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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    Let's see Liam gets cheated on ,gets a breakup text and it's on his birthday wow Jake wins the triple crown or A-holeness . There's the moving too fast after a rebound aspect of this but there would be no story if he didn't I guess. Good luck Liam
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    Chapter 184

    It may have been mentioned earlier in the story but when Armand forgot to take the picture I thought Roger could send one on his phone then I realized there has been no mention of cell phones so I'm guessing this is set in an earlier time. Toby has learned well form his older brothers about pretending to be drunk after drinking wine. If I remember right in an earlier trip Alesander was wrongly fired from a hotel they were staying at. Turns out it was the best thing that ever happened to him with Colin help.Glad he is doing so well
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    Chapter 184

    And end up in the Bermuda triangle? I don't know if @CLJobe can write that kind of story
  4. weinerdog

    Chapter 15 S1

    I had wondered it Devin and Mac were open about being a couple but if Barry figured it out by them taking showers together then others probably did also. Barry is very observant he noticed the clothes Devin was wearing if Devin stops a rape (which I hope he does of course) and Barry finds out the person who stopped the rape was wearing the same clothes Devin was wearing well obviously he's not going to think Devin changed his body but he might think Devin has someone working with him .If Devin denies it I can see Barry following him and then possibly he will witness Devin's transformation
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    Chapter 9

    Excellent points by both @CincyKris and @drpaladin and I was definitely thinking the same about the older gentlemen Micheal came across. Worse case scenario if it doesn't work Micheal has some work experience history that he could fall back on and could probably find something if necessary.Of course it would be a risk but he would always second-guess himself if he doesn't try. I Had to laugh at How it was impossible to get through a lecture without an iPad, I wonder if someone's iPad broke and someone used pencil and paper to take notes in class would everybody stare at him/her.I can picture my nephew rolling his eyes at me telling him we had to write down out notes. I have a question about Pittsburgh. You mentioned Forbes ave. is this Cathedral of Learning close to where the old ballpark Forbes Field used to be?
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    Chapter 183

    Seems like the visit came at the right time for Arnaud
  7. weinerdog

    Chapter 7

    But how do you guys REALLY feel?
  8. weinerdog

    Chapter 7

    @Shadow086 Hit the nail on the head.Ron threw another curve like he did with Blake last chapter.When Craig had Seth at the next level I thought He was going to be rough and heavy handed but according to Seth he was tender.That proves that Seth hasn't just been a convenient hole for Craig to use he had been actually into to him for quite awhile predating the incident in the hospital where he found out about Seth and he wanted this to be good so went slow and made sure to enjoy it (for his benefit of course)As @Shadow086 said he became Stacy GF to be nearby Seth. I have to wonder if the incident in the hospital hadn't happen and he didn't know Seth was gay what would have happened? And how would Craig have done it? Rape perhaps? As @scrubber6620 alluded to Craig said "nice" when he first he saw Seth naked ends up in the shower with him ,Rims him, does the ultimate big nasty and gives him a hickey but none of that is gay because they didn't kiss 🙄. The secret will be found out secrets usually are in stories like this and when it does how much do you want to bet Seth will be blamed for it. Stacy again said something that just can't be ignored “Because you would rather spend the day with my brother than me.” If I had been there I would have said "Yeah and so would everyone else"
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    Chapter 8

    Trust me you don't want to hear my version
  10. I'm doing this because this story and this author deserves as many 5 star reviews as it can get the other reviews that appeared before this one already covered it more eloquently then I can .All I'll say is if you have read the other Ravello stories then this has everything you want.If you haven't read any of the series yet then stop reading this review and do yourself a favor and start reading The Summer of the Firefly
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    Chapter 51

    I have to agree with that.I would hire you as a sports reporter in a minute. KICK PETE"S ASS!!!!!!!!
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    Chapter 43

    I don't think Andre would join up would willingly go with the vampires but it might get to the point he has no choice because at the moment he's all alone
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    Chapter 15

    Great move having Giaco and Dani in the middle of the square and having Toto, Michele and Claudia observing them same with Luca and Cosmo BTW it should be mentioned kudos to Luisa and Mario for taking in Cosmo. Lets see in the time we've known Dani he was on a side of a cliff hanging on to dear life,there was that confrontation by gun point with that protection racket there was that fire where Toto ended up in the hospital and finally there was this police shoot out where Giaco gets hit.One could come to the conclusion hanging out with Dani is hazardous to his and anybody around him health. But guess what despite that I would gladly hang around with him anyway.
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    Chapter 15

    I'll get back to you when I stop crying .Beautifully done
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    Chapter 14

    I'm confident Giaco will be OK but not 100% confident I must say Because I'm reasonably confident things will work out I'll comment on a few other thing on what the aftermath might be. I guess there is a lot Luca doesn't know about his brother .They are going to have a very interesting talk So Cosmo likes boys? Are you thinking what I'm thinking @Summerabbacat ?Cosmo and Marco🤞 Marco can relate to both being rejected like Cosmo was and being sucked in working for the Neri family. But first of course be OK Giaco. This is a great story
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    Chapter 13

    My first thought was Giaco should be given the benefit of the doubt but he had done this before hadn't he so I can't blame Luca for his reaction. While I don't believe Giaco turned to the dark side I'm puzzled as to what his plan might be.I hope It's not reckless
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    Chapter 13

    You left yourself open for a smart ass retort......Nah!!! I won't
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    Chapter 12

    I'm going to do something really, really radical here I'm going to actually talk about the chapter. Dani felt like he was doing the right thing telling Giaco about Marco and himself and I share @Summerabbacat thought about Giaco frame of mind after Dani told him and then confronting Cosmo.Well that sort of had to happen didn't it they were all content to stay out so someone had to do something stupid to draw attention to get the bad guys back into the story and you chose Giaco to be the stupid one😄
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    Chapter 12

    Do you remember when they briefly changed their outfits and hair to reflect a more new-wave style? A few after seeing a publicity pic in their new get-up I had a friend who just got back from visiting family in the Philippines and he told me The Village People were doing shows there in their construction worker,cowboy etc.outfits if you blinked you missed their "change"
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    Chapter 11

    Unlike that reaction Marco had the previous time Marco kissed Bani Marco took it very maturely. I wonder how much of that was because of being with Gianni and Angelo. Well I hope you find someone for Marco..... uh except for Luca of course we don't need something like that
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    Chapter 11

    It felt different from Giacomo’s: smaller and more delicate, for one thing, but Daniele also knew that there was almost nothing that those fingers could not do. After all those puns in that one chapter when Dani and Giaco were on the mountain top I thought for sure somebody would have jumped on this line
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    Chapter 182

    Very nice chapter My favorite part was when Louise was crying looking at the painting and then David walking over to give her a handkerchief and then both of them walking back holding hands. I guess things have thawed out between them
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    Chapter 10

    With all this happening so fast I would not blame Giaco for thinking Marco manipulated this not so much for the stuff he said to Dani on that day but for seemingly swooping in so fast an outsider who didn't know Marco so well would come to the same conclusion.Wonder what Emilia thinks? I fear a confrontation happening between Giaco and Marco where both of them screaming at each other will say things that would be hard to take back
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    Chapter 9

    All the valid points (And puns) have already been stated here by this smart group of readers. I only give one word of caution Giaco said something in a previous chapter (I forget which one) which may mean absolutely nothing but still be kept in the back of your mind .When Dani asked Giaco something about liking boys Giacomo said“Just one boy… so far.” He probably shouldn't have said like that. Unless I missed something I don't think any readers express this thought yet at this point in the story and I sure hope I'm wrong.Thinking of the word selfless in the story title I am now worried it could be that while in a confrontation with the bad guys one of the group could get hurt in trying to protect someone . Maybe even fatally? I don't think James would do that but I don't rule it out. Again I stress I hope I'm soooooo wrong
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    Chapter 9

    Besides Claudia would kick his ass
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