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This must be a alternate universe otherwise how can Connor not detect the Men In Black similarities? I'm taking a shot here and I'm sure I'll be WAYYYY OFF. Micheal Thomas might be someone Connor knew as a little boy or something and M is some kind of replica. I know nutty crazy but maybe not as nutty crazy as what actually happens here. I have to say Hannah reacted better then one would have a right to expect after their conversation. Povich? Weed? Not exactly guardian of the year material here

Heads up. Order more tissues and maybe even get a prescription for Xanax for the next chapter. Yeah you didn't have to write that I figured this chapter was too calm. Well it might be cool if Karl and Carlo kids becomes friends. Speaking of friends children this is slightly off topic and I bet you already know this the sons of John Lennon and Paul McCartney.James McCartney and Sean Lennon wrote a song together called Primrose Wall and it's pretty good

Please get better🤞

Please forgive me if this sounds ignorant but when I heard Devin talk about being bullied I was thinking if he can transform into animals and assume their characteristics and also turn into big humans I would think he could have turned into a ninja and retain the martial arts they know wouldn't it be possible? OK thanks for indulging me on that. This is how it was my family when we invited people over for dinner we didn't expect to be paid for dinner usually those same people inviting us back would be more than adequate.Is this practice common?

If the ambulance had got there and tried to examine M they might have found something that would indicate M isn't human. Hannah I think would notice Connor's reaction and realize he cares for M wonder what the fall out from that would be? Those Pizza Hut deliveries Connor goes on was told with a lot of details. Makes me think YOU!!! were once a pizza delivery driver or at least knew one😄

So you're making this up as you go along eh?😄

So how do you present this evidence in court ? "The Victim performed oral sex in the detective son's dream." Defense attorney: Objection my client had an expectation of privacy in said dream"

One time I told him about this excellent story that was 67 chapters long and he got it done in 3 days.Don't be surprised if he has this one done by tomorrow.No pressure of course😄

I'm going to be all over the place in this comment so bear with me M (I won't say his name because I don't want him to freak out😄) Didn't know how to eat among many other basic things but he knew the word transmitter (remote) Connor right then should have noticed that and how it doesn't add up that along with the use of the expression human experience so when Connor dismissed the mention of a UFO on the TV news I thought 'Dude doesn't that make you curious?' Connor didn’t think anything. He reached back to the little candy display, to the left of the cashier and grabbed a mega Butterfinger bar. He yanked his wallet out again, and nearly dropped his phone. He tucked the Galaxy under his chin, jerked two bucks out of his wallet – there was only one dollar left now – and slapped the cash on the counter. Eyeing him with suspicion, the cashier took his money and handed him back a handful of change. You said this was a previous story when you did you're editing you missed this part nobody these days gets change from a dollar buying a butterfingers 😄 Speaking of that maybe Butterfinger will sue you comparing their candy bar to what came out of M's butt. Remember the old movie Caddyshack? The Baby Ruth in the swimming pool scene? ( search for it on YouTube if you didn't see it) Perhaps Baby Ruth would have worked better here😄

Right now I'm trying to figure out the best way to describe this wonderful story.While I'm doing that I'm certain one of my more eloquent fellow readers will have a great review until I figure out what to say.But one thing I can do and say without giving a second thought, and that is the sooner this story has 5 stars next to it the better.For those of you who haven't read the Ravello series yet do yourself a favor and make time to do so.You won't regret it

I definitely echo what @Ivor Slipper said. Lets just say there looks to be a lot more story left to be told.You hinted that this might be it and this would not a bad place to end it .But I'm confident I know what all the readers wants🤞.Thank you sir for a beautiful story❤️

Well I haven't seen this story before and I'm very intrigued. I have so many question but I think I'll read a little more before asking them

I like that the family is stepping up for Jason❤️ The discussion turned to food. Olive Garden was suggested, and close, but I felt a slightly better quality would be nicer. WHAT!!!!!! I love Olive Garden Almost stopped reading the chapter after that😄

What role does Ashley have? Either she's totally clueless what a POS Calvin is or she's an accomplice in Calvin's scheme. Calvin all of sudden has another car and talks about going to Disney World? On a fast food workers salary? That would imply he's into other things. Is it possible Calvin's dad could turn out to be an unlikely ally? Maybe in the last few years perhaps Calvin Sr. found out he was dying and perhaps he sobered up. He was mentioned for a reason so perhaps he now wants to meet his Grandsons . Hmm how about Calvin Sr. testifying in court?

Welcome back I missed you. It's really late right now so I'll get to this tomorrow.But the synopsis sounds great

WHOA! My words about this can't do this incredible chapter justice. You hinted at a suicide attempt but left open the possibility whether it would succeed. Is there a way Betta somehow survives this?Although none of us like the character we didn't want that for her either. As horrible as this incident is it what transpired might have been the only thing that could have gotten through to Cosmo's thick skull.Luca's display of emotion even convinced the most cynical Betta realized how sincere Luca was.That's another reason I want Betta to survive “What about you, Giorgio?” she called. “Do you need me?” I absolutely don't want Giorgio to live with the thought "I should have said something" But now they were both looking at him doubtfully, their eyes dark and fearful. “Come on, Giorgio,” Marco whispered. “Let’s get out of here.” I'm guessing it's going to be revealed at that point Marco and Giorgio went to Luca and all of them went to Valentina. Brillant writing

Oh so that's what I smell🤔😄

I would like to know more about where River learned those self defense skills I hear it mentioned the possibility of Kenji getting involved in this. I don't picture River telling Kenji anything about this instead I picture River's moron ex-client trying something and getting close but not quite succeeding and if it is done in or around Kenji presence....Well I don't have to say how that would turn out do I? River spoke of his mom again.Is anyone imagining River introducing Kenji to her😄

It makes you wonder how many people you interact with at work or the gym etc. that seems to be functioning fine and then some trigger makes them do that when I was a teenager (wayyyyyyyyy back when 😄) I work at a navy base there was this 20 year old sailor everybody loved her both her parents along with her fiacee at the same time in a freeway accident this chapter made me think of her and I wonder if something like that could have happened to her

I wonder why I missed this the first time🤔 Do I have to read that first before reading this?

I was at her bedside on her last day, surprisingly she woke, took my hand and clearly told me how much she loved me, and quietly passed. Something similar happened with my mom that was a gift

Oh my I'm not sure I like the sound of that.Please get better. On number 2 Reflections maybe I didn't interpret it right but I get the feeling you were referring to a certain individual.Or a least a certain type of individual

But the younger boy had made his feelings clear, even if he was visibly unsure what to do about it. And to have someone crushing on you, it was… powerful. I know this isn't the comparison you were going for but a younger brother of a friend of mine used to be a camboy for one of those kinds of websites. And he said something very similar to what you wrote when I asked what it is like doing what he does. That caught my attention Marco was about halfway up the second incline when a scratched and battered old silver Vespa scooter came barrelling down the narrow road at speed, and he was forced to dive into a gap between the parked cars to avoid being hit. He raised a hand to shout a suitable protest after the retreating rider, but then he saw her dark clothing and the curtain of black hair that hung down below her helmet and he held his tongue. At least he wouldn’t have to contend with Elisabetta at the house today. Why am I not the least bit surprised by that? Maurizio seems to be a good guy and Elisabetta is oblivious to that. It makes me think that she thinks after what her father did to her that all men are pigs which could have been part of her thinking with Pietro. Cosmo being gay is probably why she likes him. He didn’t usually go for me, but when he tried…” he looked away, seeming a little ashamed. “Elisabetta usually stopped him.” Despite everything that does show Elisabetta does have a little of a decent side to her It is good to see Cosmo still hanging with Luca and Emilia for the moment I'm really happy for Marco and Giorgio❤️

When it rains it pours😭

I think @J.El wants it