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🤔..........I can't ...I really can't

Appetizers? What appetizers? How come I don't know about this?Why am I being left out😢

OMG Totally agree with Luke about Elaine way too soon to be making that kind of a statement about school.I have a bad feeling Len is going to act whipped with Elaine. That stuff you said about McDonald's is that stuff you know about personally😳I afraid to eat there now. I'm not familiar with British expressions but when Taz mom said "Coffee then, Luke, I'll pop you one up."After what she just saw was those choice of words intentional😄

"Your hair smells nice"? Pantene? Not exactly what one expects to hear when meeting somebody for the first time but Donna took it in stride makes me wonder if Lee said something to Donna about Luke without revealing too much.Lee and Taz must know the possibility of something happening with Luke in an social situation I hope they are prepared to properly handle it when it does. Although we don't know yet it sounds like Edith is going to be less then a nice person to Luke if she does that I hope if that happens Len sets her straight

To describe this great story I'm going to refer to recent review @Mrsgnomiewrote and borrow from it ..pfft not borrow from it flat out steal it.And I'm going to be just as comprehensive and detailed as she was and here it is WOW! Just WOW! Read this story

You ever thought about a career in Washington D.C. ?

@SAW I second that if you haven't started reading Jay's Loelife yet WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR??? kidding😄

Oh come on he may not be lying.......delusional maybe but not lying

Unless you're using the smartphone.Remember it's always the smartphone fault.As Homer would say" DOH! STUPID SMARTPHONE"

That's not true of me I'm fiercely loyal....win or tie.

You only had the recommendation record for a few days and we have @astone2292and @kbois already trying to knock you off your perch and these are your FRIENDS!!!????🤔

I wonder how many readers are going to count the words before commenting

Great start!WOW! You got to the point really quick.Murdered parents I wouldn't wish that on my worst enemy.When Elijah couldn't think of anybody who wanted his parents dead my next thought made me wonder if it was connected to Elijah's association to Sebastian and the others but it's way, way, way to early to speculate especially after meeting this character Kage. "They'd been best friends since kindergarten. He was the only one, other than his parents, who knew Elijah could shapeshift. They spent a good part of their teenage years using that to their full advantage. It was easy to purchase alcohol when you were a forty-year-old tourist." Out of all the things I was thinking about what I would do if I was a shapeshifter buying alcohol wasn't one of them but I guess it's appropriate that you would think of that after all those times I heard you mention whiskey.Hmm were you a shapeshifter growing up🤔

Or he took you up on your challenge and you guys did fight

Oh my six calls in a short period of time from Alec's Dad that could only be one of two things and that is that it has happen or is very very close to happening.Since it was six calls it sounds like a sense of urgency one can't help to think maybe one last conversation

Another great chapter but you know what's the toughest thing about reading your chapters?The make the Buffetts sound awesome I had to get up and make a snack a few times

So now it's been revealed how the two parts of the story connect.I have not looked at the chapter comments yet to see if anybody said this so my guess is Zev and Ben resemble the other two images in the painting Rosalie referred to.But before I start sounding like I'm a know-it-all I didn't see the part about Reilly's brother being involved in this coming.Oh yeah this story has all the good elements in it.

On one hand mentioning the guy he met at the fair and then wondering if that was him who he almost ran into with the coffee would make a reader think there is a reason why that guy was mentioned.But on the other side of the coin judging by the title of the story it could be Luke's way of second guessing himself and chiding himself for missing an opportunity I guess the next few chapters will tell which way this going.Or because this is me saying this both of my thoughts could be wrong that would be nothing new.

You wrote that Ben's first night at the Diner went "smooth as molasses" I guess Ben and I have a little something in common except I'm slow as molasses. This is really, really good

Adding to Mikedup comment I'm not sure did the story end? It would be a trip if Theresa and Geno visited someday and then see themselves in the mural

Although Parker is smart I think he said fifth in his class if I'm not mistaken that probably won't get him in Harvard but Massachusetts has the most universities per square mile in the country(something like that) the majority of them are prestigious so I'm sure Parker can attend a nearby place while Darius is attending Harvard but I guess that will be up to Ronyx LOL

The way Rafe was reacting when he though he heard Andre cry foe help pretty much revealed how he feels about Andre. That class definitely not you typical first day introduction class. Rotar already knew their names so he/she possesses super natural abilities

uh-oh you heard her everybody .All of you who have a Costco card(I do) buy a bag and send it to @mfa607No excuses.( @Mrsgnomieyou might have inadvertently put a target on mfa607 back I see a number of readers forming a circle around mfa607 with an unfinished bag saying EAT IT!!!!!)

Out of Parkers close group of friends I was hoping their would be a mix of reactions.I figured Dan would be extreme but I thought it was possible the others might have prejudices based on being unfamiliar with black people and never having interacted with them but would come around and moderate their thinking after some thinking of the issue.But sadly this group are just hateful bigots.Looks like Natalie is Parker's only friend. Now that there is a counter protest planned it doesn't take that much of an imagination to see angry volatile people on both sides losing it and something happening.You would think since its in front of a police station the PD would be able to control things but I think Parker's Dad is right the PD will look for a reason to blame the protesters for something happening.While there would be people with smartphones in the crowd the PD would do it damndest to confiscate everyone of them or at least the ones they noticed.Some videos of police misbehavior have been recorded from a person who was not seen.If I were Parker's Dad I would find a way to record what's going on without being noticed like from inside a building or something like that because the Somerset PD have given ample reason they are not to be trusted.It would not surprise me if Parkers Dad is thinking along the same lines.

One thing I neglected to mention in my previous comment the line "There’s no sweet talk or eye gazing. Once Jay is in me, he’s thrusting. It takes a minute to adjust. He’s a fucking horse," Jay was a Clydesdale earlier in the story you'ed figured he would be at least that on his wedding night....especially after it's been a year🤔