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Manny Needs A Nanny?....Really? What is going to be the title of your next story? Nate Needs a Mate? Kidding😄

Geez a lot of WTF moments in this chapter especially the part about the UFO showing up like it did I'm anxious to hear about the plan M and Mother come up with. A bizarre thought M was speaking of having a baby .We have assumed he was a boy or man all this time.What if M is actually a female Alien using Michael's body and perhaps there really is a way for M to have a baby being an alien and all. I'm going to make a prediction . I'm usually wrong but a few times I have been right.When the dust finally clears (who knows when though🤔) I'm thinking M will have to return home because he can't physically stay on Earth.When that happens we would have Michael in control of his body again and he tells Connor that HE likes him.

A couple of observations He parked and sat in the truck, looking anywhere but at the jungle of tropical plants spilling over the picket fence. Odd for that to be there considering a landscaping company is one of the tenants “You’re not a wanted felon,” Whatever happened in South Dakota apparently wasn't considered seriously enough for the police to investigate I would have thought the pizza place would have called and told them about M being all bloody. I would think Connor will not make it to work the next day on his FIRST day on the job. The main thing on my mind is at the hospital whatever routine thing they might do to see if M is OK might reveal he's in Micheal's body what is going to be the fall out from that are Connor and M going to be separated?

Beautifully put @St4rlight I think Comsie knows how much he impacted you there are thousands and thousands of others he impacted the same way

Very well done. I may have misinterpreted 19 and 20 but was it about Comicality?

In answer to that part of the comment Joe gave the information to Ken. “I’ll leave a couple of my guys here to look after the boys,” he said to Ken. I'm glad the girls were found.Since Ahmad is now lying low it's safe to assume he was going to leave the girls in the storm cellar and they may have been found dead

Connor had enough clues that M is some kind of alien about time. I would agree with @drpaladin I think it's better to take his chances with M as opposed to Mr. MIB after all he put a tracer in head FCOL. Mother as M calls her might be the key to solving things but despite what look like superior intellect from the aliens Mother like everyone else is having the damndest time trying to figure out humans. I hope she has the ability to take care of Greg he sounds like bad news.I bet he's the reason why Julie never contacted Connor. So M is in a body of someone named Micheal? Hannah couldn't find any information about him I wonder if this Micheal is presumed dead by the authorities?. "So, that's a drug dealer?" M asked excitedly, peering out the window. "Can I go say hi?" I defy anybody to find a line even remotely similar to that one in another story😄

Then if I wrote stories they would be very exciting because I don't know shit😄

Trevor being a psychiatrist makes me wonder did Billy asked for Trevor's opinion about Judge Krustypants(No this wasn't an excuse to say Judge Krustypants😄) and perhaps Billy doing what he's doing based of what Trevor said about him. If they can make sure Caleb doesn't find out about Bryan sleeping with Diego and Steve he'll feel left out.

As smart as Ahmad was taking his Mother to the restaurant he was equally stupid for sending Mohammed is such a haphazard way.Sute he didn't know about Joe's men but he should have realized that the possibility that Tom and George dorm room could be watched. Luckily we have dumb criminals

We can't make any assumptions one way or another "Don't trust him"? We don't know who the good guy and bad guy is between M and The MIB. Julie and Family while not evil like Connor's Dad seem pretty dysfunctional. BTW you would think they would be a little more curious about M. Nathan is a piece of work which makes one wonder how good a parent has Julie been." If they paid me $20 an hour I might do it, but for minimum wage? Fuck naw.” In California a law just went into affect that fast food worked are to paid $20 an hour maybe I'll see Nathan next time I stop somewhere for lunch😄

Thank you for an excellent story. We are used to stories where the protagonist (In this case Carlo) is really smart and while nobody 's perfect you would think they would learn from mistakes it's disappointing that Carlo apparently didn't unless it was something totally different and unrelated to what happened with Duncan. Could somebody with incidents like Carlo had get work like he did? I'm glad you mentioned what year this story started I was going to mention "A Laurel and Hardy Story 100 years old? I have to admit prompt #68 sounds very interesting looking forward to it Oh BTW I didn't skip to the end

It was so cool that Colin and Jason took Phil out to lunch and to a nice place Olive Garden.I think Colin and Jason really do love Phil like a Grandfather. That Stanley situation I couldn't help but think you know who would be perfect to help Stanley out? Matt from the story Stuff People Do. I know different story. But it would be cool if Matt made a cameo in this story and it's revealed Phil was a counselor at the same school Matt attended. No @Ronyx I'm not trying to get you to change the story😄. I'm certain what you have planned will be better then what I just wrote.

Connor quirked a brow. “What looks blue?” “The Earth. From far away.” Jeez how many clues does Connor need??? Apparently they believe it is only one man in black why couldn't be multiple men in black? Connor scanned the streets for a payphone. Soon he spotted a row of them in a little plaza, and he pulled over and parked.How long ago did you write this story? Can you still find a row of payphone anywhere these days?

Cool they all enjoyed New Years as a family. I was surprised to hear that music from the 50's would be played. Anybody who was an adult when that music first came out would be in their 90's now. Heck Beatles music has now been around 60 years. I would would have been so ticked at Devin but I must admit it was a good gag. Something slightly off topic on May 3 The History channel is starting a new season of something called Skinwalker Ranch I never seen that show before does this have anything to do with what you wrote about in this story?

Could Karl have taken any action against Stephanie after he found out about her making Barry take the sheets to the laundry room by mouth? I mean that is just.... That 100,000 seconds comment made realize My banks account is worth more than one MILLION pennies......Well it is

It's possible @Arch Hunter meant it one way and left out a word but he usually doesn't make a mistake like that. If @Lee Wilson interpretation is right then more potential for drama and conflict in the future

Well if you did then post their images here FCOL 😄

All very good and valid comment by all the readers above this post So I guess it's time for me the break the streak😄. @Arch Hunter mentioned new characters next chapter cynical me is already anticipating drama because things between Mike and Liam are good now. All the characters we met so far have been good people so far (with the possible exception of the Dad in the food court) the dad at the food court) so I'm fearing meeting a few a-holes. My guesses? Some of Liam's jock friends who are homophobes or a male friend who has the hot's for Mike.Now that I mentioned that it probably won't happen. I don’t care if I sound like a squirrel or any other rodent for that matter. Squirrel again? What is it with Mike and squirrels?....DON"T ANSWER THAT! DON"T ANSWER THAT!😳 ...Well at least it wasn't Gerbils..Okay,okay I'll stop now

Right now I'm not ready to take anything at face value Conner thinks M killed a government agent and he hid the body.They are totally F----d if that's the case which is why I don't think it is.We have gotten plenty of clues that the MIB and M isn't of this earth so there may not even be any kind of a manhunt going on. There are so many possibilities here because of the ET nature of this one being maybe that MIB that tried to take M isn't really dead.Stay tuned

Billy has his reasons (But hell if I know what it is) I would love to have been a fly on the wall to hear what went on in the Judge's Chambers while Crustypants didn't find Billy in contempt and he was a tiny bit less bias when they returned from Chambers I still didn't see any dramatic change in the Judge. I hope you weren't too bored with this scene. Courtroom scenes can be a procedural drag, but I promise everything (well 80% at least) is relevant, even the lies. On the contrary I love a good courtroom case when done right and this was done right. For me I read courtroom scenes I always think of the show Perry Mason.He in about 90% of his cases he always up against the same prosecuting attorney who he always beats.Either that ADA keeps bringing innocent people to trial or he's incompetent always losing why did he still have a job?😄. I wonder how Perry Mason would have handled Judge Crustypants?

Something I neglected to mention although I prefer Connor with M (I'm still not convinced M is human though) I had hoped the Hannah situation could have been handled better .I think fundamentally she is a good person I hope she finds her way back to being a friend and Allie🤞

Wow even more questions then answers now.I though this MIB was an ET of some kind ( might still be)but he apparently is mortal if M was able to kill him with a baseball bat. Needless to say the "Agent" dying is going to bring even more attention from whoever the agent was working for

My comments are going to be disjointed because I have so many of them. As @James Carnarvon mentioned nobody was better at getting into the mind of a confused teen gay boy and being able to describe all the range of emotions that boy is feeling and every one of us readers could relare he was a genius that way. @Ronyx mentioned he became a gay teen author because of @Comicality for that alone we owe him a hugh debt of thanks and I'm certain @Ronyx isn't the only one whether they know it or not other authors on GA or other places are doing what they are doing in part because of @Comicality we are always going to see his influence in other authors works so he will always be alive in that respect @Lee Wilson brought up the the idea of other GA authors completing his unfinished stories.There are pros and cons to that but there is one thing that is certain no matter how talented the author is he or she will not be able to put that special @Comicality touch on it.But it would be an amazing tribute to him. Here is another reason we should all hope for a Heaven and for us being worthy enough for being there. We would get a chance to read all the stories he didn't finish here. I'm really going to miss you Comsie. Thank you for everything💕

You have had your share of characters that are easy to dislike or hate but whoa Stephanie just might be worst or perhaps tied with the two pedo's in After The Divorce. After that despicable note she left Karl perhaps she should have been the one declared insane