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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 29: Down

    To support that thought in chapter 5 Alec and his Mom did exchange a sincere "Love You" It's easy to forget that when it went downhill so fast
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    Chapter 4

    For those of us already in the corner sounds like refreshments are coming (in Homer voice)"Hmmmm Anchovies and Mushrooms"
  3. Wow this one was a rollercoaster ride. I got most of the chapter wrong except for the part about Beth being Leander's sister that part I figured out. I was less then 50/50 if this was the end or not but I'm glad it wasn't
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    Chapter 4

    I think I know who that was aimed at😄 But at the same time you might have lost all you're other readers from that "insignificant state" (I won't say the name of the state that gives you plausible deniability)
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    Chapter 4

    They don't teach Lockpicking 101in High school? Then I wonder how some of my classmates got so good at it🤔
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    Chapter 29: Down

    You sure captured the complicated feelings Alec has watching his Mom die really well. I got to think this should make up Alec mind about having a relationship with his Dad. Will there be final words between Alec and his Mom and will Finn and River witness it?
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    Chapter 29: Down

    Congrats I bet @Demiurgetold you he's going to post before he told us🙄 Kidding😄
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    Chapter 4

    Excellent chapter. One line stuck out to me. "He wondered if his boss knew about it. Most likely he knew the gift existed, but Ben’s freedom was a sure sign the Fae didn’t know about him specifically." That tell me the boss is less then a nice person he's much more like a ruthless businessman I loved the line "Easy there, Magilla Gorilla,” I like how what happened in Spirit Wolves has crossed over into this story.Your story is also in the same alt-universe as @Mrsgnomiewith the mention of Jay Petermeyer.If Elijah's dad lived in California why did he have a Seattle Seahawks player jersey? Oh that's right The Rams suck in this universe. So the owner of FOX is actually a fox-shifter? Uh-Oh Rupert Murdoch is going to sue you (Hey don't laugh the way he's been getting sued lately he might need the money)
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    Chapter 3

    Well the answer to that is obvious after reflecting on this last chapter it was so uniformly brilliant it left all us readers collectively speechless...............yeah we'll go with that
  10. I'm not sure if that's a good thing or a bad thing (BTW my area has Aldi)
  11. Does Luke know what window to throw stones at? Just hope he thinks through whatever it is he's going to do . Even if there wasn't any issues with Leander's family possible reaction the logistics of their situations going to make this difficult I think we all want a HEA with these two but it just might not be able to happen. The fact that this story keeps mentioning Josh makes me wonder to myself oh no the story not going to go there is it? BTW I haven't drank beer in a long time.I'm a yank so what is "Czech Bud"? Is it like anything the 'Bud" we have in the States?
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    Chapter 9

    Parker said he knows what he's getting into but I'm thinking it may be worse then what even he is imagining .I figured Natalie was going to the protest but after seeing what that idiot Dan texted I'm not only worried that they would try to hurt Parker but also Natalie might accidentally get hurt also by being to close to Parker.Also what Dwayne said at the diner it sounds like he can be provoked too easily also I really hope I'm wrong🤞 I did love the Diner scene Myles and Latasha are crack-ups😄 If they meet Natalie at the protest I could see Natalie being able to keep up with their good natured banter
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    Chapter 48

    I'm sure George's Gallery has policies and procedures when he sent Armand painting overseas but I think George should have informed Armand of that before he did so.Getting a Gallery for Armand was perfect and close to Yale on top of it. I really like @dutch woman ideas in her comment if you decide to use them in a future chapter give her a co-writing credit for that chapter😄
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    A long work week

    Shane's phone # 555-555-5555? That's a TV show phone# couldn't you be more creative than that?
  15. Actually I do think that Elaine saying "Takes your shoes off" did have the appearance of her making a house rule which I don't think is her place yet but most of everything after that I'll put about 50/50 on both of them.Knocking on the door while Luke's showering a bit much(What would have happened if the door was unlocked🤔)Some of Luke's comment also a bit much(Although undeniably funny) I also wouldn't want to have Josh thrushed on to me. There's a equal chance this will get better or worse but my money is on it getting worse. Gay sleep syndrome? I might try that line(I'm kidding,I'm kidding)
  16. Baby steps.But there will be hurdles no matter which direction it goes.For Leander to be with Luke he would pretty much have to leave his family and all that he's known or Luke would have to travel with him and leave his Dad,Taz and that town which has been everything he's known.Does Leander family actually expect him to stay with the family and their business for life? Leander implied that his family would have problem with the same sex issue if he got together with Luke so maybe Leander would have to leave his family because they said so.One thing for certain if this has any chance of going anywhere from here Luke has to be an open book and tell Leander EVERYTHING about him and his issues.
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    Chapter 3

    You mean you actually had that stuff out of the safe?
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    Chapter 3

    There are so many readers there already I can't see the corner
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    Chapter 3

    Forgive me for this.This is the douchebag nerd in me wondering about this. The part that said "The attorney assured him his parents’ bank assets would be transferred to his account by the end of the week." Back in 2014 I was an Estate executor and I was told then by the bank involved that you have to wait 40 days after the date of death before funds can be distributed and I'm in California Like Elijah is.It really doesn't matter as to how good the chapter was but is there something different here compared to what I had to do maybe the rules are different for an attorney as opposed to an executor
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    Chapter 3

    Yeah I agree isn't it annoying when people involved with the story use the chapter comments to bicker back and forth to the point where you forget what the story is about? WHO DOES THAT?.........oh
  21. I have to admit I'm surprised about Leander wanting to meet at 1 A.M. Call this my unhealthy overactive imagination.Any chance the stalker might have been close by enough to know what was going on in Luke's world?You know where I'm going with this?Any chance the texts are from him using a burner phone instead of Leander?OMG what if it's Leo or Lee?Okay I'll stop here
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    Chapter 3

    Good catch by @spyke about the laptop being in the car but as mentioned by others with kbois you never know. I guess it is part of Kage job to ask about Sebastian we don't know one way or another if this was part of the Boss instructions or if Kage is doing this on his own. There's a chance that Kage ,the Boss or both has crossed paths with Sebastian in the past. All all I know once Sebastian gets wind of what Huntington has done then Huntington better be looking over his shoulder
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    Chapter 3

    He wanted to but the last time Sam tried to order some @kboiscleaned out the suppliers
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    Chapter 3

    Oh sure now that we got the new chapter NOW @chris191070 wishes you a safe move.Seriously @kbois I echo what Chris said
  25. If this thing with Leander goes anywhere I could see Luke's condition blowing that up.But maybe Leander won't be a crutch and perhaps he might be the vehicle that points Luke in that direction BTW another character whose name begins with an L what up with that?
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