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Most likely the A-hole supervisor
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I didn't know where to ask this because @CLJobe current story is on temporary hold and you can't do any function. Anybody have ant info? I hope he is OK.One of the possible reasons given why it is on hold was that he was leaving GA. I hope that is not the case🤞
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I'm very happy to see @raven1is beta reading the story. It seemed like he was MIA and I was wondering if he was OK. Now on to the story
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I read chapter three yesterday but it took me awhile to comment. because I decided to check out that beach Luke and Matt went to.I happened across Tim and Guy and got into a long conversation. Also it took awhile to navigate my way out of the beach....big beach you know
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In past chapters When Phil looked at the window it was always someone connected to him from the past and unless I’m mistaken all of them have passed away.So now he sees a boy who he doesn’t reconize all the other people he seen in the window before were people he was either thinking about or speaking to Colin about or in this case Susan so my first reaction was he saw Stanley. But it doesn’t fit all the previous criteria with the others Phil seen in the window also this would sort of be a glimpse into the future also a departure along with Phil not having a personal connection with Stanley. So who is the boy in the window? Well if he has a connection with Phil then it could be his grandson who he was never allowed to see. That would mean Phil’s Grandson is dead.Why does he not know ? Because Roger didn’t bother to tell him. Why would Phil’s grandson appear in the window? Maybe because he wants Phil to help Stanley he might even know or have knowned Stanley.The first time Phil saw the boy he was crying then after Colin made plans to see Stanley the boy smiled.Just some spec for what it’s worth it's probably Stanley but maybe not
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The Visit and A Lesson In Tolerance
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Visit and A Lesson In Tolerance
You know what Rocky did was pretty much the same thing Bass did.IMO I Would ask the principle and even Manny and Bass what was Rocky supposed to do?Let his ass get kicked?- 31 comments
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I believe M can defeat the agent Connor came into the living room a few minutes into the movie. It was something new with Will Smith. Really? In a story with aliens in it and a character we've been referring to as a MIB you have them watching a Will Smith movie? Will Smith from Men In Black🤔
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“No, it’s not your imagination and the flights westward always takes less time, due to the rotation of the earth,” Tony said. “When we fly east, the earth rotation keeps moving our destination farther away, so we have to travel farther and it takes a little longer to get there. When we’re flying west, however, the destination is moving toward us, thus decreasing the flight time.” I found that fascinating.It reminds me of where I live in San Diego there is this highway that passes the navy base where Seal team 6 is at. Going in the direction of the base from our homes on our bikes is somewhat difficult but go back is a lot easier no matter what the conditions.I wonder if some of the same principles are involved here. Hey anybody want to start a pool? Cousin Ben is he or isn't he? Never mind @Bill W would win
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School and Recovery Begin
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in School and Recovery Begin
I understand those are pretty popular once Manny has it on he'll be hooked........OK I'll go quietly now- 44 comments
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School and Recovery Begin
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in School and Recovery Begin
If he went to school like that Wilmer would have "found him" earlier "Take a seat, you've disrupted the class enough already." Never mind the reason why Rocky was late but geez it's the first day of the year it could be a new student who doesn't know where everything is yet..like Rocky. That teacher sounds dicky. Manny reaction totally understandable but he has Bass,Rocky,Linda etc. there will be a call to arms and they will give him a hand......So sorry for that but I'm surprised nobody said that yet- 44 comments
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Just found you after reading this I eagerly will start After The Dance .Seeing that I'm 12 chapters behind you won't be hearing from me for awhile but you will
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I'm so happy to hear that
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Nice feel good story.I'm going to mention @Dabeagle so he'll see that I mentioned him. He loves dogs so he most likely will enjoy this story
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I get the feeling that after M finishes with the locator and perhaps finds Mother it will be revealed that M has the power to heal Jamie and Hannah perhaps he's the only one who can.That would mean another trip to SD
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Most of the time I enjoy reading a good author using words to describe an event better then seeing it played out on screen but in this case I would make an exception.Please write that it left a mark on Calvin
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What did those three a___holes think was going to happen if they found Manny they already know what happens if you mess with him.And granted they had no idea what Bass was capable of but after Bass easily disable the first two the third guy oblivious tries to sucker punch him As if. I I had a million dollars for every brain cell among those three I'd be broke
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It's unclear which Bass he meant
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Pretty good so far. But you have to write something for Melissa so far she's left out
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Key question did Adam have his curtains open to his room? If so then Thomas DID see that. Although I don't approve of what Thomas did (I might have done the same thing at that age) I do feel somewhat bad for him he sounds like a lonely kid and his Mam seems stuck up. Did Adam and Ross do something a little intimate that Thomas might have seen?. We may be talking possible blackmail here
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Something has to break and pretty damn soon. Now Jamie AND Hannah are in a coma?That is F....ed up. Hurry up and finish that locator M
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So Corey in the library thinking about the stalker and chooses to pass the the time reading a....horror novel?🤔 Just saying I agree with @akascrubber that Grayson likes Corey and I think Lindsay knows that also. Could Alvise be observing them on behalf of Lindsay? And what's up with Grayson not being able to break up with Lindsay and can't say the reason why?
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The thought did come to me that Connor acting like an a-hole the last week could be a result of having some of his father's gene's. The move went well and that was due to efforts from my dad, my boyfriend, and my ex. You're boyfriend and you're ex eh?🤔 interesting.Did they provide material for a possible future story😄
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Progress? Or Surgery, Round Two
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Progress? Or Surgery, Round Two
About a couple of years ago I had surgery for melanoma and they cut up my left arm and left a medium size scar relatively minor and yet my arm still isn't 100% so it will be that much more tougher for Manny even if nothing was amputated at least I'm right handed (That's a detail you can give us next chapter about Manny) They have made incredible progress with prothesis these day as it pertains to whole limbs but I wonder if that exists for individual fingers for Manny's sake I hope it does- 32 comments
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Very interesting trip while I can see how cool it would be to transform to say into a bear especially if you are in some trouble but one thing I never gave much thought to was being an animal like a wolf like they were for an extended period of time I don't think I have it in me to kill a live deer like that. Please forgive me I tend to have a lot of annoying questions. When they were outnumbered by the wolf pack Gramps,Pop,Devin and Mac are in wolf form and I would guess have the same size brain as a wolf when they are.Considering that do they have the same brain capabilities as wolves as they do as humans?
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I echo what @Paladin said if you could have them make an occasional appearance that would be awesome. If I remember right this was in the 90's maybe a little later . A controversial head sheriff in the state of Nevada allowed his cops to get naked in arresting prostitutes (prostitution is legal in Nevada so it must have been for other crimes) The news coverage of that was controversial.I'm curious that that cop that got on the elevator violated regulations
