Greg not to let Avery back I changed it to a tear. I wonder if Harlan is going to tell Lee that he did the same thing with Bailey and it was a mistake.
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Well at least Chase and Micco have sort of cleared the air of the issue they had but they still lost a lot of time. I will love to find out what Rory had to say. Apparently It's different from whatever she said before. Please get better from your co-vid and have a Merry Christmas
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In addition to kbois pointing out the line "He's not worth it." The other line that got me was Lee waited to die I so wish when Harlan said "I've just never seen you make the wrong choice before." That Greg would have asked "Why do you say that" As other readers have mentioned despite the overall sadness of this chapter there were some positives Avery knows he can trust Bill and Anna ,Lee told Eddie to F-off, and maybe Greg will remember in the future to not jump to conclusions You alluded to it in a few responses but only one reader @Danilo Syrtis said something about this so I will also. Mark is a great guy
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Oh I definitely did nutty and irrational things as a teen in this case I believe it's because I have always been anti-drugs I had a older brother with a real problem.
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In your response to @Philippe I appreciate what you had to say about the adults reaction As far as the two boys the love makes you do crazy things explanation isn't good enough. Avery knew about Lee's barfing from withdrawal why put him through that again? And Lee even expressed that it wasn't a good idea "Greg told me drugs will get us kicked out. I know how much you love it here." but they went through with it anyway. It could make one think they have below average intelligence
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Lee frowned and stood at Greg's elbow as he folded the blue cheese, onion and sausage omelet. Damn you! You made me hungry.I have to stop reading for awhile.I'm going to make an omelet
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He rivals you in mentioning food in your hybrid journey series
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Well.....I did
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I didn't know you then so I never got around to this story (Geez how did I survive?😄🤷♂️) I guess I have some reading to do I'll be back
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My first reaction is there seems to be some gold to mine. Some details need to be revealed soon are there laws dealing with this these days? Can't help but notice there's a 10 year gap between his youngest sister and older sister sounds like the older sister doesn't have any relationship with her siblings
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Based on your Prologue I wonder why David never met his Grandparents he didn't say they died before he had a chance to were his parents and Grandparents estranged? Time to find out
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I understand what has happened with Avery with foster families in the past but geez you think after three years Avery would have some sense that Bill and Anna are decent people
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That stuff @kbois said about something being in the coffee if Greg knew what he had he would sell it online it could fund Jeremy's Raven project for years to come .Hell I would buy some and invite certain people over for coffee
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I guess Avery relate somewhat with Lee because of their crappy families.Greg seems to think there's something more. As far as Greg "test" goes he's a former cop so he knows what entrapment is. To me this comes awfully close
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Thankfully I never was in a situation of having withdrawals🙏 But I guess it affects your ability to reason in the most basic way. OK so Lee gets the money out of the jar he still has to get his own money by going to Greg so Greg could go to where Mason put his money so didn't he think he would be asked about the money in the jar? You didn't say what time of night Lee did this whether it like say 10:PM or more like 3:00 A.M. I bring this up because Avery saw Lee do this why was he awake? was it because of his ADHD?
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Getting Closer, and Football
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Getting Closer, and Football
It's very good that Roy's parents are cool with everything. Roy mentioned something about watching the Falcons lose again so I'm assuming this takes place in Georgia. One thing I didn't see until now was the story picture of who I guess is Roy. I Don't remember if you mentioned in the story if Roy and his family are black.I only bring that up because if this is in Georgia with the current political climate there that could be an issue also.I could see other black football players having a problem with Roy being with that "white boy" -
I don't know how much time has passed at Camp Refuge since the last story but is this something Joseph has already done bring a troubled kid to the camp or is Lee the first one?
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Unless changing it means Caleb knocking on your door right now
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