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Does Jessica really think because Dylan is gay he would want to do certain things with his son a prepuebesent one at that .Wow such ignorance blows me away. Although his Dad is going to benefit with the condo he is also stepping up. Interesting seeing Zach at the viewing.Lacey was the obstacle with them before obviously now is the not the time for Zach to inquire about anything but the mere fact he was there would imply that it might be a possibility in the future

I found this story very educational wait don't leave yet. This is being done in the context of a very interesting entertaining story not from a dry presentation in a classroom.So not only will you be introduced to good characters you will come to like along with a good romance story you will learn something can you imagine that?

A couple of fun days.There were a couple of puzzling things about Lakeside Amusement Park why wouldn't they sell food? It's basic business to maximize revenue especially with the type of prices other places of this type charge. And the kid who took off the safety harness at the Zoom drop tower you would think they would have a system where the ride doesn't operate until all the safety harnesses are connected. A friend told me about the Michael Garman Museum and if what he told me was correct you left out THE most important part that they give everybody a complimentary popcorn on their tours.For me THAT would have sealed the deal. Seriously this sounds like a bucket list place for me to go to also Poor Richard's Restaurant some of that stuff sounds great I really enjoyed part one and are eagerly awaiting part 2 so for now I will say Merry Christmas and when you post the next chapter I will then say to you Happy New Year

A big showdown about to happen. I hope they pause enough to consider some kind of trap being set.

Unless a curve is being thrown it sounds like Calhoun isn't the possible corrupt agent most of us thought he might be. The description of what happened in past are excruciating. I wonder if there is any connection from that to whoever is trying to set up Micco now

Well a few other readers have hinted at this and I'm not smart enough to think of another way. I'm guessing Jeremy's funding problem will be solved after Harlen speaks with The Don he's the only one with the resources to do it I would think. But would Jeremy and everybody at Camp Refuge accept the money? I'm sure there's a way you will figure it out

All those puns.The title I wish you would of thought of before posting that was Don't be Cruel

I had a friend part of a family that lived across the street from us die at a tragically young age she was in her late twenties about 15 years later her daughter came to visit her grandmother and then went to see us .The way she looked and spoke I would have sworn I seen a high school version of her Mother. That freaked me out so I really have to shudder when I imagine what Adam thinks when he sees Rosa. It will be really interesting to hear what Doctor Wayne has to say. I really like Andrea

If you're a fan of this author then you are familiar with his stories this story has the all the elements and characteristics of his other stories if you are freaked out by all the chapters don't be the chapters are easy to read but are in no way simple.The most similar story of his to this is A Child Haven if you liked that one then you'll love this. This author has told us he is getting up in years so please appreciate him while he is still with us

You actually took time to count?😄 I did in a course of 2 days .You did it in one so on a per day average you're blowing everyone out of the water

Whatever influence law enforcement officers have on an emancipation hearing there will be certainly a lot of support from the two police officers and probably from the entire department.If the judge has heard about what Orson did that could only be positive

I'm Curious what Danny's rap sheet was like is he a registered sex offender? That would make it easier for them to believe Elias story. I am more worried about the apparently clueless mother. I hope the law and the courts will be wise enough to recognize this

on page 7. (You don't think I posted four times in a row on purpose did you?.....Don't answer that)

Is this Comment # 150?

I think it either Enya or possibly Silas and Rosalie. Now that I'm on record as saying that @kbois will probably change it to someone else

So you're a man of few words.......25 times

At the pace you're posting I think she'll get there just by your posts.

It still said"'In process" on your story page. Can't write a review until it says "Complete"

He said The Story Timothy will have a sequel so lets hope its that one.

It was a privilege to read this story.Wow 96 years old they didn't get cheated.Lets hope a certain author makes it that far and more.You gave clues Colin was going to die first It is pretty much impossible to die at the same time except for a car accident one or both would have to kill themself and that would not be acceptable. But it is very realistic that one spouse dies shortly after another one happens a lot. I love the way you ended it with GG. They left such a big mark the sons will have to rent an arena for the memorial service for those two so many people will want to come.(P.S. mark it complete so I can write a review)

I'm sure there have been more brutal murders then the one in the chapter but I'm hard pressed to find one more brutally described.I'm confident Billy isn't like his father but I do wonder if as a last resort he would have a meeting with Calvin's lawyer implying he knows some of his father's associates? Bryan had asked his dad if he could go to the restaurant and help out, but Diego turned him down. Not only did Diego want to avoid a fine for violating the state's child labor laws,.That reminded me of a time I went into a small taco shop it was a small chain with about 4 other ones around town.The only person working there was a boy who looked 13 and may have been younger he took my order he was so small he had to stand on a milk crate to be tall enough to work the grill.I'm thinking I'm sure some laws are being broken here. You know what? It was one of the best burritos I ever had

Aw I was sort of hoping for the Elvis love child one myself😄

The Ranger should make it perfectly clear to his son that there at least one former Cop there and they figured out what happened and how and this moron should realize how lucky he is (But people like him never seem to learn so we'll see) Unlike the readers who read this when it was first posted I see the next chapter is titled Elias so I guess we are going to find out fast about this situation. Before I read it here is what I'm hoping .Elias after pretending to go bed high tails it out of there . Maybe he tries to make his way back to the camp on foot (I don't know how far it is away) Perhaps he gets reported missing (thats if his Mom gives an F enough) If Greg,Clay and Orson find him I hope Elias is desperate enough to come clean🤞

Have everybody wear crucifixes in fact make one big giant one for battle......never mind ignore me. Would that mean they monsters hybrid could only be used at night?

So are you back at work?Wait I hear something in your background.....you're Boss saying "YOU'RE FIRED".....oops