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This is from @Zuri when he quoted @Lee Wilson" I think there may be a slight delay in chapter 18, going to have send another update to my deitor" It's fixed now but that's how it originally appeared. Look how he spelled editor no wonder he needs an EDITOR😄(kidding)
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Well I'm glad there is going to be a epilog .We still need to find out what happened with Hannah my guess is both she and Jamie woke out of the coma when the agent died. I guess Liam isn't going to have an official birth certificate besides who would you list as the the mother?🤔
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Yeah that's possible I can see another evil alien making the trip for whatever reason. M is going to try to fix mother perhaps this time he can make it more formidable
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If a bully had any ability to emphasize they wouldn't be bullies in the first place
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Ah jeez just as the confrontation is about to begin the chapter ends. !@#$%^& cliffhangers
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The Talk, and Manny Gets Another Welcome
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Talk, and Manny Gets Another Welcome
"Bass, you're an Italian buffet. Nothing there, I wouldn't try." "I know, I don't. I'm not going to hate you because you like pickles and I like tacos, but I don't need to hear about your pickle eating." “So, you want to taste my cannoli?” Bass chortled, “Yes. I want to see whether it’s creme-filled, or custard.” “You know, I’m going to ask Sandy if she can make cannoli, just so I can see your face when she puts a plate of them on the table.” “Hmmm, maybe I’ll ask her to buy ice pops.” With all these innuendos with sex and food I have come to a conclusion.The highest percentage of people partaking in buffets are bisexual and pan.Hmm🤔pan? also used to cook and serve food see more evidence- 34 comments
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We’ve gotten through the worst thing that is ever going to happen to us.Well I would hope so but just the same no one should never ever say that life bites you in the ass when you least expect it. This is indicative of my pessimistic side don't mean to be a downer. I really hope Luke gets into SSU🤞 but you can't always get what you want (The Rolling Stones said that😄) But the way they were speaking about their relationship and then later after seeing the gravestones and Luke thinking We both now knew that we wouldn’t live forever, so we needed to make sure that we lived every minute we could. I think they are preparing themselves for SSU not happening
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Well I'm now caught up.If you think @Mark Ponyboy Peters that my few comments I left were weird just wait to see what they are like after I just read a new chapter and give you my first reaction. @Summerabbacat pretty much covered everything I wanted to say about the Monolith. After what we seen of her so far she would be the kind of person who would kick Tony out of the house for him "betraying her". If so could that mean Tony living in Luke's parents house?
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I don't know if they have this term in Australia (BTW I have relatives in Mt.Gambier and Adelaide) But in the U.S. I see what is called Jumbo shrimp. I always thought that contradicted each other.
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Well it happened to me and I tried to reuse it a few times but The same thing happened those times alsoKidding HA,HA,HA
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A Matter of Professional Opinions....
weinerdog commented on John Henry's blog entry in Thicker Than Water
A pain in. the tooth is the worst. My friend's Mom was misdiagnosed she died a year later they found out if it had been caught at the time she was diagnosed she wouldn't have.Doctors shouldn't jump to conclusions -
We are assuming that Jamie's and Hannah's seizure's are because of the agent and that is probably true but it could be something Mother did to counteract what the agent did. So the baby is close.While M is using Micheal's body could the baby have some alien abilities or even appearances. My guess is the baby. would resemble Micheal.And since it was hinted Micheal is using the baby's body perhaps this could be Micheal personality and everything
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I had a thought Greg was the MIB making himself look like Greg @drpaladin
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Connor mentioned the two other aliens he saw earlier in the story they are in each corner of the backyard Connor gulped. He stroked M's hair soothingly for a moment, then he got up and went to the window. In the backyard, two of the agent's cronies stood in the grass, one at either corner of the house. The thin, zombie man and the pig-like police officer we're watching the house.
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I just got done reading this chapter and here is my thinking at the moment.You'll know of course if I am wrong or right. While Davo was certainly acting like an ass before and it's reasonable to think he sprayed the car after hearing Chris tell them that Davo had a message for them but to me it seems too simple. Perhaps Davo heard about a couple of people wanting to spray Matt's car and THAT"S the message he wanted to give but before he could the possible other perpetatrator(s) got wind of it and gave Davo that black eye and threatened him not to say anything.Onward to see if I'm wrong or right
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Makes perfect sense they met at the dog park.When I took my dog to the park pretty ladies who would otherwise never give me the time of day would talk to me. Hmmm🤔 perhaps we can start a gay friendly dog park
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I don't think the chapter felt. out of sync at all it was your usual excellent chapter. Nothing to blame on the medications.Maybe I didn't recognize any. difference because you're on something with every chapter you write (I'm kidding,I'm kidding😄) I have theory why Judge Crustypants agreed to what was pretty much a slap on the wrist to Bryan.The Judge could relate because there were many times HE wanted to throw a glass at Calvin In all seriousness I thought it was a plastic glass until it was revealed it was an actual glass.Wow that is MUCH more serious and never acceptable even if it was aimed at Calvin. “Have you told a teacher or other adult?” Steve asked. I love Steve as a character but he sounded naive there.He's attended public school and now has a job where he is an insider surely he should know more often than not telling a teacher does no damn good. Has Calvin and Luis ever interacted? I ask because If Calvin doesn't know Luis I really hope he crosses paths with Luis while he's working with Caleb.Please Calvin F with Luis please. It might be the last thing thing you do
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If this was @kbois korner krew we would be outside the house with burning torches (Not Really @Arch Hunter)
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Jeez God knows what Greg's next move is going to be. If this stuff was RL somehow I don't think Men giving birth out of their ass would catch on. "A theft prevention officer is basically a rent-a-cop. You watch surveillance cameras and walk through the store to keep an eye on customers and merchandise." "Oh." Connor laughed a little. "I get it. I catch shoplifters." If Connor gets a job like that why do I think the first person he catches will be.......Nathan?🤔 Then again it could be ....Greg🤞
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I'm roughly at the halfway point hopefully @Mark Ponyboy Peters I will be caught up by your next post. I had this conversation literally 15 minutes ago as I type this. My buddy was looking over my shoulder at me reading this and he noticed your name. He asked he if that was your actual name or a nickname. I said I didn't know one way or another (I suppose Ponyboy could have some Indian background) He went on to tell me about a buddy they all knew in middle school who about the same height and weight as everybody and was nicknamed Ponyboy because a certain body part of his was considerably larger then everyone else. Since he was a boy they used the term Pony instead of Horse. So forgive me for being crude but is your story about the name Ponyboy the same as his?🤔😄
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I generally agree with that but I know a few friends very nice people but when you talk to them they go on and on and ........and on and on.Those people I text😄
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This is never going to end is it? Well at least Manny didn't lose part of his leg. Then his favorite restaurant would be IHOP🥁 da dit boom
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Paul's parents knew but weren't happy about it at all. He didn't want to risk asking to talk to a couple gay men about anything. He figured he'd talk to Bobby after he talked with Manny and Bass. It's one thing for Paul's parents not to be happy about it but are they extremists? Will stuff hit the fan if they find out after Bobby speaks with Manny and then tells Paul that could put a lot of unnecessary attention on Manny and Bass. Mark was shocked, "Why would you need a bodyguard?" "Well, my dad was, um, involved, with a bunch of slimy characters. He figured; we should have someone watching out for us." Paul was up next, "How did your parents die?" "Dad and my stepmom died in a car accident. My real mom died in a bomb blast." Mark queried, “How did you find out your real mother died because of a bomb?” Rocky hesitated, not wanting to share all the details. “I found some notes, my dad made about his search for the bomber. It included some details about the bombing itself. Even if Rocky didn't know martial arts if students knew about all that I think they would keep their distance from Rocky anyway
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Should Connor have took the Moped? I mean it sounds like he thought the moped was being discarded because it was next to the trash.Well who leaves a moped next to the trash it's not like trash pick-up will take it. At least as far as I know🤔 Even though Nathan was being Nathan this is the best I've seen Nathan interact with Connor and M in this story it was almost heartwarming they even all three took Jack out for a walk. Now on to Mother's plan (Good to see her BTW) "Jeez. Fine," Nathan changed the channel to Family Feud. "Better?" Connor glared at the TV. The bright set and the fake smiles of the contestants made his stomach hurt. Fake smiles? Hey Steve Harvey is funny those were not fake smiles
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Loved how you described thing with Zippy and Mikey (BTW that reminds me of a obscure comic strip called Zippy the pinhead anyone remember that?) He’d often be behind the bar serving on busy nights flitting from one customer to another. I guess you meant flirting unless it's an New England expression I forgot about .I used to live in Revere Mass. Speaking of growing up in Revere candlepin bowling alley I remember those you might have to explain what that is to other readers
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