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    Chapter 7: Talk

    At the time Alec was being home schooled for the most part nobody knew him from Adam but now being in HS with hundreds of kids at the same time totally different environment thus the difference in his behavior
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    Chapter 7: Talk

    "Was this all Alec’s fault? Finn had everything going for him. He was in all the sports, he had a huge group of friends, and he was universally well-liked. This would surely ruin that, if his friends’ reactions were anything to go by." I thought from the last chapter this might be the basis for Alec not wanting to continue with this and it might still end up that way.But Finn to his credit is saying F them. Finn will be graduating and most likely go out of town for college maybe even a scholarship leaving Alec behind to finish high school that would be tough even for a straight couple.I'm afraid for Alec without Finn being there that the next year will be pure hell for him.We know Alec is going to leave town And I suspect the Alec's parents will be a BIG part of the reason. This might be too much wishful thinking but when Alec leaves town I hope there's a way River can go with him
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    Chapter 9

    Nice move by Colin. Armand might be in a for windfall if he wanted one.I can see all the Ladies trying to contact him for a painting well maybe not Jane
  4. After all that can't see J.J. staying with Applezon.I have to believe somebody would want to exploit that brilliant mind.I'm very limited in knowledge in this area but I see either politics or starting his own business If I'm way off I'm sure the other readers will let me know. The thing about Applezon contributing to both parties certainly rings true.In 1992 The Dole Pineapple company was President Bush highest contributor at the same time they were Clinton's forth highest contributor
  5. That is an incredible article and it took a lot of guts to write that and My Only Escape. Your goal for writing that story has been achieved many ,many times over
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    Chapter 8

    Many readers are wondering about Mom's reaction.I wonder if her "charity meetings" which somehow involves being at the club have something to do with it. To expound on what @Philippe said Mom will first call it "porn" then when she finds out who Arrow is it will be "Art"
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    Chapter 7

    I can just see in the future when friends ask "So how did you meet?"Well he was posing nude for one of my paintings and...should be some interesting conversations. It's surprising the Professor didn't know Armand was Arrow all this time
  8. My review won't do this story justice but I'll try.First this is a really really tough topic that's all too real but it has be talked about and never ignored although it is way too often. The story centers around Zack and the way the authors able to express the raw emotion felt by Zack tells me that this author was very close to a situation like this be it a relative, friend or maybe even...well I'll leave it there. As a reader you will feel very vividly what Zack was feeling on an everyday basic.Some chapters will make you cry and feel exhausted. What made Zack soldier on besides his own self defense mechanisms was when he met what looks to be the love of his life in Brody who was perfect is role also two very fiercely loyal friends in Adam and Sam if Zack didn't have them this could have very easily been a different outcome. Seriously I could have given this 10 stars but it only allows us to give 5.Certain parts of the ending may surprise you at times reading this will be tough but hang in there it will be well worth it
  9. Out of all the scenarios I though about happening this wasn't one of them but this was brilliant very well done. The police officer that approached Zack seemed to be aware of some of the stuff that happened leading up to this that tells me Mr. Schultz is his 911 call must of passed on to them what he suspected was happening all this time.If only if someone did it sooner. "And as I sniffled and wiped my eyes, Mr. Raffe said, "Just a 'C', huh? Heh, you did much better than that. But who knows? Maybe you can take the 'C' and make it mean something when you're older" That brought up a question in my head which I think would be inappropriate to ask here I wonder if any readers are thinking the same thing? This was a long time in the making but guess what well worth it. This story is a top 5 for sure
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    Getting Physical

    For those of you who go this far back I can think of a ton of Dean Martin jokes to put here
  11. Joel and Lisa was told not to give Bridget a reason to go after them which means that they will more likely it will be Lisa
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    Getting Physical

    Loren said what he does is "More than good looks and a hot body." But then Sven has him Lowering his boxers Just saying.No particular reason but I have a bad feeling Sven might end up being dangerous. I believe what Jay is doing to Loren is calculated and it seems to be working
  13. Something like this was long overdue for Zack.And also for Brody for being the perfect patient understanding BF
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    Chapter 6

    When some of his classmates made a negative critique on one of his saying had I been there I would have asked someone do YOU!!! have a painting hanging in MoMA?Armand is way above doing that but not me LOL.
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    Summer Retreat

    If I had been Jeff the one thing I would have considered is if someone was really heavy and had man boobs etc.That would have been difficult for the certain party involved.Nobody even knew it was going to be like this until they arrived
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    Summer Retreat

    A nudist business retreat now that's interesting.Is this a product of our author's fertile imagination?Or has this actually happened? An interesting story covering the same type of issue brought up in this chapter.Former President Lyndon Johnson when he was Senate majority leader had a reputation for being able to get Legislation passed.One of his techniques was to wait in the locker room of the gym the senators used with a towel wrapped around him when a Senator he wanted to talk to would come in to use the showers Johnson would then show up take the shower next to him and start talking about some bill pending in congress.Johnson believed both of them being naked created a level playing field and in some cases gave him the advantage.This chapter reminded me of that.
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    Wairaka

    Sounds like incompetent FBI agents if they didn't make the Bruja connection like Gonzales did
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    Twenty Three

    I would definitely feel self conscious about money being spent on me and it being one-sided.Noah will figure out the problem I hope he figures out a way to tell Seth to not make such a big deal about it.That's easier said then done. "By that I mean, even if you don’t like the outfit, you act like it’s the most amazing thing you’ve ever seen. Got it?”. Well isn't that a given with any couple?
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    Chapter 5

    The chapter said Armand worked on the painting for the rest of the semester so that sounds like he put a lot of Time into it. That's why he's going to be a great artist
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    Chapter 4

    I wouldn't wish anyone be as conflicted as Ned is right now and what he has to do. I hope that dream Peter had was valid not a result of the stuff they put in his water. What hasn't been explained at least as far as I can tell is was Peter chosen at random?Or was there rhyme and reason for him to be chosen.Does Peter being "that way" have something to do with it.
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    Twenty Two

    Brock seems to be the kind of moron who wants payback as he was humiliated in front of his jock friends.Perhaps Lia could be Noah bodyguard when Seth isn't around I bet you she would be up to it.
  22. What we don't know yet is how will Bridget change her plans when she finds out the Kookaburra is alive and well
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    Chapter 4

    I hate to ask a technical question during such a sweet story but how do they go about opening an account for Arrow?I didn't know this kind of thing was legal
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    Where's Loren?

    So Jay thinks Garrett should have the trainer look at his uh..condition before the season starts?I'm curious how would the weekly injury report teams release describe that?🤔
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    Full Circle

    Thank God for Fowler and I guess also thank C James for Fowler he created the character LOL. This is a great story but that one line " and don’t press the transmitter’s button,” has to be the biggest DUH!!! line I ever read in a GA story
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