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Are you proposing to me?
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Are you proposing to me?
As if you don't know- 151 comments
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I guess Finn read what @Hermetically Sealedwrote in the previous chapter comments because he said close to the same thing. Before I make a judgment on this I'm going to wait to see what Finn proposes but it sounds like he's on the right track and for what it's worth I'm optimistic
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Call me a nerd or annoying but this thought just popped in my head while re-reading this chapter . Andy found out from Alan Walker that his mother died and then found out that the Walkers sent birthdays cards and Christmas gifts to him but Gunnar made sure he never knew about it he had to have Stephan think that side of the family didn't care for him.My question?Had he stayed alive what the heck was Gunnars end game?When Stephan would turn 18 Gunnar could not chance Stephan leaving and maybe trying to find his mother. Also when Stephan turned 18 Alan Walker with his high profile job with the government might have tried using his government contacts to try to contact Stephan now that Gunnar no longer had the legal tools to keep them away from Stephan.Gunnar was smart enough to know this so I have to think his solution was for Stephan to meet his demise someway. I know of what I just wrote was thankfully a moot point but I ask you Parker this because you created these wonderful (And In Gunnars case not so wonderful) characters so you would have the best insight as to what could have or would have happened.Interesting after all this time after reading this story and a thought like this comes from nowhere before now I never even considered that. Thanks for indulging me.
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8. Screaming "I love you" into the wind
weinerdog commented on gor mu's story chapter in 8. Screaming "I love you" into the wind
While researching Lauti's disorder Valen is remembering things about his Mom.Is Lauti aware of what happened with Valen's Mom? If not I can definitely see this being brought up if Lautu is going through a bad stretch. As far as Lauti going out Valens with his Uni mates that might be a bad idea I'm sure there will be some anxiety issues with Lauti and perhaps Cappa looks At Valen in a certain way one that Valen is unaware of but Lauti might notice -
The Truth in Loren's Eyes
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in The Truth in Loren's Eyes
You beat me to it I was going to suggest #noneoftheabove but yours is better- 124 comments
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The Truth in Loren's Eyes
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in The Truth in Loren's Eyes
Of course not you only kill characters willy-nilly when you're editing @Mrsgnomie stories.But she keeps catching it before she posts it. -
Marylou what a piece of work.I'm glad the camera caught everything. I guess all of this is happening in the present time unlike some of your other stories. July 1 is indeed on a Friday this year
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The Truth in Loren's Eyes
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in The Truth in Loren's Eyes
Loren matured looks like @kboisdid also(at least compared to before)- 124 comments
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The Truth in Loren's Eyes
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in The Truth in Loren's Eyes
Perfect Chapter there is nothing to add.Except maybe @kbois saying the chapter was perfect because of her editing. "The little guy looks at me like, who is this guy?" "Even nails me with the same unimpressed stare.” Yep Carson is definitely Seamus son- 124 comments
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OMG then he has no idea what kind of hornets nest he will stir
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You already challenged him to come cross country what's taking him so long? This goes back to a previous story we read Etotsira used sad puppy eyes on the author Dabeagle don't fall for it
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How did I miss this?Any way Jerry is a special class of A---hole he already got Zeke time slot there was no reason to say that outrageous lie in from of Dillan.So petty.I hope Zeke goes head to head with Jerry's time slot and blows him away (hint,hint).Noe to read the next chapter which just got posted
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Wow so much goes into planning a club and I bet you left out a lot. What was GG hinting at?What gift?Maybe adopting a Kid?
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@DemiurgeNotice he said that you have no proof NOT that he doesn't lie
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I appreciate and respect what you are saying. @jaysalmn beat me to the punch and said part of what I was going to say but back in High school Finn did all the compromising its hard for anybody to come out in high school let alone a star athlete who was liked and admired by everybody. He had to dress alone in the locker room because of that but Finn let any of that of that stop him he was even taking a chance that colleges wouldn't offer football scholarships because that was still an issue back then and may still be.Rightly or wrongly most people eventually expect to have sex in a relationship Finn never pressured Alec on that how many people in a relationship gay or straight would do that? The triggering situations? Alec will have that in Washington every time he thinks of letting Finn get away ...Twice. Getting nothing in return?We know about his empty encounters that will not be the case with Finn and he'll get something he's never had Finn's family likes him maybe even loves him so in a sense he will have the family he's never had... Gracie also heck even Herky( Finn would come up with that name)
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It's literally the 11th hour make it good Alec🤞. Alec shouldn't say he will never hurt Finn again but what he can say is he won't run away anymore that he will make a commitment . The mere fact Alec took the initiative THIS time I hope is enough to convince Finn 🤞 Finn with a St.Bernard somehow that just fits perfectly. This chapter was a nice surprise😀will there be the usual Saturday posting?
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Beautiful. How do you do it.I will make observation the name of this is May morning and we just started June.But that says more about me than anything.
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7. A flower in your window
weinerdog commented on gor mu's story chapter in 7. A flower in your window
Wow both of them had serious ordeals growing up that we are just finding out about I just hope Valen can juggle his legitimate school duties and still be there for Lauti.As awful as this sounds perhaps Valen should be friends only at school with the others and not outside of school .That sounds so wrong but it may be right in this case. I guess Valen shouldn't tell Marian about this although it could help -
Maybe not in reality but in my mind definitely.
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Now it's the airport fault.I bet your teachers loved your explanations.
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What a coincidence you just happened to be there when @kbois special order whiskey arrived
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Chapter 23: Mistakes and Consequences
weinerdog commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Chapter 23: Mistakes and Consequences
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Of course its the "Damn phone" it has absolutely nothing to do with person operating it who BTW is the world's best editor
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When I read this just now it said it was posted one minute ago I'm astonished that @Mrsgnomie hasn't responded yet
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Yeah I noticed that.Whats wrong cat got your tongue?
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