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So much to digest in this chapter Jamie turned to Garvin a moment. "He should have been back by now, shouldn't he?" That makes me worry that Thorvil may have mer with some unfortunate fate...at the hands of Porvus? "I have no wish to harm others, myself, but have learned that saving life sometimes requires the taking of life." That same argument was made about the dropping of the atom bomb Kundun was saying there are from another place all this time I (And I suspect most of us) were thinking this was Earth...maybe it isn't Only 7,066 words? You weren't feeling well when you wrote this chapter @Geron Kees?
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On the other hand you can say it's the calm before the storm🤞
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If we did that we would just make a spectacle of ourselves and the optics wouldn't be good
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I didn't realize Arnaud had so much responsibility. I think you may have planted a idea in somebody's head.Don't be surprised if somewhere (probably Boston) they are selling hot dogs with shrimp attached. Come to think of it I wouldn't be surprised if they sold lobster dogs there
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They spoke of how important the lens is I'm assuming Porvus and Urvan is aware of something like that is the lens capable of defending itself or could Porvus break it and if he does what then? They had the need to be silent don't they know the concept of lip reading or sign language?
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In the nether Gorge said "Pretty. Look like world after many mugs of beer." Funny I see the same thing Gorge sees after many mugs of beer
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Is that what you do before you read her new chapters?..........explains a lot.
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If you are unable to do so I have an idea.Maybe @Mrsgnomie will trade him for Caleb
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I'm guessing your impressive background influenced your story Ridley
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It has been suggested that Porvus knows he's not going to stop them that he just wants to see what powers they had before they meet at the Tower but I also think he didn't think Skoda was going to die that certainly got his attention. This battle with Skoda was a lot like a football team blowing a chance at winning at the last second.Skoda had victory in his grasp but then....he choked ...Am I as bad as @Ivor Slipper now
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You know who does it bright and early Eastern daylight time which means its abnormal time for the other USA timezones but that fits because that author is...(I'll let you finish that sentence)
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Only FOUR!!! parts?????
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You're having it with coconut creamer just so @kbois won't join you
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My guess is whatever happened to the ancients they left these "keys " around and some of the people found them. I figured Gorge was going to stay around and eat with them after all his name is.......Gorge
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🥁 Da dit boom
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I never thought would see these words used so effectively in this kind of writing I'm guessing you know this but the sarabande was once banned in Spain for being too "obscene "
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More stuff is closing in on Seth first Ty is getting really close to figuring out Seth if he hasn't already and Stacy said' I’ll kill him if he’s seeing someone else." She just might when she finds out who that somebody else is. Craig almost knocking over Blake is very ominous I wonder if Craig remembers him from the hospital. I was also suspicious because Jennifer seemed interested in Blake. I had never seen her act so friendly with another boy before. Even Sherman made a joke about her questioning of Blake. He laughed and said, “Someone’s looking for a boyfriend.” Jennifer slapped him in the chest and told him to be quiet. That sounds like what I said about Blake maybe taking Jennifer to the dance may happen. “Wow!” he said admiringly as he looked at my body. At that moment, I knew. Craig is like me. He is gay. A straight boy wouldn’t look at another boy the way Craig was looking at me. WINNER,WINNER CHICKEN DINNER it about friggen time Seth. She didn’t understand why Craig couldn’t come over. “Besides,” she said. “Seth will be here. We won’t do anything while he’s here.” Yikes is Stacy trying to win 'The stupidest thing a person can say award?. She shook her head and looked at me. “You’re the big brother, Seth. I expect you to watch out for your sister. Don’t let her get in any trouble.” Yeah right like she's capable of doing that herself. BTW how is Seth the big brother? They're twins
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Somebody should inform the city of Molalla PD to be on high alert. It looks like @Mrsgnomie has home field advantage to get Noah
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“Did you know Dayna and I had an appointment to sign papers on life insurance policies?” he asked. “We were supposed to do it before Gracie was born, but it got pushed back for some reason. It would’ve been three times this amount.” That gave me the chills the same thing happened with my Dad and then he unexpectedly died before crossing the I's and dotting the t's.The Thing was this was through the Army and It had he had received a letter saying the increased coverage had been approved. My Uncle who was an attorney tried like mad to reason with the people in charge but nope he didn't sign it.After hearing this I was never more frustrated with government red tape
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It was so hard to choose between leaving a love reaction or tear reaction.Noah is unbelievable if he ever goes missing be sure to tell Kyan where he is (At @kbois house BTW I don't blame her) It is way too early to speculate one of your tags said bisexual so I'm guessing Kyan is going to meet somebody. I don't recall if you said anything about Perry's background like if he's married but I don't think so seeing how much time he spent with Kyan I briefly thought Kyan/Perry???? I'm thinking that would be too soap operaey (Is that a word?) But I don't rule it out yet
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The last chapter I posted a comment 23 minutes after the chapter posted I even said that in the comment 23 WHOLE MINUTES and how does @kbois respond? "bout time you showed up " GEEZ it's not even her story.I bet @kbois is the person behind you who honks the horn one millisecond after the light turns green.Well kbois I'm here now I"M HERE happy?..... I guess I should read the chapter now huh?
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They probably know there are15 more chapters to go
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Leave it to Porvus to have something resembling a giant spider to do his evil bidding it like he knows how people react to spiders. I hope the group come across someone who has battled Porvus before and has lived to tell about it. Perhaps they can get some Intel for lack of a better work and prepare for some future trick up Porsus sleeve. Funny I just went on about how creepy spiders are but who is my favorite comic book hero?...Spiderman🤔
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I'm hungry also @CLJobe.It is not a surprise that James made better paella but under no circumstances tell Marko's Mother that
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All excellent comments from the readers previous to I. So I will will go a little off course here could Jamie with his new knowledge theoretically transport back to the Prince and fix his uh... shortcoming himself now? Obviously he has another more important mission now but I don't see any reason why Jamie couldn't now fix it. "I was wondering," Garvin said then. "I was not sure the wagon would come if we were all unseen." So from that I assume the "wagons" can sense their heat source unless I'm missing something. Do any of these stations have pizza? If they don't then the Ancients were lame.
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