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Everything posted by weinerdog
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I gotta say Clair isn't very bright when your Bosses son comes into the office and introduces his husband to her well duh his Father knows about it and that comment about it being a sin ...not a smart move
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The only thing the letter could have said to get such a reaction from Stephen would something like"Gather your clothes and go to your Grandpa house" and Stephen took that to mean he was being kicked out.I know this was suppose to be a surprise but geez if I'm correct about how the letter was written they should have given it more thought.That being said it was a awesome gesture
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To me it seems like a no brainer for Greg and Billy to accept Adam's offer they know he's smart and is a honest person some of you may not believe in this kind of thing but I bet Larry is smiling right now where he's at. Part of the reason for this may be because this chapter could have written before Dia de los Muertos,The Day of the Dead but when JJ/Adam mentioned that he may never know his birth name so what do we take from that?He doesn't believe that dream with Roberto was real?If you recall Roberto called him David but I guess he would sound like a nut if he tried to tell Greg and Billy that.
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Since the same thing happened to Mathias he had to have known what would happen and that Sonny would be into Kyle.He didn't tell Kyle this because then he would not have gone.The window of opportunity to skip town unnoticed might have closed.
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I don't know who's luckier Stephen and Tim or Randy. Considering how well things turned out for Stephen and Tim I think it's a no brainer for Randy to go to the same university especially since Mrs Kenner will have a room ready for him. You didn't mention if Tim's snob older sister attended the wedding
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Hiking Clifty Falls with Cliff
weinerdog commented on Altimexis's story chapter in Hiking Clifty Falls with Cliff
The details Grandpa spoke while talking about Glen I figured you had some personal experience with that I have to shake my head to the approach the medical community took back then I bet Marcy and Jeff had a very interesting conversation with Grandpa after Cliff and Grandpa returned from hiking. Outstanding story -
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I never heard how much is involved in taking the bar exam 6 hours before getting some water?Even a bad lawyer has to be pretty smart to pass that. I would worry about Stephen reaction when Tim speaks of naming their kid Donald but Stephen also said something about seeing Donnie in a dream so I guess it will be all good.
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Getting married same day as graduation wow Stephen doesn't mess around.Never using the word Dad or Mom I bet the mother was responsible for that as if saying it that way was beneath them. It's very touching that Tim never forgets about Donnie
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Return to the Land of Lincoln
weinerdog commented on Altimexis's story chapter in Return to the Land of Lincoln
It was so sad to hear what happened to Larry with his condition he was susceptible to the virus I bet he got it from some idiot who didn't wear a mask and didn't practice social distancing.But glad to see Greg hanging in there and that he found someone. This is not such a wild prediction but I see a threesome happening.I do have another gut feeling with Greg scrambling to keep the business afloat I see J.J. offering to help in some way before he leaves maybe he can be a silent partner in the store or something like that. -
Chapter 25 - Reality's Burden
weinerdog commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 25 - Reality's Burden
What a gruesome site watching bodies put in a bonfire and burn.Like Jake said it could your parents best buddy etc. and its not like these people did anything to deserve that fate -
Then she should get along really well with Tim's older sister.Maybe they already know each other .
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Conventional wisdom says usually it's the mother who knows first but not in this case could it be she did not want to know?
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That family would have fit nicely in Sodom and Gomorrah.I think this f-ed up family might be why Neil so into his music. I know this is set in another time but I still felt a little twinge when I heard Prince mentioned
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So Puppy is going to get another bottle? Steven and Puppy getting drunk together well doesn't take much of an imagination to see where this is going. While I don't want Puppy with Hunter I do feel bad for Hunter with his shitty upbringing. Do you see a chapter where Steven interacts with Joey and Jack? Possibilities are endless BTW that conversation with Mum funny stuff
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I put a chapter reaction but in reality I teared up about 80% of the chapter first when Hayden got sent back to his parents and Matt was despondent and in a funk and then when Hayden ran away and then when Matt found Hayden by that time it was happy tears.Nobody does this kind of chapter better then this author. It looks like @drsawzallgot his wish from his last chapter comment. I'm glad Mr. London was there to have the Center's lawyers look at the documents and that he found him a financial advisor that's what a father is supposed to do but we know Matt's father would have never done that.Mr London along with Trent and Trent's dad fills that void quite nicely. I think most readers are thinking this and that is now that Matt has money I can see Trent and Matt being approved in fostering Hayden especially since they work at the Center.Still a few loose ends and only one chapter to do it in😢
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As a reader I'm itching to get to the part when the right people find out about Zack's POS father but if I'm Zack I'm definitely glad this thing with Brody is happening first.
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Many things to look forward to.We see that the Grandfather is a great guy combine that with Stephen being a great guy and you think the parents would be OK but has there been a reason why Stephen has been so tight lipped about his orientation?We shall see also the difference is wealth could be an issue. I wonder how Tim's snob sister would react to that?
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We'll be here when you do God willing. As I was reading the chapter I thought to myself how did @AquariusGuyresist the urge to have an explosion at the wedding? Thank you for all the great stories
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Tim referred to Randy as a friend but when Randy asked if he could be in his wedding that tells me Randy sees Tim as an older brother. Most of the time people who are homophobic often are because their parents were but the wedding has Stephen Grandfather's blessing so it will probably be OK.
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What was the story with Tim's older sister?I I remember right then were not close,Unless she lived way on the other side of the country she should have been there. I bet Mrs. Kenner is going to miss those guys when they eventually leave. This is just in my warped imagination and we don't even know if Randy swings this way but could lightning strike twice?Could he meet somebody working on the goat farm
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All these places you mentioned you convinced me to plan a trip to St. Louis and I'm going to go to that hotel and those restaurants you mentioned and imagine J.J. and Dave being there.If we say @Altimexis sent us will we get a discount?
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Well of course George communication with them again otherwise YOU would have nothing to write about. BTW can you give me the address of the pool Jake and Ben swim at I think I'm going to be in town next time they go swimming
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What an awesome gesture Tim's Mom and Eva are doing for Randy and his Mom there will be a special place waiting for all of them
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There is way too much there for Steven and Puppy not happening only there is no way this can happen without a whole lot of complications and there is still Joey. Looking forward to the next chapter meanwhile I'll go back to eating my plastic cheeseburger
