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The way Blake was reacting to Aric's house it sounds like he comes from modest means even before he was on the streets . Comsie have I met you under a different name?The way you are writing Aric you could writing about me especially when I was 14 .I also at times wished I had a perv cam(I never did that I promise)And yep I would probably do the sweatpants thing also...I think I said too much already I better stop before they ban me from GA
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With Eva Marie arrival I'm thinking Stephen and Tim will be adopting sooner rather then later. There's a extradition treaty with Canada Bruce had to have known that but perhaps because he doesn't know about Donnie he wasn't worried.Has anything Bruce done be considered a capital offense? .I only ask that because in the past Canada has refused to return Americans because of the death penalty. What kind of school district doesn't offer Spanish in this day and age?I know the town is small but the district covers a wider area it looks like they are as backwards as the town is.
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I have to admit they know how to put on a show. I don't patronize these kinds of sites but for these guys I might have. As for Sasha will one thing lead to another and then want to start making appearances with them on FF?And could that cause friction with Sammy and Jake?
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I just got notifications from the last 6 chapters that's been posted this is happening with few other authors who I wasn't getting notifications from.Is this GA way of fixing it?Has this happened to anyone else?
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Fredo from The Godfather wouldn't agree with that
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So AM may feel responsible for her husbands death it was unintentional but still.I'm curious if she told the doctor about that. While Mom should have told Dad what happened I do appreciate her concern that Dad would have tracked down Bruce and kill him.
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Cindy lifted Luke being grounded?Timing doesn't make sense even for Cindy.Now what is she up too?
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I'll go you one better if you believe that kind of behavior is hereditary.Maybe Bruce is a product of a rape ...Mum's rape I sure hope not though it would explain a lot. I came back to edit this after thinking about I don't believe Mum would have allowed Bruce to do therapy if that's the case but I suppose it's possible if that happened she put him up for adoption and didn't know the name of the baby .
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I don't how I did it what was meant as a chapter comment ended up in the user feedback section me and technology are enemies LOL. If you're interested in my chapter comment that's where it is🙄
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This chapter brings up questions that I hadn't really givin much thought 😄 is do a higher percentage of home schooled kids have trouble socializing? Say what you want about ours school but it a good place to meet people .Many a__holes to be sure but also many good people I suspect Finn is one of them.Alec from his time on the internet seems to buy into the stereotype that all jocks are jerks In my town in California(and school) seeing someone with Alec's appearance would just get some rolled eyes nothing worst apparently its a lot different in this farm town.My guess is one of the kids at the lunch table Finn tried to get Alec to sit at will try to start so s__t with him and Finn will step in.ALec through those limited encounters at the bakery must have somehow made an impression on Finn. This is the second story of yours I'm reading in both of them a character has blue hair what is it with you and blue hair?Kidding LOL.Loved the chapter
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Well that community has its priorities. Rape?..eh but two people being gay?THAT's different
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So Bruce is in California(why did you have to pick the state I'm in?) Perhaps Tim should ask Gramps if he knows the right kind of people close to Mexico because that's where Bruce might go after he's been served. If Donnie gives the right heads up perhaps they can contact law enforcement and tell them where he will be
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Oh My.I'm thinking he's been kidnapped by foreigners I'm guess his knowledge can be valuable maybe have even have military uses but that is my first thought. I'm guessing Jeff will be contacted by whoever did this because I think this involves the stuff J.J. did at Applezon.Is J.J. important enough for the Federal government to be involved? I think you can blame me and my big mouth I made a comment in a previous chapter comment that after J.J. killed that pedo that he has had a good run meeting the right people personally and professionally so I should have known something like this was going to happen.I see J.J. being in captivity for quite a stretch .Henry being alone in New York as a sixteen year could be a problem also.Oh man so much to find out
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It looks like Ophelia is very perceptive it might be because her Mother is a psychologist .She is doing this for Noah but there is also a legitimate concern for Seth and Lilith.
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While I appreciate Seth's frustrations I would say it was a overreaction Noah meant not offense
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On one hand the repent lady is using the bible to justify her position and then she hits someone over the head with her sign can someone give me the passage in the good book where it said to do that?Oh and also hitting a cop I don't recall that one either
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I'm not just going by the confrontation he had with that @@@hole in the diner but also by how the whole diner got quiet when they walked in.I'm worried that things might be volatile enough that someone may make an attempt on Tim's life.The one hopeful thing is I think Donnie would warn him.If I'm not mistaken this is the first time Donnie mentioned specific names in one of his visits
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Oh my why didn't they get the chance?But maybe this will be good we are conditioned to assume it will be bad or it just me and my wishful thinking. The stuff about James being this young upstart causing jealousy with the juniors partners sounds like he had a little of the J.J. experience also but to not nearly the same degree. This next Nov.22 will be J.J. very first time celebrating a birthday ON his actual birthday.I wonder if the people who know this will pull out all the stops to make it memorable
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Noah being with Seth seem to come with a bonus not only does he get a BF he seems to have gained a new co-bestie with Ophelia in Lillith
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I saw this going so many different ways including the way it went but at least for now it's all good.I don't know how common this is but some authors write a three way where the two BF's are cool with the third hot naked friend being there but their respective asses are off limits but everything else go for it so maybe Patrick lucked out. "Here you can look at my penis if you want.” Now that would never get old
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For as smart as Tim is he was pretty naive when he asked how people knew he was Tom's lawyer all it takes is one big mouth. This is really an ass-backwards town. I hope Bruce is arrogant enough to think he can beat this because if he's getting help from friends he could have gotten out of Dodge already.
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Wow Bran is a bigger POS then I thought. Maybe it should be obvious but I'm curious what West plans too do with those pictures
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The only thing you left out is every time Gavin or somebody else does this it may be the last time they do this if it's the wrong kind of person
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Speaking of mistakes I just doubled posted maybe @mrbossmantis right. Sorry if I stated something
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Opps ...hey its Monday the rest of the week will be better
