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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 6

    I'm worried that the people of Earth today will be making the same mistake the people of New Toledo made. except in out case it's ignoring global warming much to our detriment as it was to their detriment.Also taking the land away from the Gnos sounds a lot like us taking the Indians land away
  2. OH so that's why you're so good you have no idea what you're going to do either.
  3. weinerdog

    Chapter 14

    WTH the girls are still getting away with it they are doing something little children know better NOT to do. That trip to Europe sound awesome That picture Armand did of Colin and his Dad Armand gave the detail that they were clothed.Well if it was for their reception room for the office building I would certainly hope so🤔
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    Chapter 13

    I'm surprised the girls are still allowed in the club they must be pretty and the guys must be whipped I guess.They shouldn't need a conference room meeting to deal with that. It would seem to be a no brainer for Armand to paint that village on the wall inside the restaurant.
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    The Way Forward

    So where on the internet can we find the pics of the nude retreat?Kidding😄 I never thought I would read something where a trillion dollars and damn cheap would be in the same paragraph. I know this is not real life but have you had any thoughts of changing or adding anything to future chapters any material that speaks of the war in Ukraine?
  6. weinerdog

    Chapter 10

    Colin should consider something and that is Ricky's parents might be the reason all that happened.Colin is lot like a previous character of yours Danny from Never Again. If I were Russ I would have no idea what to do
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    Chapter 12

    I was wondering if Armand was going to mention to Colin about GG coming to him in dreams.Does Colin know they are related?Armand didn't say to keep this secret. If this gets out will people think Armand is nuts?
  8. weinerdog

    Chapter 32

    I wonder if Justin got this way voluntarily or was something put in a drink?Do they pee test in High school sports these days.Maybe it was some kind of scheme. It seemed briefly that West though that the others suspected some hanky panky between he and Neil for being in the bathroom a long time.When hearing the girls was mentioned West seemed to relax.If Neil and West are in the bathroom a long time in the future will guys think something different then?
  9. weinerdog

    Chapter 11

    I hope while gossiping Jane finds out about what her daughter is doing. I just knew the escargot was going to happen
  10. While they were rock climbing I heard Loren suggest Jay jump down instead gradually climb down.Sometimes the most simple thing can cause a injury and I have a vision of Jay landing ever so slightly wrong in the future and missing a game I just hear the explanation to the coach "I was rock climbing with a ....friend and.... One question I had in mind for Loren was" are you going to be single forever?"
  11. weinerdog

    Chapter 5

    This was very interesting and very emotional. Had it been me performing this seeing the image of Mithras with Peter and Manet sitting next to her smiling would be very reassuring.Otherwise I would have been a big time mess for a long time
  12. weinerdog

    Chapter 10

    It's not just the sense of entitlement that these girls have but jeez HELLO!!!! We're living in a time of Co-vid MORONS!!!! The point Ellen made was excellent.The passage in the Bible about eating shellfish and the fabrics are in the same chapter as a Man laying with another Man.So does that mean everybody who eats a lobster will go to hell?Funny how that part almost never gets mentioned
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    Chapter 7: Talk

    At the time Alec was being home schooled for the most part nobody knew him from Adam but now being in HS with hundreds of kids at the same time totally different environment thus the difference in his behavior
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    Chapter 7: Talk

    "Was this all Alec’s fault? Finn had everything going for him. He was in all the sports, he had a huge group of friends, and he was universally well-liked. This would surely ruin that, if his friends’ reactions were anything to go by." I thought from the last chapter this might be the basis for Alec not wanting to continue with this and it might still end up that way.But Finn to his credit is saying F them. Finn will be graduating and most likely go out of town for college maybe even a scholarship leaving Alec behind to finish high school that would be tough even for a straight couple.I'm afraid for Alec without Finn being there that the next year will be pure hell for him.We know Alec is going to leave town And I suspect the Alec's parents will be a BIG part of the reason. This might be too much wishful thinking but when Alec leaves town I hope there's a way River can go with him
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    Chapter 9

    Nice move by Colin. Armand might be in a for windfall if he wanted one.I can see all the Ladies trying to contact him for a painting well maybe not Jane
  16. After all that can't see J.J. staying with Applezon.I have to believe somebody would want to exploit that brilliant mind.I'm very limited in knowledge in this area but I see either politics or starting his own business If I'm way off I'm sure the other readers will let me know. The thing about Applezon contributing to both parties certainly rings true.In 1992 The Dole Pineapple company was President Bush highest contributor at the same time they were Clinton's forth highest contributor
  17. That is an incredible article and it took a lot of guts to write that and My Only Escape. Your goal for writing that story has been achieved many ,many times over
  18. weinerdog

    Chapter 8

    Many readers are wondering about Mom's reaction.I wonder if her "charity meetings" which somehow involves being at the club have something to do with it. To expound on what @Philippe said Mom will first call it "porn" then when she finds out who Arrow is it will be "Art"
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    Chapter 7

    I can just see in the future when friends ask "So how did you meet?"Well he was posing nude for one of my paintings and...should be some interesting conversations. It's surprising the Professor didn't know Armand was Arrow all this time
  20. My review won't do this story justice but I'll try.First this is a really really tough topic that's all too real but it has be talked about and never ignored although it is way too often. The story centers around Zack and the way the authors able to express the raw emotion felt by Zack tells me that this author was very close to a situation like this be it a relative, friend or maybe even...well I'll leave it there. As a reader you will feel very vividly what Zack was feeling on an everyday basic.Some chapters will make you cry and feel exhausted. What made Zack soldier on besides his own self defense mechanisms was when he met what looks to be the love of his life in Brody who was perfect is role also two very fiercely loyal friends in Adam and Sam if Zack didn't have them this could have very easily been a different outcome. Seriously I could have given this 10 stars but it only allows us to give 5.Certain parts of the ending may surprise you at times reading this will be tough but hang in there it will be well worth it
  21. Out of all the scenarios I though about happening this wasn't one of them but this was brilliant very well done. The police officer that approached Zack seemed to be aware of some of the stuff that happened leading up to this that tells me Mr. Schultz is his 911 call must of passed on to them what he suspected was happening all this time.If only if someone did it sooner. "And as I sniffled and wiped my eyes, Mr. Raffe said, "Just a 'C', huh? Heh, you did much better than that. But who knows? Maybe you can take the 'C' and make it mean something when you're older" That brought up a question in my head which I think would be inappropriate to ask here I wonder if any readers are thinking the same thing? This was a long time in the making but guess what well worth it. This story is a top 5 for sure
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    Getting Physical

    For those of you who go this far back I can think of a ton of Dean Martin jokes to put here
  23. Joel and Lisa was told not to give Bridget a reason to go after them which means that they will more likely it will be Lisa
  24. weinerdog

    Getting Physical

    Loren said what he does is "More than good looks and a hot body." But then Sven has him Lowering his boxers Just saying.No particular reason but I have a bad feeling Sven might end up being dangerous. I believe what Jay is doing to Loren is calculated and it seems to be working
  25. Something like this was long overdue for Zack.And also for Brody for being the perfect patient understanding BF
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