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I loved the chapter. I have no idea which direction you went in this story needless to say but my gut feel tells me that Orson is going to be an asset to the visiting kids

So when are you running for congress?

With a Chinchilla and Godzilla using guerrilla warfare.(Hey best I could do)....in Manilla?

Don't dangle ME over the edge you'll be to tempted to.....well the readers know the rest of that statement

Well talk to @Mrsgnomie about that

No IMO you didn't telegraph it. It was a good thing Lacey wanted Dylan to stay instead of taking Dominic somewhere. Does Microsoft really pay that much??? In San Diego there is literally only one Bowling alley in town(Way back when there used to be quite a few )and I guess that Bowling alley may still have leagues but needless to say it's not too common around here. Judging by your chapter Bowling Alleys are more popular in other parts of the country.

Yes it was comment #49. so On page 3

Is this comment #49?

I almost forgot about this .The families that delayed bringing thier pups to Asa. What the hell can be more important than getting your pups cured??????( Just had a horrible thought is Huntington somehow responsible for that?)

More likely he skipped to the last third of the chapter because he knew you were going to F with us

"Well that's not good. Where the hell is Caleb???" Now you gave @drsawzall a reason to hate Caleb again (At least for one more chapter

Congrats you beat @chris191070

Even without @Mrsgnomie spoilerish comment I knew something was going to happen things were going WAYYYYY!!!! to good can't have that in a @kbois story can we? Well I think this proves there is a Huntington mole either in Giles pack or Sebastian's pack or maybe both.

Sorry I was wrong there were FIVE!!!! more comments

I literally saw the the notifcation just pop up and immediately four comments from the dynamic duo (Or is it the Omnipotent One) I bet they'll be four more comments after I post this

Very interesting group of kids. You said one of them will be featured heavily in upcoming chapters.i'll take a guess (I'm usually wrong) I'm going to say it's Elias

All great points by @Anton_Cloche I would add that it probably had nothing to do with who Sébastien dad is for they let him off at the hospital Airport security cams usually cover everything so this was either a blind spot or a cam was disabled.Other wise there would be a lead they can follow.Still checking hospitals for unidentified children you would think would be something they would do. Jordan wasn't shy but William was stuck up does he think it's gay to see a boy naked? I wonder if thats going to be an issue with them in the future

I wasn't sure whether to leave a love reaction or a tear reaction . I'll will be interested is to see your take on what the protagonist is thinking throughout the story

How can I be jealous of a humble guy like you. BTW not only did you do countdowns before @chris191070 you also used the exact same GIF he used when he was First on a page........coincidence?????🤔

I bet Ross is picking up on how Adam didn't want to shoot him during paintball. I wonder if Emma noticed anything .Adam's mom sure did.

Sort of a cliffhanger Alone in the house waiting for Pierre to wake up. With nobody but Armand around perhaps Pierre will open up as to what happen but maybe after the hangover

When I first heard the title of the chapter I was worried it had something to do do with Robbie's inheritance I was relieved that wasn't case. I am thinking he might have to somehow access some of that money to help Sue out .I don't buy Dan's BS of no money. He is being a deadbeat dad. It sounds like Rory is giving some hints but is stopping short of what he really wants to say.

I saw the Adam thing coming before they started talking about it with the grand assholes (I refuse to say grandparents) . Gay marriage has been legal for awhile now I'm surprised Adam didn't know that. I can see a couple of future scenes that are going to be doozies. Obviously when to ge see Jeremy's Dad.And this scene may not get written but what if the Grand Assholes want to visit Adam? I'm very curious what this new job is I assume it has to do with Derek It actually takes quite a bit longer to obtain an electrician's license than I use here. For example, Florida requires 8000 hours of work experience and 144 hours of classroom instruction, per year. So, the four weeks I'll use here is completely unreasonable in the real world. Ah, the magic of fiction. I guess you didn't see the addendum to the law which reads "Exceptions to the above apply to GA stories"

The key is will Mr and Mrs. Joseph Franklin Sr. cooperate? I hate to think this but the twins are bad people I hope Donald Franklin doesn't kill the parents it they give Dave a lead.

I had no idea a Peregrine Falcon go go so fast 200 MPH if you were unfortunate enough to have one of those collide with you it would be fatal to both the falcon and yourself. I wonder if one or both of the two sons that they will meet will be gay (as well as cute) if they are then Mac and Devin could help them. The story they gave about arriving early because the weather was better then expected on their "canoeing trip" I hope they did research before coming up with that story .What if there was a big storm that made the news I'm sure they were smart enough to think of that but I don't recall either of them saying that. I might sound like someone who lied to my parent a lot but I never did But I had friends who did and often they would ask me if there was any flaws in their story they were going to tell the parents..........You're not buying of this are you?