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I like James but he can be a little thick like he was with Donovan.It should have been obvious to James why Dion freaked out at the violence of the movie .Other wise everything was great Jackie and Roy hooked up and it looks like Dion and James are heading that way it was a good sign that Dion could open up to Roy about Jame its like Roy knew what to ask he's a good friend. Marky was a trip but adorable

Ronny playing that much as a freshman is impressive he may or may not be drafted by the pros but he could certainly get a job as a coach in the future. The club showing sports will be great for business.They should have a sign out in front reading "Watch Ronnie's games here" The older boys are in college now are we going to hear about significant others yet? This is just my guess but I'm going to say three of them are straight and one of them is going to be gay and I have an idea who but you're the author so you have the final say😄

I'm not smart enough to figure it out at the end what was missing? Will Armand talk to his folks about what it was like for4 them when he left for college? I see one possible problem at the home.What if the electricity is not working meaning the front security gate AND at the same time there is a fire I hope they have a plan on how to evacuate

Frood showed skills nobody seemed to know he had The expression Joe said "break a leg "seems a little different when used in this context If Pratwith did any scouting they probably know Rafe is their big gun so I expect they have something up their sleeve for him.Just my own thought I picture Rafe after having a tough battle coming close to killing his opponent and maybe has to be talked down before doing so perhaps by Andre .Just a thought

Are you sure it wasn't supposed to be Trevor Randy?🤔

With the Stevensons behind Andy and with Garrett being a lawyer there is hope now?

If Shannon had a twin I'm sure Trevor would have known about it so other then that what could have happened? I'm guessing the women Shannon was with has no idea of Shannon's straight past otherwise this makes no sense. I remember when Blacks beach used to be a really crowded place when it was a legally nude beach but then through a local city voting proposition(unfortunate term) it got overturned by the voters (such uptight people).After that there was still a small group that still went nude there and local law enforcement pretty much left them alone. The way the beach was portrayed in this chapter it sounds like a busier place these days I think I'll check it out ......just out of curiosity of course

Three cheers for Mr. Wilbur If not for him I don't know if James and Dion would have ever got together.Was it good or bad that the almost kiss didn't happen? I would have been interested in Dion's reaction but now on to this sort of date. Speaking of almost kisses I sort of figured thats how Roy was reacting to Jackie getting all dolled up. Good on James for suggesting to her to tone it down.He sure made up for their previous conversation when he answered Jackie's question if she's ugly by saying not really.NOT REALLY???!!! Geez even I know not to say that

I agree this part of the story is dark but trust me if you stick with it you won't regret it. I know of a reader who left the story only to come back later finish it and leave a 5 star review. I am curious how many readers left around this point never to come back? It's their loss. I hope you reconsider

For a moment I thought Rory and Robbie were going to do the deed .They haven't started sleeping yet so who knows at the moment Rory is in control but if he really does have a little bit of a gay side and he's right next to Robbie's warm body lets just say I don't rule it out. Even if nothing happens I suspect Nathan will think something did based on his earlier jealousy . Is Alex lying about Nathan still using drugs ? He has done shittier stuff then that to Robbie before

Perhaps you're the one who stoned

For years hospitals in the U.S. used to take off the foreskin right after birth automatically but I heard that is not the case anymore .I just heard that I'm not saying it's a fact

She said 4ish .Don't you know how much leeway there is in the word ish? And then there's this 2020= I year 2021=2 years 2022=3 years 2023 or ish = up to a year😄

I'm glad Carl has warmed up to Armand but I would be worried is this going to be a constant issue growing up will Carl shy away from kids in school and have trouble making friends due to this.Armand hasn't mentioned getting professional help for him I guess GG would tell him if he should.

Wait I thought that was the only way you could read her stories.You mean they are still good if you don't?

I second everything that has already been said in other reviews and there is nothing I san add.I just want there to be another 5 star review for this in the friendly battle between @kbois and @Mrsgnomie on who has more 5 star reviews in all their stories combined .I haven't counted but I bet both of them will after reading this review😄 If you haven't read any of @kboisand @astone2292 stories you can still enjoy this although you would enjoy it more if you have read their stories but there is a lot to go through so go ahead and read this first I bet you afterward you will want to go their catalogues @Mrsgnomie also

Actually I meant Wythuf himself writing a story for GA....Wha? What do you mean he's not real????🤔

You are going to love it but fair warning the first 8 chapters or so are very difficult. Hang with it there are other parts that will also get to you. There was a reader who left a message saying he was going to stop reading the story a year later he finished it and left a 5 star review

Nice surprise chapter I wish you would have given us a heads up I would have been to this party earlier...Or was THAT your goal A few reactions to lines in the chapter “Yup. Knocking out three stories in two weeks is a record for me".....I'm surprised he didn't say he was slaving over a hot keyboard "Wythuf smiled. Earlier, he realized she was not what her world deemed a ‘morning person".......Nor an afternoon or evening person I might add " Entertainment producers were already planning their own versions of these game shows to broadcast."....Well that would explain all the messages from unknown orgins I've been getting about appearing on shows I never heard of. "I’m also requesting permission from our leaders and your Myr to create a permanent portal between our timelines so we can access the amazing Gay Author’s platform.”"...So when can we be expecting Wythuf debut story on GA. Great,great stuff from both of you ,Thank you so much

I made a comment yesterday about you replacing Steve Harvey.Is this your way of teasing him?

The key word missing here is "successfully" jump through a fire hoop

I resent that and I would give you a piece of my mind but it's time for me to take my nap in my oxygen chamber.Got a good deal on it from the Michael Jackson estate

@kbois and @Mrsgnomie relationship compared to Joan Crawford and Bette Davis is "🎶 Sunshine ,lollipops and rainbows everywhere🎶" Joan Crawford passed away 12 years before Bette Davis and the Hollywood press asked Bette Davis for a reaction and she said " I suppose I should say something good about Joan Crawford so...."Joan Crawford is dead...GOOD". Now THAT was a feud

Just to safe you better check with GA guidelines before writing about that

And what's wrong with saying Germans🤔